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cRooklynite vs. McProfit
Let's get it poppin....
10 lines no crews no hate and nothing else I'm too new to know about! Just bring your skills to the battle... No Bullshit! McProfit wins due to banning of opponent -strobe |
aight checkin in................................................ ..
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You spit first... I got burned the last time I did...
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Crooklynite?Names so sad I dunno if you can put up a fight/
Youz a dumbfuck it's a "B" not a "C' I think I just put out your light/ Come and charge me like your try, but you like a newborn I put you down in the dirrt and you cry/ This is no battle of intelligence this isn't even a battle of perserverence/ You can't put out, you can't hold out when I finished with you, you vocal chord will be ripped out/ This happens to be a lyrical mystique how I rapped, whipped and kicked your ass without using me teeth/ I can mouth words and make them sound betta, youz like a slab of white chedda/ Your not even worth my time, your rhymes are just a waste of line, I'm out plz don't waste there's or mine, go look in the dictionary and find "redifine". |
Now tell me who on the Internet waan test me\\
I'm about to turn a profit on this wack MC\\ You cats don't give me props but I'm breaking down the door\\ who you think laced your momma back in eighty-four\\ I'm tired of fucking with little kids with wack titles\\ You a outcast son cause your rhymes are all recitals\\ New to this shit... I aint even begun to spit\\ But I know pulled this win from the protector on your pocket\\ Save all the drama you just a fucking Nerd\\ It's Christmas Time Nigga, On My Table Your Mom's The Bird!\\ |
Good shit... Good luck Yo... May the best MAN win :)
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Aight haha nice verse ........... I enjoyed yours more than mine.....
I think that's a bad thing oh well funnie shit. Peace! |
Yo
Flow = Profit Structure = both Entertainment = Both Closer and Opener = Profit Punches = Profit by a Lil VOTE = PROFIT REPAY FAVOUR PLEASE FOR REAL http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101454 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101423 |
nice battle props ta both of yall
opener-profit closer-profit by a lil flow-crook punches-profit structure-tie entertain-tie vote- mcprofit repay the favor mann i took mah time out http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101454 |
Starting to feel hated on... but it's all good... I'm New to this game... Thought this was bout skills... not just a nigga's name!
I appreciate the respect though Profit! |
mann.............i gave u props man u just need ta elevate mann.....
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My bad yo... that wasn't intended like that.... it wasn't about you not giving me props... I've seen Profit on here saying way Hotter shit than he was spittin at me... so I'm just a little shocked at the score. It's all good though... this is what we here for.
I appreciate the props Petrafy. For Real. |
Uppin #1 - For Votes
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it's aight bro remember your new. And when i spit it was about 2:00 a.m. so I dunno I'm tired and shit. Relax I need to elevate just as much as the next person. You did a good job really. Besides I only have 2 votes? Merry Christmas. . . . .
Do you hear that? ...........It's the winds of change.............. |
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Can Y'all Vote Please So That We Can Go On To Do More Battles?
We Can Only Do Two Active Battles At Once, The Rules Say. UPPIN #5 (FINAL) - FOR VOTES :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: :::::: :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: :::::: :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: :::::: |
uppin (1)..............
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crooklynite.......dis iz no hate or d/r vote.....i swear..but i say crooklynite took dis cuz.......
structure: CROOKLYNITE(no doubt) flow: crooklynite opener: MC closer: MC punches: crook by a lil' humour: crook vote: crook..........no hate Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote. -strobe |
uppin (2)
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Profit you stuck me on that intelligence perserverance non-rhyme
made your flow choppy Crooklynite nice punches but you have to elevate with more complex verses... You had the better verse in this battle Vote Crooklynite |
Mc Profit, you gotta find somethin else to rap on. Get some better material from this guy.
Crook, yo you gotta bring the fire more. I know you could bring more than that. |
uppin (03)
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Profit
Elevate, thats all i got to say.. Im not sayin ur that bad or hatin.. Just tellin u that, u should elevate, I could go on tellin u to work on punches & personals, & all those other 'catagories'...But.. truth is, u need to work on ur overall writing skills. You had a ok verse..nothin special..some OK lines.. Overall Below Average - Ok.. Crooklyn ^ That goes for you to..elevate.. But, u had the better verse & upper hand in punches.. ..This time. You where slightly better then Profit, but slightly.. ..Is better to.. so.. vote Crooklyn 1 last vote needed, click here to vote & Return the favour.. |
Crook-ok flow,punches,vocab, not really consistant,ok wordplay
Profit-better puncches,flow and vocab,more consistant Vote:Profit please hit dis up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...365#post1031365 |
Well
crooklynite had better structure, even with all the // He took the following catagories struc wordplay flow personals Mc Profit took the followin catagories meta's multi's sust Overall I give my vote to Crook. Now gentlemen...It is cordial to vote on a man's battle after he took the time to vote on yours. Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote. -strobe |
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