***Away in a Manger***
 

yeah, this is for the topical shit this week, so this was the best i could stretch "Away in a Manger" and make it sound good.

flipped it into isolation and shit like that.

Beat : me
Lyrics : me
Everything : me

Lo-Fizzle

Hizzle-Bizzle

Keep it on the DOWNLOAD....

.pz.

Nice Track


Man I Would Like to use Some Of your Beats There Sick

Get Back To Me

Peace

www.soundclick.com/alcatrakz

since no one copped the package deal, they are all $25

first come first serve

cheap bastards...........lmao @ at gettin shot.......i'm love that lil intro
nice beat......samples??

wooo....i see a lil change in ya flow.....im hearin some flippen....elevatin

wasn't on topic too much........i thought it was isolation....
but still on topic if you think about it.........

everythang was you.........so.........nice everythang

holla

that was the idea of the topic, how the no money life puts u into a state of isolation...

foo'

lol

um..samples?...tryin to think....nah, i played the melodies out

.pz.

ZZZZzzzzzzzz............

nice beat........flow and lyrics nothing special........I guess I jus look for originality that stands out from the rest, but if you were trying to sound like everybody else on the east coast.........job well done.,lol........intro was coo......stay up

the beat was iight.....


lyrics is good.....i like the intro, but maybe you should add sum1 else in it....like me it a convo between two people you know...cuz gunshots pop off from the person you talkin to right?...so i was guessin u should add sum 1 there too.


this was a good for a 1:26 minute track....

nice beat, flow was dope... good voice.. nice quality... lyrics is tight... dope track..

i guess to some people concepts/topics dont matter.

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I thought this was stright, your flow rode the beat pretty decent, I like the bongos in the beat, made the whole song song full, the only thing that brings it down is your delivery, it dosn;t really match the punch of the beat to me, decent shit though.......

i like that kermit the frog shit lol



you make that beat?

^yes, to THIS one that you was supposed to respond to..lol..and the kermit one...

idiot..

i love you though!

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listenind as i reply


this beat is fuckin raw

feelin ya prersence and delivery

voice is sicc chorus is ill

like to hear dope shit and this was dope

i like ya style

hit me up for a collab sumtime


pz

abstrax00@aol.com

nice beats ya got there.. mine are still better :).. other wise nice track

ohh and dooo you make you own beat.. hit me back on that one.. cause i make my own..

Peace

^im sure your beats ARE better than the 15 minute beat i used (which i was giving away to people), check my other beats, but um...when someone says

beat : me

they usually mean they did the beat...lol

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nice track good as allways

intro is koo ...wasnt gettin it a first but it was koo...beat is nice ...little mellow shit ...ya voice mixes wit it well...lyrics are hot ...ya keep wit the same emotion it was nice ...the hook is koo...especially rthe end...nice little track...peep back ..thanx...

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...threadid=101883

beat was coo

lyrics was coo

flow was coo
everything was coo
na mean

i wasnt really feelin tha hook tho-

too short also
aight keep doin ya thing

yo peep mines too
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101554
good lookin