young mike vs.lewd
 

15 bar max
no d/r
no crew votes
no hate votes
u 1st

hit this up please speek only the truth http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101706

checkin in .................................................. .................................................. .. didn't even know we were battlin but what ever.........................

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spit nigga............................................. .............................................

Ima call you cashues,cuz u must me nuts,
try to tell jokes,but u alway end up the butts,
Which is concievable cuz ur rhymes weak as hell,
they like condoms in africa,they just don't sell,
Well, young mike you just to young for the mic,
14 year old tyke,who hasn't learned to ride the ryhme bike,
Hypotheticaly you could beat me,if you sniffed up my lines,
but youd just sneeze them out,cuz i won with white lines,
killed 2 times,like a raven i found you and flew to new haven,
stealthly behavin,crept threw the house and slaugtered u bathin.

*hes 14
*people are called the butt of the joke
*cashues are nuts
*im white-so white lines
*hes from new haven

yo its 10 lines i stated taht in my bitch slap.............................................. .................................................. .......

what are you mad cause im from new haven//
im killin a 2 birds with one stone or should i say a raven//
lost twice but if i can help then three//
talk bout nuts and buts was this guy hittin on me//
you remind me of a rapest like kobe//
fuck you and your contry go warship a leaf//
yeah i know my line are kind of weak//
well your from canada so you cant speek//
your like jay-z its your time//
half the shit you said didnt even rhyeme

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101706 hit it up nice battle son

no feedin of other peoples spits bud,i don't care though.........................UPPIN lets get some votes............................................. .................................................. ......

Lewd

Ima call you cashues,cuz u must me nuts,
try to tell jokes,but u alway end up the butts,
pretty witty, nice, 6/10

Which is concievable cuz ur rhymes weak as hell,
they like condoms in africa,they just don't sell,
an aiight punch, 5/10

Well, young mike you just to young for the mic,
14 year old tyke,who hasn't learned to ride the ryhme bike,
not too good, because of bad wordplay, 4/10

Hypotheticaly you could beat me,if you sniffed up my lines,
but youd just sneeze them out,cuz i won with white lines,
lol, actually a nice concept, an wordplay, 7/10

killed 2 times,like a raven i found you and flew to new haven,
stealthly behavin,crept threw the house and slaugtered u bathin.
an aiight closer, not the best 5/10

overall- 27/50

jus need to keep elevatin, vocab mostly. nice drop.



Young Mike
what are you mad cause im from new haven//
im killin a 2 birds with one stone or should i say a raven//
fed off his verse, loses effect 5/10

lost twice but if i can help then three//
talk bout nuts and buts was this guy hittin on me//
another feeds, but not too bad, 6/10

you remind me of a rapest like kobe//
fuck you and your contry go warship a leaf//
didnt ryhme, wack punch, 4/10

yeah i know my line are kind of weak//
well your from canada so you cant speek//
at least it ryhmes, but still bad wordplay, horrible, 4/10

your like jay-z its your time//
half the shit you said didnt even rhyeme
very simplistic 4/10

jus keep elevatin, your verse was very simple at time, an lacked, vocab, wordplay an a decent punch.
but you had an aiight one, thats what you want all your raps to be like, try not to feed, an jus keep bein creative.



overall Lewd


plz drop an honest vote on this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101874

thanks for the breakdown.i wish more people did that.........................keep on votin.......................................

ight,young mike u really fuckin destroyed this guy,lewd what the fuck were u talking about the whole time,the rhyme bike,wtf?,u need to really elevate.young mike,u flowed good,good structure and i wasnt bored readin it,my vote is young mike

try to tell jokes,but u alway end up the butts
^ bitten

humor-young mike
punches-Lewd
personals-young mike
flow-tie
structure-Lewd
entertainment-young mike
vote-young mike

Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-Cprogress

killashea ur a dik rider son, anybody can easily see that after u sayin that bull shit........
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how is that bittin from where tell me,,,...honestly i wanna fuckin know, i would never fuckin bit, that just takes the fun outta this shit.

I don't know what the fuck you guys are talkin bout lewd killed it

flow-lewd
structure-lewd
punches-lewd
personals-lewd

all young mike did was fuckin feed off everything lewd said anyone can fuckin do that, get a fuckin clue


vote-Lewd

both were not that good here......
young mike talked alot about himself and had sum decent meti4's...but that is not what a battle is about....both had same structure....both had choppy flo...but lewd had the punches easy in this battle....not many multi's from either....I give this one to lewd...he was more attoned to a battle here...both elevate

vote lewd

LOL....................he said nutts and butts is dis guy hittin on me................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .........................

don't be fuckin freeposting, this is a battle where u vote.........
keep the votes comin..........................................

UPPIN 1 get some vote in here please,,.......................................... ................................................

lewd took this..

this battle was weak, both u need to elevate..but i see that lewd punches and wordplay were a whole lot better, The other guy fed off of Lewds verse..so overall Lewd.

thanks for the honesty/..........lets get somemore votes up in here.............................................. ...................

UPPPIN 2 lets get some honest votes in here.............................................. .............................................

vote-lewd
punches-lewd
personals-young mike
flow-lewd
consistancy-lewd

young mike u should rhyme an even number of bars u rhymed your first 2, then 3 then 3 again, uneveness makes your verse choppy.. hittin on me line was nice, both have potential.. lewd won with consistancy and little heavier disses.. return the favor hit this battle uppppppppppp, being slept

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