Se7eN v.s Corporal
 

U spit first
12 lines or more
no hate or crew votes

So spit dawg

no feeding
30 Minute deadline
(These rules were agreed to in Bitch Slapped)

ok....im checking in within 30 minutes i will have dropped my verse

iight, spit ya shit dawg and any MOD close the otha battle between me and Corporal please, iight pz out*******

r u gonna spit time is up*(********************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ********

yea but 1 thing...no more than 12..i no it says 12 or more but that'll make it unfair as i dont no how many ur droppin so i dont no how many to drop..verse will be in a minute

k juss 12 lines********************************************* ************************************************** ************************************************** *******

HaHa..this dude thinks he stands a chance...with a rhyme scheme that resembles Paragraphs from books the way every long ass bar got so many syllables in it...naa jokin dawg no hatin..here...jus beatings...believe..i HATE to do this to you...haha


Low Posts but I Slow Roast this Next dude..gonna be a Vet Soon
You only 'Lay in wait with Clips' fuckin the guy who rolls with the Neptunes
You Suck Aint No Lucky Seven its Useless Throw in the towel Powell
Cos You Spit so Much Whack Shit you must have Emptied ya Bowel

..12 or more hmmm..i think you gonna do more...so ima get a little harder...to end you...


They Must Be Talking bout ya Body..if they say CORPS on the Floor
Gone need Life Support for this Whore When I Draw For the Four
too Raw for this War..no Need for My Chrome to Leave this Guy Blown
Cos my Punches gonna send him flying in circles like a CYCLONE

..whats the point dawg..i spit first..you prolly gonna murder the limit but whateva


Im Iller than the Champ himself..this herb aint gonna Grow when im planting shells
you aint got a chance in hell so ima kill you wit Too-Mour like Cancer Cells
I Box Fools you not cool..you aint gettin any brighter like kids who drop school
An you gonna need more than a Tissue to wipe ya nose when Shots Block ya Nostrils

complain about me not posting then disregard the limit yourself?!?

please hurry up..i was rushed then you get extra time..thats poor

iight ayo, ayo,

Dawg, you think your name's hot, I'll shoot 5x in the same spot/
And embarras u worser, then when i heard u shoot blank shots/
Dawg you opened up nice, for a bitched out home made wife/
So I'll kill ya like we're playing clue, wit my rhymes, not a knife/

You ain't gonna shot block me bitch, you must be lyrically sick/
I can understand that shit, since I notice u have no balls or a dick/
Percent of you winning, is like your mom's breast, their thinning/
You can't keep up, wit all the shit that I keep pinning/

United kingdom, u represent, a place that only makes a dent/
I can tell your probably a poor white kid, who worshipz 50 cent/
I give a fuck about u bitch, shit u might as well make a wish/
Everytime I see you post, I can see, taste, and smell fish/

up voting x1 ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ******

personals- 7
flo- 7
structure- tie
wordplay- none
multi's- corp
meti4- 7
overall- 7....not by much tho.....pretty close....elevate both

both**hit this witta honest vote...thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102207

They Must Be Talking bout ya Body..if they say CORPS on the Floor

wordplay- none

hmmm....

hahahha

Hilarious

hey...some one just made my bitch list!

A better explanation....jus read the new voting rules.....

wordplay- none....my feelings are bad wordplay in essence is just as bad as no wordplay.....corporal...stated he had wordplay...correct u did....but it was pathetic....

punches- 7 came more direct...less rambling...more cut to the point...makin it stronger...

flo- 7's flo was better simply because his structure formatted his verse better....not as streched....

now u can say all u want- corporal...its an honest vote...*1*

7 got personals ,punches , flow and metas so that pretty much wins the shit

vote:7

vote on this....

Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-Cprogress

your turn 2 up votes Corporal****************************************** ************************************************** ***** *******

Corporal I can only up votes 5x so u gotta start uppin for votes,

Uppin x2 people don't sleep on this battle, like otha ones

uppin for votes, come on people vote on this battle if u view it, don't sleep on it Like otha battles UPPIN x3

..up..i hate uppin anythin...

its gay but..we need votes i geuss..

it cant end 1-0

oh an carson..incse you didnt realise..i jus thought maybe you didnt understand that wordplay...

it was a play off my own name...Corps is short for Corporal..

if they was saying Corps on the floor..they aint talkin bout me..they talkin bout his body..

now look..i fell into the trap of explainin wordplay..that sucks :(

can we have atleast 1 vote before night ends..

thank you very much..

if you vote i will drop feedback on any piece of yours..i can not poll vote but i will listen to audio's..break down battles or whatever..thanks

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lemme ce....

7: this dude spit hard 2 me....his punches were on point, shit kinda didnt flow well cuzz sum bars seemd longer, but it fuccn smashd...
--"Dawg, you think your name's hot, I'll shoot 5x in the same spot/
And embarras u worser, then when i heard u shoot blank shots/"




corp: ure shit was coo, but it laccd punches, u needed 2 hit harder..i liked ure line...
--"Im Iller than the Champ himself..this herb aint gonna Grow when im planting shells
you aint got a chance in hell so ima kill you wit Too-Mour like Cancer Cells"


but 2 me cuzz came harder...

VOTE=7


CIN

:shoot:

uppin' votes x4 come on people vote please******************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** *******

upping x5 for the last time please people vote on this battle, don't sleep on it, juss poll and explain

se7en took this. he had better wordplay and his multis were in time. corporal, that could have been a pre-written diss, we dont know, but it just seemed very open. no real attack at se7en.

best line se7en: Dawg, you think your name's hot, I'll shoot 5x in the same spot/
And embarras u worser, then when i heard u shoot blank shots/

worst line se7en: I give a fuck about u bitch, shit u might as well make a wish/
Everytime I see you post, I can see, taste, and smell fish/

best line corporal: Low Posts but I Slow Roast this Next dude..gonna be a Vet Soon

worst line corporal: You Suck Aint No Lucky Seven its Useless Throw in the towel Powell
Cos You Spit so Much Whack Shit you must have Emptied ya Bowel

keep elevatin but the two of ya's...

Low Posts but I Slow Roast this Next dude..gonna be a Vet Soon

LMAO..my set up was my best line..didnt aim no personals cos..its nothin to do wit sever..i posted first an keyed..it was posed ot be in within 30..i took like 35..he took an hour...

i could easily spend time on some bars an murder this dude if it he wants a rematch...a little more violent talk cos the wordplay aint making it at this site

soz for free postin, but i forgot to drop this link. shit needs

closin guys, help a nigga out... consider this an uppin...
[urlhttp://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=101845]Nookie vs freakyjay[/url]

many thanks peeps... :o)>

soz for free postin, but i forgot to drop this link. shit needs

closin guys, help a nigga out... consider this an uppin...
Nookie vs freakyjay

many thanks peeps... :o)>

3-0 that's a KO right??????? I win???????**************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ****************

ite nothing amazing but,

flow-7
structure-7
personals-tie
punches-7
multi-corp
openr-corp
closer-7

overall-7

7 man not bad u gota work on personals.

corp-work on your structure and flow dawg...............


plz hit this up with an honest vote now . http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...566#post1029566 ................thx........pz

hmm...
i thought both were pretty weak. se7en had some good lines but there wasnt much there. no real response to what corporal said, just some random punches and a bad white boy jokes.

corporal had a few things that didnt make sense, but the punches were overall better...soo...

vote -- corporal

return the favor please --

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101943

yo ma make sure you hit this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...566#post1029566 ...............now.................pz

aight. im not gonna post this much on this shit but that 7 got it. to me, 7 came a lot harder. both need to elevate and make sure they throw harder punches and shit. but vote goes to 7

vote - 7

return da favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101623 & http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100587