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ILLunatic v.s Joker
Aight Lets Go
10 lines You drop first No feeding No biting No recycling No crew votes No hate votes No d/r votes No freeposting ........Due Tonight.......... Good luck kid..... |
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can u raise tha limit a lil higher cause i wasnt payin attetion i thought it said 14- 16 so u wanna do 14-16 lines
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Nah.... 10 lines
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Waitin on you...... I'll drop right after you.... Blind post i guess....... ................................... |
cats reppin some unknown agency..thinking he can fuck wit me
I’ma wreck this wannabe put him in an early retirement like jay z Rip this nigga leave his embarrassed like that cat in his avatar Coverin his face….tryin to hide his identity like he’s a porn star My sick punches is leavin this cats mind absent like his location Ur not winnin this battle u had hours of concentration still no penetration This cat thinks he gots fame.. COME ON he barley beat mary-jane Ya whack is what I’m sain…I come at higher cost like my name is cocaine This cat lost and said he didn’t drop he was at the hospital cuz his cousin got shot Hah Nice excuss man….lets me guess ya cousin was in a drive by and he was tupac EXplanations: line 1:check his sig its says THE AGENCY line 2:in his sig is jayz line 3:dude in his avy got his face covered line 4:dude in the avy hinin his identity line 5:has nothin in his location line 7:says famous in his sig and he beat mary jane 3-5 line 8:cocaine cost more than mary jane(weed) line 9 & 10: said he didnt drop some 1 logged on his name and dropped for him and that he was at the hospital cause his cuz got shot heres tha link http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82923 |
Joker, ya style is a joke........ Like batman you can't see me
Tha Ace is Superior.... So theres no way of you to defeat me So ya undefeated 2-0... Ya streak is comin to an end... .............Unless its on this poll you'll never see that 0 again Ya stupid ....Acceptin my call out was ya first of many mistakes Steppin up ta me.... Ya grab the mic and suddenly ya wrist breaks Ya to weak....Ya can't handle tha wrath that i'm bout to unleash Your undefeated, But theres no chance in hell you'll beat me Kapeesh Ya rockin Nas in yo sig..... So how bout you try ta ether to this Ya rockin tha Joker name..... and simply it came easier ta diss NO I'M NOT GOING TO EXPLAIN MY PUNCHES |
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opener - tie both suck
closer - ILL punches - ILL personals - meh wordplay - blah none what so ever worthy overal - ILL...stop half assing Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote. -Cprogress |
Joker, ya style is a joke........ Like batman you can't see me
Tha Ace is Superior.... So theres no way of you to defeat me .................................................. ............................................. WAK...BUT DECENT... .................................................. ............................................. So ya undefeated 2-0... Ya streak is comin to an end... .............Unless its on this poll you'll never see that 0 again _____________________________________________ basic shit,..... [[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[ Ya stupid ....Acceptin my call out was ya first of many mistakes Steppin up ta me.... Ya grab the mic and suddenly ya wrist breaks __________________________________________----- good...^ ======================================== Ya to weak....Ya can't handle tha wrath that i'm bout to unleash Your undefeated, But theres no chance in hell you'll beat me Kapeesh ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ????? wak... ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- Ya rockin Nas in yo sig..... So how bout you try ta ether to this Ya rockin tha Joker name..... and simply it came easier ta diss basic...^^^^^^^^^^^^ _______________________________________________ cats reppin some unknown agency..thinking he can fuck wit me I’ma wreck this wannabe put him in an early retirement like jay z )))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) )))))))))))))))))))))))))) good... /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// Rip this nigga leave his embarrassed like that cat in his avatar Coverin his face….tryin to hide his identity like he’s a porn star good...^^^^^^^^ _____________________________________________ My sick punches is leavin this cats mind absent like his location Ur not winnin this battle u had hours of concentration still no penetration (((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( ((((((((((((((((((((((((( dope...^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ____________________________________________ This cat thinks he gots fame.. COME ON he barley beat mary-jane Ya whack is what I’m sain…I come at higher cost like my name is cocaine _________________________________________ basic....^ __________________________________________ This cat lost and said he didn’t drop he was at the hospital cuz his cousin got shot Hah Nice excuss man….lets me guess ya cousin was in a drive by and he was tupac ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ basic... _______________________________________________ vote/joker overall better verse... |
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opener - Joker
closer - ILL punches - Tie personals - Joker wordplay - Joker Metas- Tie(was little) Multies- Tie(same) Final Count- 6-4 Win and My Vote- JOKER!!! I know your vote didn't count because you can't poll, but if you did vote, it would have been disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote. -Cprogress |
both cats had decent flows but the punches were weak, i'd say joker took it on personal punches, but ILL's flow was a little better, still it's the punches that win battles, and ILL didn't have many personals at all. vote...joker
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aite this was a pretty clean battle feelin both y styles..joker u aint half bad bro..good shit liked the retired jay z line but its been played in 2 dayz..who ever reps jay z the otehr person will amke a punch about it..come a bit more orignal..Ill good shit So ya undefeated 2-0... Ya streak is comin to an end...
.............Unless its on this poll you'll never see that 0 again <<, that did it for me... |
damn joke....not bad at all..u aint a newb as i can see..clean style illunitic...coo shit..come a bit harder next timecuz joker wuda took my vote ..but his jay z shit is PLAYED... big time.. cmon man thats like a freebee punch.. luna was just consistent..
thats the only difference.. vote- Illuna |
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flow-illunatic
disses-joker punches-illunatic personals-tie consistancy-illunatic both came iight but illunatic had more heavy hitters.. joker u gotta cut it with the explaining ya shit it takes away from the quality of ya verse.. u had good set ups but sometimes turned them into weak punches, u got a good flow so keep at it.. illunatic just came a little better in this battle vote-illunatic return the favor and hit this up.. shit gets slept around here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102029 |
aight mah breakdown
opener-Joker closer-Ill flow-Ill structure-Ill punches-Joker Vote-Joker he had it where it counted repay tha favor yall Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote. -Cprogress |
theres verses were alright..
joker had some good punches but that explaining them shit is whack.. also the jay z line was whack.. you had some good shit in there though.. illunatic.. your verse was pretty good I loved that never see 0 again line that was straight fire.. you definently didn't kill this kid but you had enough to just squeak by with the win.. vote = I |
uppin 4 votes
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Joker got this in my opinion his verese was consistant,had good punches,his disses was very personal,and he had ok multis.
best lines: My sick punches is leavin this cats mind absent like his location Ur not winnin this battle u had hours of concentration still no penetration Rip this nigga leave his embarrassed like that cat in his avatar Coverin his face….tryin to hide his identity like he’s a porn star My sick punches is leavin this cats mind absent like his location Ur not winnin this battle u had hours of concentration still no penetration ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Illunatic had a decent verse some lines was played,had good punches,had some decent personals, didnt see any multis,he didnt rhyme very well. Best lines: So ya undefeated 2-0... Ya streak is comin to an end... .............Unless its on this poll you'll never see that 0 again Ya stupid ....Acceptin my call out was ya first of many mistakes Steppin up ta me.... Ya grab the mic and suddenly ya wrist break------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- VOTE:JOKER |
yo Illunatic takes this one with harder hitting punches and spitting with more direct expereicned punches...i just didnt like that kapeesh thing. every thing else was pretty good. some wordplay in there which was nice. joker ur shit was alright good start.......kinda fell off......be more direct and straigh forward than sarcastic. u'll hit harder.
my vote Ill hit this up guys wit an honest one please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102031 |
JOKER
cats reppin some unknown agency..thinking he can fuck wit me I’ma wreck this wannabe put him in an early retirement like jay z haha nice punch/opener Rip this nigga leave his embarrassed like that cat in his avatar Coverin his face….tryin to hide his identity like he’s a porn star nice personal/punches My sick punches is leavin this cats mind absent like his location Ur not winnin this battle u had hours of concentration still no penetration FIRE nice multiz This cat thinks he gots fame.. COME ON he barley beat mary-jane Ya whack is what I’m sain…I come at higher cost like my name is cocaine hard to understand, its aight This cat lost and said he didn’t drop he was at the hospital cuz his cousin got shot Hah Nice excuss man….lets me guess ya cousin was in a drive by and he was tupac nice finisher aight nice verse, nice punches and awesome personals, good flow also. 9/10 verse ILLUNATIC Joker, ya style is a joke........ Like batman you can't see me Tha Ace is Superior.... So theres no way of you to defeat me ok opener, ok personal So ya undefeated 2-0... Ya streak is comin to an end... .............Unless its on this poll you'll never see that 0 again ehh... Ya stupid ....Acceptin my call out was ya first of many mistakes Steppin up ta me.... Ya grab the mic and suddenly ya wrist breaks lol nice Ya to weak....Ya can't handle tha wrath that i'm bout to unleash Your undefeated, But theres no chance in hell you'll beat me Kapeesh wuld have been good if it didnt sound forced Ya rockin Nas in yo sig..... So how bout you try ta ether to this Ya rockin tha Joker name..... and simply it came easier ta diss nice finisher aight, you didnt come nearly has hard as you have in ur earlier battles...u lack punches, and u talk bout urself too much. 5/10 vverse [b]overall- Joker everyone hit this up please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99268 and my battle with madman... |
Joker
cats reppin some unknown agency..thinking he can fuck wit me I’ma wreck this wannabe put him in an early retirement like jay z 6/10 Rip this nigga leave his embarrassed like that cat in his avatar Coverin his face….tryin to hide his identity like he’s a porn star 7/10 My sick punches is leavin this cats mind absent like his location Ur not winnin this battle u had hours of concentration still no penetration nice!!! 8/10 This cat thinks he gots fame.. COME ON he barley beat mary-jane Ya whack is what I’m sain…I come at higher cost like my name is cocaine nice play 8.5/10 This cat lost and said he didn’t drop he was at the hospital cuz his cousin got shot Hah Nice excuss man….lets me guess ya cousin was in a drive by and he was tupac nope!! 4/10 33.5/50 Illunatic Joker, ya style is a joke........ Like batman you can't see me Tha Ace is Superior.... So theres no way of you to defeat me ehh 5/10 So ya undefeated 2-0... Ya streak is comin to an end... .............Unless its on this poll you'll never see that 0 again dope!!! 9/10 Ya stupid ....Acceptin my call out was ya first of many mistakes Steppin up ta me.... Ya grab the mic and suddenly ya wrist breaks ok 6/10 Ya to weak....Ya can't handle tha wrath that i'm bout to unleash Your undefeated, But theres no chance in hell you'll beat me Kapeesh i actually liked it 7/10 Ya rockin Nas in yo sig..... So how bout you try ta ether to this Ya rockin tha Joker name..... and simply it came easier ta diss shitty closer 6/10 33/50 holy, that was close as hell vote-Joker |
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