split vs. Crooked-comical
 

10 lines/bars

due 30 minutes after check in
no crew
hate
dr
or any of that bullshit

now this battle is gonna be my deepest and darkest secret
i mean who wouldn't be ashamed at how easily he was defeated
when im spit my rhymes, i leave cats addicted like a cigarette
but his shits cheap, leave em feignin like a stick of nicarette
its the holidays, shouldn't you be out singing christmas carrols
cause raps a dirty game, and this cats style is pretty sterile
my lyrics ancient, been around as long as the globes been spinnin
but his shit was over just before "IN THE BEGINNING"
(little god voice, AHHM)
my raps have content, enough to breach this kids hull
his shits so empty, its got this whole thread reading null...

10 lines of pure venom, you gonna check in

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Sorry i had to clsoe up another battle first

ill keystyle right now man

be done very shortely

Peace

aight dont take too long lol, i spent maybe 10 minutes on that verse............................................. .........................................

Yo Tried To Keep Christmas Theme to It Cuz todays Christmas

Peace


That Is 10 Lines Of Pure Venom ??? , You Little Bitch your Fake/
Only Venom You Handle Is From Yur Boyfriends TROUSER SNAKE/
Cause You Dont Get Gurls , Your Dirty, Gross And Very Un Steril/
When It Comes To Gurls U Cant Even Get A Christmas"CARROL"/

^ CARROL Is A Gurls Name , Get It ? Anyways

I Am Destroying You Simplely , Its Nothing , Its As Easy As Pie/
This Whack Line Is Proven How Much I Am Actually Tryin To Try/
It Is Christmas , But I Aint Gunna Give You No Mercy , NO WAY/
I Would Give You This Win , But It Would Totaly Ruin My Holiday/
Skills You Very Much Lack, Ill Have You Kissen My Ass Crack . . .
So Much Itll Seem Like Theres Misseltoe Hangin Over My Back/

crooked comical, i bombin yo' ass with atomicals
have you reachin for your missletoe lookin very un-anatomical

bah lol, im not gonna go off, lol, good shit, good shit, dont just that line ^^, was bored lol

. very close shit.....COmical one thing i dont like is your mix of caps .. just makes shit an effort to read. And you did feed of his verse.... no hote .. my vote is Split.................. not by much.....

vote for me to people......

peace

didn't you battle comical? if you did, we can't accept this vote, wouldn't be fair,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Exactly .. And Thank You

fair enough............................................ .................................................. .................................................. ......i got nothing againsed comical i liek his shit...................... no hate........

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its a good battle, dont need hate votes, i don't wouldn't want it on my record that i won or lost a battle because of hate

Uppin # 2 ************************************************** ************************************************** ***********************************

Open= CC
Close= CC
Floh= Tied
Personals= CC
Punches= CC
Overall= CC

Vote= CC

Explaination= Foreal read them again, and see who's was better...

Aight a nice battle boys. Hope you all had a good christmas. A decent battle nonetheless.
Laydown:
Opening:SplitSoul
Punches:SplitSoul
Personals:SplitSoul
Multis:Tied
Metaphors:CrookedComical
Vocabulary:SplitSoul
Enjoyability:CrookedComical
Closing:CrookedComical
Overall:SplitSoul

Vote:SplitSoul nice job. Merry christmas bois.

I would appreciate if you voted on this battle. Thanx.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101438

he forgot to vote^^............................................ .................................................. .....................

voted sorry............................................. ....................
.................................................. ...............................Merry Christmas

COMICAL HOW CAN U TALK SHIT ON ME BOY U SUCK? STERIL? ITS FUCKING "STERILE" U STUPID FUCK. STERILE AND CARROL, OH MAN THATS FUCKEN LYRICAL GOLD MINE, IT EVEN MATCHES THE HOLIDAYS BONUS POINTS TO THIS FAGGOT LORD NEWBIE CAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!! SPLIT GETS MY VOTE CAUSE HE DIDNT BITE OFF LYRICS FROM FUCKEN COMICAL THOUGH HE MIGHTVE IF HE WENT 2ND

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Everyone Ignore Wood John Hes just Mad Cause He Sucks And Noone On This board Likes Him And He Dosent Know how to shut His CAPS LOCK OFF !

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UPPIN # 4 ************************************************** ************************************************** *******************

vote - Comical

I didn't find soul's very strengtly...

for example, his opener "hit" was when he said somthing about comical bein defeated and somthing like that, other than that it was filler..

..then onto his second line he opens it with "I" <--- got you addicted like cigerettes..which is more filler and kinda weak wording in my 2 cents. the rest was ahhh...aiight.

Ima have to give it to Comical, he wasn't good either but he was direct when dissing his opponent, never goin off the topic 2 much..so

vote - Comical

uppin, hit this up, leave a link, and ill vote on your shit.............................................. .................................................. ..

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split wins this due 2 the fact his punches hit alot harder!! he also had a good structure and flow!!

cc u had good structure but ur punches wasnt hitting hard enough

vote- split

lmao im sorry but crooked took this in his first 4 bars, pure comedy his punches were funny.. flow was steady, other cats flow was good too he had some kool lines but its the comedy in crooked's shit that took this.. he had a more entertaining verse with original shit so vote-crooked

Well, Crooked fed a little...

But it didn't say not to in tha rules, so fuck it, I guess.

Much better verse, much harder and funnier punches, better wordplay, and a nice holiday theme...

Win this for Crooked.

That opener coulda won this alone.

That was funny as shit to me.

Peace

ohhhhh close, comical fed a bit but they didnt say otherwise, his opener and closer were gold, ive seen split spit better shit than that too it wasnt that good comical takes this one from good punches n open/closer-----not a hate vote at all-------------------