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Se7eN v.s A-DueCe-26mad3
iight rules:
No hate or crew votes 12 lines or more Time limit: within 2 days u spit first so go |
ok im new to this site so my style maybe a lot different then every1 else's cuz im used to a different type of textcein but i hope it aint 2 much of a difference. So here goes:
When se7en found out he was battling me, he ate the *whole clip* to his *head* so now he’s SWEATIN BULLETS,* u the wackest on the site but that dun mean I’m *holding back,* I’m *swinging my hardest* so u GETTING *FULL HITS* Ur *punches r so weak*, its not cuz your *shooting blanks* its cuz your *pulling a trigger* on an *EMPTY CLIP* when u clicked the *send button* on your *spit* it was like u *flushed the toilet* cuz u *SENT ME SHIT* I have so many *styles* of textcein, I can son u every time, in *SIX WAYS* When u *ejaculate* your spit, it leaves the voters *nauseous* like *sex* from *SICK GAYS* u say your more of a battle rapper then a freestyle, what r u retarded those r both the SAME Go ahead and work on the *mechanics* of your spit and put out a *demo* cuz u aint meeting FAME The worse thing to happen to rap was on December 31, 19-EIGHTY EIGHT Unlike u I dun sit on my comp, I got a life that’s y I said I MAYBE LATE I’m ripping your *tail* off, pulling out your *fur,* it should be considered *animal cruelty* the way I’m *MURDERIN THIS CAT* My rhymes make it *round the bases,* they *hitting homeruns* and *MY WORDS ARE IN THIS BAT* PS half of this battles is personals so cheCc his profile and my callout incase u get confused or sumptin. ~1~ |
Ayo,
Dawg, I do have a life bitch, I have a wife and a fucked up kid/ I'm battlin' one right now dawg, which one, it's your pick/(shit) I juss made a spark, so u wouldn't get lost in the dark/ It's difficult, how 2 start, when I'm battlin' a gangsta retard/ Blue or red, still dawg, that shit juss ain't gonna help/ You going str8 to hell, after this lost, cause you gonna kill urself/ You juss wrote me a love letter, still that shit juss wasn't better/ Your gay, wack, and so dumb you'd drown in a desert/ Lyrically, wat eva your name is, will always spit lame shit/ He'd suck dick smoother, if someone told him 2 ^ his game shit/ I'll take this battle, cut your shit, so dawg juss fuck this/ And slice your neck, wit the razor I shave my nutz wit/ |
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flow- A-DueCe-26mad3
punches- A-DueCe-26mad3 stucture- se7en punches- A-DueCe-26mad3 personals- A-DueCe-26mad3 vote- A-DueCe-26mad3 vote on this - Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote. -Cprogress |
opener-duece
punches-tie personals-7 metas-7 multies-tie vocab-hmmpph-tie finisher-7 good battle but 7 takes it in my opinion. just had a better overall verse. No Hate Just a vote Thank You Peace Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote. -Cprogress |
Deuce
Cultivate your structure, those stretched bars.. Are hard to read n look immature - herbish.. As for your content, lacked solid punches & or.. Personals.. also all the other catagory's.. Wordplay etc, where hardly included. Seven Better structure..better punches.. More wit & creativity.. Overall, just better battle verse. Not great, but alot better then Deuce's.. vote:Seven Click her to vote & Return the favour... |
yo
in my veiw 7 takes this with better structure flow pounches i think it was harder opener closer vote 7 no hate jus a vote check out my battles in sig peace I know your vote didn't count because you can't poll yet, but if you did vote, it would have been disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote. -Cprogress |
ok so thats 1-0 se7en still uppin 4 votes. and i dun wanna seem like im complainin or nuttin but sum1 said i didnt have personals or sumptin but i did. if u read se7en's profile or w/e then ud see that i used shit from it so where do u get that i didnt use personals. But its all good i aint complainin but that just makes it seem like u didnt read my spit or sumptin but w/e i dun care. UPPIN
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Deuce
nice flow..vocab was good... punches where good ..... and so was ur personals.... ur bars where fairly strectched.... creativity etc was good coulda been better.... give u 8/10 Se7en good stucture ur bars wherent streched.. fairly Weak punches and personals... the elements used in a battle are lacked... ur creativity was poor.... give u 6.5/10 nice battle lads VOTE: DUECE |
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Se7eN
gets my vote came wit better punches an overall a better verse.... i need u to vote on this battle, only sum1 with a 100 posts can vote. Ive already won, but cant get the win till the poll is finished......peace im out, please........it needs to end http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101657 |
Deuce --
A different style, not a lot of rhymes, and that costs some points in my mind, but there were a few good punches despite the missed rhyme. Pretty clever shit. Se7en -- pretty standard, but pretty weak. not really any good punches. both were pretty weak, but deuce had more, so... vote: deuce Return the favor-- http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101943 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101934 |
2-2 uppin. wut r we goin up to 4 votes? dam we need some poll votes. and thx 2 the ppl that have voted so far, even to the ones whos votes got d/qed.
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duece:
ya had a steady consistent flow good wordplay for the most part some stuff u shouldnt have been starring Punches were good and pretty hard hitting, liked the personals Se7en: ya had an okay flow not really hard hitting punches basic in my eyes and nothing really stood out other than that Vote: Duece, for harder hitting punches, a more consistency in flow, and a more complex verse and use of battle elements |
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Seven wins this battle easily...
He knew how to drop a decent piece where on the other hand deuce had asterisks and all kind of other shit in his drop. His punches were played and he needs to elevate. Seven I suggest not taking any challenges with people under 100 posts. You run the risk of battling a weak newb everytime. My vote. Seven I voted... I would appreciate if you did the same... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102157 |
uppin x5, this is my last one, i need one more for a KO, but I need people 2 vote me or Duece, come on people juss vote come on people don't sleep on it*******
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Flow- se7en his verse didnt have many dragged out punchlines
Punches- se7en because of his flow they hit harder Personals- both basically had a tie Multis- A-DueCe-26mad3 - linked a lot more than se7en Vocab- A-DueCe-26mad3 a little better both need work Originality- se7en had a much better verse came a lil different from the rest Vote se7en |
ayt SE7EN hammered ur ass watever the fuck ur name is!!
SE7EN u had good punches, very good structure and brilliant opener, as 4 the other dawg u had a good flow u need 2 improve on ur punches and structure!! good battle but SE7EN wins!! |
Yo, 7 took this battle....here's why
opener-duece punches-tie personals-7 metas-7 multies-tie vocab-duece finisher-7 yessir |
ite 7 gets my vote.
duece ure shits streched man work on structure cus of that ur flow was fucked up also u need more personals both of you, 7 not a bad drop man but work on punches they gota hit hard also add more personals.. .....hit this up now or the battle in my sig now ... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...046#post1030046 .............now.....thx..........pz |
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...046#post1030046 cmon man i took the time........thx................................... ......pz
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dawg se7en u had a gud structure, flow and good punches but ur opener wasnt great!!
duece u had good punches and good flow but u need 2 improve ur structure!! vote se7en!! |
se7en clear ur mailbox dawg its full!!
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opener-duece. i was just feeling it more didnt like 7's
punches-tie pretty equal but both came weak. personals-7 over did duece, duece barly had any metas-7 just more consitent then duece, better and more creative multies-tie vocab-hmmpph-tie , neither really had all that much vocab so that is why i gave it a tie.. finisher-7 much better finisher that duece.. no hate to you duece just that i really wasnt feeling you verse all that much.. Overall-7 Thank You Peace |
Can A mod please poll my vote..... i had my other one DQ because it was not explained the new way.. so i came back to re-vote..
Mod's Please poll my vote Thank You Peace |
Aight here's how I call it.
I give the battle to se7en because he had way better structure and better flow. Nice punches too. A-DueCe-26mad3: I was kinda feelin you though I just think you should go to the Wackness Emergency Center on this site and learn how to incorporate multis and better structure into your shit... you have good ideas but need to work on the flow... The pucnchline is only part of the battle here. |
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