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Petrafy vs Northern Touch
me n u....
10-20 lines ill spit first yall kno tha rules |
aight checking in but give me at least an hour to spit cause I am batelin Bombz right now cool???........................................... .................................................. ..........As soon as I drop my spit on my other battle I'll spit ont this one cool.
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I guess evolution skipped, this humans wit//
cuz ya thought cycle is slower den da Earth's revolution is // ya rhymes R 'played out' like movie scripts // sumone call his mom cuz I'm about 2 'abuse this kid', I'll smack da stupidness, off ya stupid grin / / leave u 'assed out like protrudin hips, ya styles more ass then a big booty bitch // this pussy got alota mouf like thick coochie lips, but aint eatin enough cats like anarexic Peruvians // Ill have ya jaw droppin in, astonishment, till da floor rocs ya chin // Im so raw Ill lay in subterranean lava lakes, N benchpress tectonic plates // till fuckin continents break, my gene pool solidified into a dominant strain// I'm da personalification of selective breedin, while u developin backwards like a dyslexic fetus // ya species is part of a regressin genus, I'll splatta ya brains on a mirror so ya actions reflect ya thinkin // against me u 'ain't got da balls 2 bust' like a severed penis, I'll bring death N disease 2 mics // hop out in a Grim Reaper guise, N sever ya brain in 2 wit a steal sycthe// leave 2 of ya cranial lobes on each side, N 'split ya personality' so next time u'll 'think twice' // |
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Nice spit man...
<i> Intro.... ------------------------------------ I see you don't beleive in the biblical of adam & eve.../ So i'll spit truth spiritual, which will cause you to leave// RB... Using too big of words you dont understand.../ Hoping I was intimidated that was your plan...// And it might have worked if your record wasn't four to eight.../ So I'll take advantage of your weakness making the ninth loss to come at a quicker rate...// Warming up....... ------------------------------ Not to worry after this loss you can walk with your pride/ knowing you were beat by a canadian the line above was a lie...// Busting multi's is also easy for me/ Look I just did it by counting one, two, three...// Cleaning up.... --------------------------------- Your petrafied, shook, and frozen/ Needed an other win and your ass was chosen// </i> Anyways Good luck thanks for the battle it has been over 4 -5 month since my last one... VOTE VOTE VOTE |
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FLOW: NORTHERN TOUCH - easier to follow but thas just casue it was way simpler, but still he gets flow.
PUNCHES:PETREFY - way more creative and witty, in fact i dont think northern touch had one really good punch PERSONALS:NORTHERN TOUCH - he did have that one bout petrefy's record, and since P didnt really have any real personal shit northern gets it. MULTIES: PETRAFY - obviosly rhymed way more complex and just not even in a question who took this VOCAB: PETRAFY- he used complex words and shit and not typical crap, while Northern had the vocabulary of a 9 year old ORIGINALITY: PETREFY- it was witty and smart in some parts,good creativity and use of wordplay so of course this too was P witout a question OVERALL VOTE: PETREFY ..........(not hate, jus honest shit) |
this battle has to guy to petrfy
but northern gets those nice props punches=petrafy creativity=northern structure=northern personals=petrafy originality=petrify vote=petrafy I know your vote didn't count because you can't poll yet, but if you did vote, it would have been disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote. -Cprogress |
northern man, you used to be dope what happened ;\
petrafy you took this.. you had better punches and flow.. your punches weren't shit either.. your structure was a lil whack for example long bars.. but other then that you did good.. vote = petrafy hit this up: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101949 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102049 |
I give the vote to petrafy.
He had a harder drop then northern touch. I didn't like petrafy's rhyme structure but it was full of good meta's personals and wordplay. Northern had a verse that was too simple and it didn't hav any hard punches. I think that this was definitely a landslide battle, petrafy was just way too hard for you northern. Vote petrafy. Vote here. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101920 I took the time. Now you should do the same. |
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Thanks for your feedback...
It has been over 5 months since my last battle so it was good to drop something just to get warmed up... Hopefully petrafy will give me a second battle later on... Anyways keep dropping the votes... Respect to Petrafy... |
flow-petrafy
wordplay-petrafy personals-northern punches-tie consistancy-petrafy northern u have potential, you have good use of personals but sometimes u get too simple, like the one two three line.. petrafy obviously had the much better complex flow, disses were kinda even.. so between flow and consistancy i gotta give it to petrafy, northern like i said u should throw some punches mixed in with your personals u could hit alot harder, no hate.. vote-petrafy creativity-730 punches-tie personals-eh.. not many originality-carson disses-carson 730 i didnt know when i came either, apparently the carson/mtv thing is played, i used a different flip also.. but carson came more straight forward with his disses, 730's about rocket ships nice line.. but other than that alot seemed rushed and unthought out.. carson came a little bit more consistant and original so.. vote-carson.. return the favor hit this up we need real votes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102040 return the favor peep me and northerns battle |
i did this in another thread i voted in, i was gonna vote on the carson/730 battle but it was closed b4 i got to vote and i accidently copied the whole thing along with the link to our battle.. accident
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northen...tisk tisk 5-1?....more like a 3-3 newbie-
petrafy didnt sho much either...but he put alot more effort wit punches meti'4's mulit's....granted his flo was off and his structure sucked....he took the categories that matter'd... vote- petrafy |
uppin last time.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......................................cmon
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petrafy- good flow,good punches,good vocab,work on structure,no personals
Northern-ok flow,good punches,good vocab,nice personals,nice structue,that candain/lie line was whack as hel Vote:petrafy please drop honest votes on my links in my sig thanx |
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