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TheUnderRated vs. PaYce
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See i'm the PaYce car so you constantly stay behind me....
when i disgrace with one bar lil head plz don't mind me... you stumblin i mean text be falling off my screen.... New to the RB and pissed you ain't got a team.... Where you from son guess your ass don't even know... got em on the run too scared to fill any lines in his bio... course your name is a punchline its from dawsons creek... by capitalizing part your name don't mean your game ain't weak.. I read your shit literally worplay won't no one get fuck i'm about.... i mean mine cause even if i heimliched your ass you wouldn't spit that shit out.... i'll take this shit picture finish you think only ahead by a hair... think you kept pace but things in the rearview are closer than they appear..... one.... good battle peace... |
Your overrated punk...Just another one of dem RB cheaters,
Even those ur verse stunk...Dickriders helped u beat Meters! I dont care what your record says...U aint no special creature, been on here for 20 days...n still labelled...Mcdonalds Cleaner! always under-neath them bleachers...u cant get a higher-ratin So u asked out a teacher...to hide its the herbs u been datin! ill status fakin...couldnt b high rated even wit a canibus pound couldnt get the crown...so he lied and made up the MC town! you came soft at me...like a tank in the field without ammunition Before facin me, I think you should of stopped by the Technician! =========================== 2) dickriders helped him beat meters 4) His profile is fille with "MC" 5) If you dont understand ur dumb 6) Teacher=technician, he called him out 8) his location 10) technician he called out |
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underated took this 1......payce u had sum ill lines but underated had the more experience and it paid off wit sum hard hitting punches and another good opener......payce u had a ok finisher and sum good personals but i tink unerated took this 1.............no hate
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Underated took this in my books
Just stronger punches and more personals... return the fevour please-honestly http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101620 |
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No punch .....at all n00bish bar.. dont let me see it again. Quote:
i mean no fucking punch where did you punch..? and weak vocab Quote:
No punch huge filler.. Quote:
ehh funn line dawsons creek payce rofl but yet weak punches ok flow thou Quote:
ehh this was wack. Quote:
weak finsher it looks like your writing a poem or something... Your overrated punk...Just another one of dem RB cheaters, Even those ur verse stunk...Dickriders helped u beat Meters! [/quote] Good punch. Quote:
eh played line but nice punch Quote:
good punch there nice i think that has already won it.,... Quote:
ehh you looked like you were giving up on the skill i know you have... Quote:
eh not bad finsher decet punch couuld have been better. V=Payce He Knew How to Throw A Solid Punch Unlike TUR And TUR You Have D/r's ... |
no thats no true its just that what you called NO PUNCH.....IS A PERSONAL...which is another category people look at when evaluationg......you haven't voted for me in one single battle ...so i could suspect you of a hate vote talkin about D/Rin...........................do me a favor and don't vote on my shit and i won't vote on yours hater...................uppinnXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XX33333333333
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i dint hate n00b... you verse sucked got post it in the IR see what feeble says n00b...
it was no hater... Mc Aines voted for you as quick as your dick was up on this battle and the one you had b4 with meters... OWNED. |
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OK you mother fuckin dick ridders...
Payce took this the other guys flow was chopy as fuck so no matter what he said it had no fuckin flow to it. and punchs shit they were fuckin dumb and some didnt make much sence... Payce came wit some serous flow to it... punchs made sence and kept you wanting to read more. damn I could barly read the other dudes shit cauz it was not intersting did not keep me wanting anything. GOD DAMN DICK RIDDIN Vote Payce |
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I'm not going to let this n00b voting bullshit happen again.
Fuck that. This is what went down, i'm not a n00b, i know what the fuck's going on. Structure- Easily Payce Punches- Payce Flow- Tie, Rated's flow has been better Personals- UnderRated always comes with personals but this is a tie because Payce hit hard too. Complexity- Payce (n00bs vote lower the higher the complexity!) Win- Payce. No hate though i'm bitter. Just an honest vote from someone who understands battles. |
Don't worry PaYcE these are all dick-ryding faggets...
As Tox pointed out you had ALOT more punches, and al of them came alot more harder... Break-Down... Flow - PaYce, was structured better, which made it flow better Punches - PaYce, some were played by both cats, but i felt that PaYce had more and the ones he did have hit alot harder Personals - PaYce, had alot more, and were alot better, Underated's were pretty lame and didn't form together to well.. suggestion payce you shouldn't have to explain your personals Multies - Obviously PaYce, by his type of rhyme scheme, his rhyme scheme almost always guarantees him flow and multies. If your a newb take a close look and you'll see. Vocab - Both were lacking on this, and need to elevate Originality - Even, some of lines by both of you were played, but overall alright verses... Over-All - PaYce murdered this bitch, Underated i don't know how you got that record, obviously dick-ryding, or that was a really shit verse... |
And BTW TheunderD/R I Just Signed Payce Now To The Crew So Dont Say Shit About Crew Votes n00b............................................
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hey tox fuck you and your whole crew go a suck a dick....and meters when you beat me i didn't talk about dick riyding take your loss like a man................ and youi bet me 5 to 1...........you definitily didn't have a better verse that time so quit bitchin and deal...............payce i onno if you know tox or wtf but this voting shit is Bullshit but you can have it cause i take losses like a man not like a lil bitch ...this ain't even my thing............ToX FUCK YOUR WEAK ASS CREW............and never ever vote on my shit again you dick ryde pack so hard if he pisses its coming out your mouth you fucking netcee don't shit about it.............
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he's gonna get dqued payce upped your battle six times the max is 5
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Vote: Payce
UnderRated: Yo shit was really basic. I mean I know you have experience enough to use the right structure, punch and multi techniques... but this was a really weak showing from you. Just my two cents. Payce: I see you doing your thing son... Good solid battle verse from you... On-time and hard-hitting punches. Good Structure. I might have to battle both of you dudes one day... just to show who reigns supreme. Nah... just kidding. Good battle. Congrats Payce. |
uppin this for the last time vote for payce so we can close this and i can continue my weak battle he won ...n contest....better punches and flow just give him his last vote nice battle payce....and good luck in cancerous curse....
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underrated got this one...
payce had a few things but it was mostly weak. underrated had it line for line, each one with a good punch. better flow, too. vote: underrated |
LOL TOX ur a real asshole man, and youre from ENGLAND, no such fucken thing as a good English rapper so dont even FRONT-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Ha just kidding Tox, im just soar cause you busted up my whole verse saying it was basically dogshit on the front lawn, ANYWAY I would say payce took this cause his shit was more complicated, it wasnt simple and shit so it wasnt laymans raps, Underrated this isnt a hate vote man its just he came in more experienced and thats what this game is all about GOOD BATTLE ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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dis iz not a d/r or hate vote.......but clearly UR took dis.....
he had better flow and punches....which matta da most. he waz off on hiz structure but he still came out wit it....dis waz a nice battle............*~1~*...no hate |
ima end this im wit TOX on this one PaYce took it!
underestimated couldn't throw a punch if he wanted i think he had one punch but it was weak as hell! VOTE: PaYce(Punches, Flow, Multies) |
"See i'm the PaYce car so you constantly stay behind me....
when i disgrace with one bar lil head plz don't mind me..." ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ the underated's opener -kind of obvious, and kind of weak- "Your overrated punk...Just another one of dem RB cheaters, Even those ur verse stunk...Dickriders helped u beat Meters!" ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ paYce's opener - decent punch, vocab was lower level, this was half punch half personal- .................................................. .................................................. .. you stumblin i mean text be falling off my screen.... New to the RB and pissed you ain't got a team.... Where you from son guess your ass don't even know... got em on the run too scared to fill any lines in his bio... course your name is a punchline its from dawsons creek... by capitalizing part your name don't mean your game ain't weak.. I read your shit literally worplay won't no one get fuck i'm about.... i mean mine cause even if i heimliched your ass you wouldn't spit that shit out.... i'll " ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ the underated's whole mid section -this all seemed like filler to me, I was sort of feelin' the dawson's creek punch.....keep elevatin' dog- I dont care what your record says...U aint no special creature, been on here for 20 days...n still labelled...Mcdonalds Cleaner! always under-neath them bleachers...u cant get a higher-ratin So u asked out a teacher...to hide its the herbs u been datin! ill status fakin...couldnt b high rated even wit a canibus pound couldnt get the crown...so he lied and made up the MC town! ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ paYce's whole mid section -this had a good amount of punches.....and a personal or two I was feelin' most of these lines...but some of the vocab could have been better put.- .................................................. ............................................... i'll take this shit picture finish you think only ahead by a hair... think you kept pace but things in the rearview are closer than they appear..... ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ the underated's finisher -sorta played out, and punched weak.....I feel this is where you lost my vote.- you came soft at me...like a tank in the field without ammunition Before facin me, I think you should of stopped by the Technician! ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ paYce's finisher -not the best closer.....but better than underated's.....since I'm new I don't know what that last line meant...but it doesn't change my mind....- VOTE-paYce ^^^^^^^^ now come vote on my battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101633 |
in my opinion Payce took this one. UR didnt really come hard with his punches....i guess it was kind of difficult cuz he didnt know who payce was or seomthing so u just clowned on the fact he didnt fill out his profile??(doesnt really hit hard)...search his posts next time. Payce u came pretty good i liked ur verse....it was a good read. u hit him wit some harder punches....and wit that personal at the beginning really did it. nice battle...
my vote Payce hit up my battle please guys http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102031 |
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