MohSaj_Heru vs. Majestic_MC
 

Just restating the rules:

No Crew / Hate / DR Votes
Votes must be explained
30 minutes from when we both check in we drop.
10 Bars Min. / No Max.
3-0 poll votes = (KO) if not we go to normal 5 votes
No biting, recycling or pre-written stuff

I think that's it...
If I missed anything let me know.

Good Luck Bruh!

Checking IN.... Waiting on you my man.
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Checking in. . . soz took my time, was eating!

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smash this dude in the mouth like he was 50 cent im leaving him with 'BUCKed' teeth
you couldnt TESTES flows if i BOWLed your TEMP in - your burning red like indian chiefs
slay your waist to prove u aint worthy of keeping to dispose of your weak flows
corrode your arrows like bows attached to GRAMS, this dude cud never hit me with a 'KILO blow'
staple your lips to ure toe so u can taste this beat - atatching achilles round by philly so u can say ure the 'FRESH PRINCE' of streets
u cudnt be 'BEL AIR'(blair) if i gave u BUSH to wax your teeth to absorb the shit that u speak
this dude takes a fortnight to right 2 week spits, still falling behind like midgets with swollen clits
stick my hand threw your stomach to get this. . . throwing your spine out the windows to leave you in back~fits
pratt~hits? You couldnt hurt me if i gave u agent orange and leader wallace to attack me with surprise spits
strp you down pits to leave u infesting with snakes~tits. . . so ure teeth become sharp and i can charge u with CANINE lisps (dogs, also teeth)
you couldnt 'BUCK in'(brooklyn) a free hotel with money thos guys so 'unwanted'
like an american film hes blown outta preportion. . . you ever thought it?
Suffering numonia like grannies with hyperthemia u frettin the beats
could take sweets from kids if they fed you them like force feeding vegetarians meat

Style change :

Could slap you but i dont like to 'smart' "professionals'
especially when their flows 'tackier' than 18 stone overweight lesbians
manifest your chest to prove your in cardiac arrest
you couldnt wear cuffs if your hands were IMPREST!
smash your ass like i was 'whacking' ya lass wid glass
to cut up her pretty face and leave her in an acid~bath
you want the AFTERmath? i'm guna divide your limbs like a frog at the end of science class


Peace!

My flow's inspired, as if I was hired to get wannabe's straight fired\\
Should've retired... Majesty, definitely not royalty, you will be Sired\\

Battle's over before it begins, My skillz change the loyalty of your friends\\
No crew votes here, but have no fear, u never had a chance anyway, comprehend?\\

As I ascend, rising above the forum... peeping your lack of decorum, I wonder\\
Did you really think you'd beat me... or was your bitch slap a serious blunder\\

This flow is thunder, meant to test the hearts of men & bring out your fears\\
The only en"lightning" thing you've done is battle a man with 10+ your years\\

Come here son let me teach you some things, Real Rap ain't bout Bling & Shine\\
Aint about how much paper you got... It's about evolving your style of rhyme\\

Battles keep your lyrical swords sharp, but this bout should leave no doubt\\
That the next time you see New to RB, realize that the title means w/o clout\\

So when you lose this battle to this lyrical phenom, run & sound the alarm\\
There's a new spiritual MC, who's checking for fake chickens this RB farm\\

I don't mean harm, Takin you back to the day where the king bowed to the priest\\
Acknowledging a force that was greater than him, I play God in this here masterpiece\\

So remember little man, there's a divine plan & without a fam there's no hope for you\\
Pack your bags & lube up your d*ck, run, find a clique that will let you in their crew\\

Cause MohSaj Heru's on the scene, I know you feel this son, you won't be the only dun\\
Don't be suprised, if when the votings done, that the final score reads 5 minus 1\\ (5-1)

Uppin on dis

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Good battle son... Let's see to who goes the spoils...

Let's Get Some Votes In This House!!!

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Ok well i cant poll vote but here,

vocab---heru
wordplay---MC
set up----heru
flow---heru
punches---mc

my vote would go to HERU

Please see this thread on what makes a good vote.
-Cprogress

aight aight battle, some nice lines, speche lliking the opena from majestic red cheifs an all.......nice. Fa'low an structure needed alil work. An complexity were to over proritised, heru, ha the better punches IMO, slightly better flow. So i gotta vot heru.

return the votin favour.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101657

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1) I dont think you red both verse to be honest because
i) How did he have better vocab than me??
ii) How the f00k dis his flow better than myn? Myn could be threw together into audio str8 away. . . i dont think his could.
iii) He had better setups?? I always thought that it was wordplay which sets up punches. . . and you voted me for wordplay.

I'm leaving this site, seens asthough non of you seem to be able to vote accuarately on keystyles!

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Flow-Definitely heru peiced together very well just need more creativity

Creativity-MC

Structure- Heru had that down

Punches MC-a little to unstructered for maximum effect (*nice* force feed vegetarians meat-lol)

MC that style change was weak though gotta give the battle to HEru

Vote Heru