~LyRiCaL-JeZuS~ vs. -Jacka-
 

10-20 lines deadline one hour after check in

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Cum on people drop ur lines i wanna c wat u2 are like cus neither of u hav had no battles!check my battles now my lastest 1 is sweet!Dizzy hommel 'vs' Cuthroat.Peace

AIGHT YO YO

My smart spitting is hard hitting....yo shit bore-me
I dont gotta try,casue yo corny lines...gon win this battle for-me
This geek is out of my league....wit his weak vo-cab
U dont even got the basics.....like a boxer wit no-jab
This prick think he got skill....cause he can rhyme a few words
Jacka gets shit on by MCs...more then parked cars by birds
This merkin is on!....cause when I drop this bomb
They gon find Jacka in the same hole they found Saddam
Winning Verbally,physicly,telapathicly...it dont matter how
After this,I have the readers scream the same thing I had yo moma scream....WOW!

dizzy homie maybe u should check better, me and him both got battles fool./.............................

uhh..r u foreal..lol..
u still spit about sadam..an moms an shit..thats a bit played..

aite..

This kid claims he got game but u spittin for no reason..
its obvious ill get the win cuz your a wak version of jezus..

leave this rap shit alone cuz my flowz are suicidal..
ya punches fallen short like midget ski divers..

im a fire starter.heat i continusly blasted it..
the way i author flames like books of matches..

its tragic cuz my words are so deadly u losing ya health..
U bouta receive a L so just unfasten ya belt..

cuz ya verse is seekin for help.just sum nursery rhymes..
this kids spits the same shit about moms seventy times..

my heavenly rhymes arent easy to contain..
cuz ya 0-0 record is bout to be stained..

votes...

it was a fast spit what can i say i started like 10 min before the deadline..........oh well i still had multies and punches

plus there aint no feeding buddy so u cant spit about what i jus said so correct me if im wrong but wouldnt that DQ u lol

uppin............................................. ...................vote vote vote vote vote vote...

wut u mean there aint no feeding u got to say that in teh rules bitch
dont be a cry baby...lol..wow..

u gotta say in ya rules no feeding u cant say it after i spit///
lol//so no iaint dqed..bitch
let the votes begin..........................................

uppin#2uppin@ rb
uppin for sum votes drop a link il get to it if ican
uppni for sum votes damn sleep on it..just found a new meaning.
im gunna blow
so sumoen vote....

ending was blah
i didnt come hard at all looking for a good competitor to battle for this shit
i no id fuk sum vets on this site up

uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........................vote

no feeding is in the website rules lol go read them.....................................ill let it go but jus so u know

Your both whack....i vote for jesus because he actually had a litlte bit of multis.....your both played....Vote-jesus

werd.....dis battle waz a lil' weak.....no hate.....
punches :jezus
flow: jezus
multis: jacka
humour: jesuz
opening: jacka
closing: jezus

Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-Cprogress

dankstas record is 0-2 and he sayin WE whack lol
that shit was done in 10 min buddy boy
u couldnt top that if u were immortal
fuckin ballerina....lol

lil tagger.........YOU! im not gon say shit u dropped and honest vote

aite..breakdown...

jezus dont im me..

My smart spitting is hard hitting....yo shit bore-me
I dont gotta try,casue yo corny lines...gon win this battle for-me
^^uhh average for a newb
This geek is out of my league....wit his weak vo-cab
U dont even got the basics.....like a boxer wit no-jab
^^played
This prick think he got skill....cause he can rhyme a few words
Jacka gets shit on by MCs...more then parked cars by birds
aite ////lol

This kid claims he got game but u spittin for no reason..
its obvious ill get the win cuz your a wak version of jezus..

not bad use of his name..sorta like his opener tho..

leave this rap shit alone cuz my flowz are suicidal..
ya punches fallen short like midget ski divers..
^^ nice punch heard it sum where before tho..dont no were

im a fire starter.heat i continusly blasted it..
the way i author flames like books of matches..

nice use of wordplay.....hmm filler...atleast the first line was

its tragic cuz my words are so deadly u losing ya health..
U bouta receive a L so just unfasten ya belt..
Lol.........

cuz ya verse is seekin for help.just sum nursery rhymes..
this kids spits the same shit about moms seventy times..
sum aite wordplay an mutlies...

my heavenly rhymes arent easy to contain..
cuz ya 0-0 record is bout to be stained..

hmmm i guess..its a closer.


both were aite....u both need to elevate...But

Jacka took it for that ski diver line..

i have spoke

I personaly like Jesuses verse.
He just has a flow that easier to follow, which makes his punches
stronger. No hate -
Vote - Lyrical jesus

^^ r u serious..ride that dik...bro
foreal read the verse jezus is wak as fuk/\

uppin for sum real votes............................................. ......

Lyrical Jezus
My smart spitting is hard hitting....yo shit bore-me
I dont gotta try,casue yo corny lines...gon win this battle for-me

Good Personall.... Hard hittin punch

This geek is out of my league....wit his weak vo-cab
U dont even got the basics.....like a boxer wit no-jab
Good Punch

This prick think he got skill....cause he can rhyme a few words
Jacka gets shit on by MCs...more then parked cars by birds

Aightt..kinda played

This merkin is on!....cause when I drop this bomb
They gon find Jacka in the same hole they found Saddam

Weak

Winning Verbally,physicly,telapathicly...it dont matter how
After this,I have the readers scream the same thing I had yo moma scream....WOW!

Played....Weak....BOOO
OVERALL= 15/20



Jacka
This kid claims he got game but u spittin for no reason..
its obvious ill get the win cuz your a wak version of jezus..

A lil played... ok punch

leave this rap shit alone cuz my flowz are suicidal..
ya punches fallen short like midget ski divers..

Lol... wordplay

im a fire starter.heat i continusly blasted it..
the way i author flames like books of matches..

...mmmmhmmmmm.

its tragic cuz my words are so deadly u losing ya health..
U bouta receive a L so just unfasten ya belt..

DOPE ... straight punch

cuz ya verse is seekin for help.just sum nursery rhymes..
this kids spits the same shit about moms seventy times..

Personal... straight poppin

my heavenly rhymes arent easy to contain..
cuz ya 0-0 record is bout to be stained..

I think he meant substaind....But i got what he meant... nice punch
Overall.....15.5/20
Both came a lil weak......
But i thought jacka edged it just barely
His flow was a lil better....

Vote-Jacka

uppin on this shit
i think i killed this kid wit one of my punches but lets do this..

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thas funny casue I wasnt sayin shit bout u but u keep talkin shit even tho I fuckin scribbled that in 10 min and u sayin u killed me lol
let me put it this way .....if u get the votes IT AINT CASUE U WON, ITS JUST CASUE I LOST...... yo rhyme is shit and U TRIED!

WHY THE FUCK DOES IT SAY THERS 4 VOTES WHEN U GOT 2 AND I GOT 1...... THAS ONLY 3???????????????????????????????

uppin damn u no i beat u jezu s read my verse..
my bad for talkinm shit..

u didnt say shit tome
but u no i had the better verse u got mulites an THats it

Breakdown

punches jack: ya punches fallen short like midget ski divers..
this was nice// lyrical your shit was good but some coulda been flipped better bro

personals both: my heavenly rhymes arent easy to contain..
cuz ya 0-0 record is bout to be stained//Jacka gets shit on by MCs...more then parked cars by birds

metas lyrical: U dont even got the basics.....like a boxer wit no-jab// jack you lacked alot

flow both: both was consistant and through out but lyrical dont rhyme the same words...example...blah blah me, blah blah me

wordplay jack: the way i author flames like books of matches// lyrical you had some that woulda worked but you didnt consist of making it work

overall good battle pretty even throughout but i gotta go with jack

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nah its all fair if they say u get the vote hey thats fine wit me
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closed... neither one of you follow the uppin rule. read the rules. -feeble @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@