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Payce with the Rappen, in this battle what HAPPEN? payce said my last rap was wack and now i have to CLAP HIM, with your denzel raps, STOP with All the ACTING! and I know you spit verbs but none of those have ACTION!-Your rap style hallow----weenie, Just Hallow!- and your little kid rapz wouldnt make it to the APOLLO!--And Tommorow--Everybody on the site say this fag a discrase, and i see trough your computer---so next time you on, put a bag on your FACE!-Your rapz is straight NAKED!-All caught in they briefs-- at first your flowz came out nicely, but no its odvious that they caught in your TEETH!
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lmfao, dats all u can do. Wow, i wasn't even gonna drop a verse here but I feel that I should jsut expose how shitty you are. I doubt anybody will vote on this once reading your verse.


How to get merked demo...expiring in 11 more bars
but I doubt ur good enough...To even go that far!
Lesson one for this herb...Ur structure is revoltin
droppin shit thats low class...and then Capitalizin!
Precious space he's fryin...wit everythin he postin
so to why hip hop is dyin...ur verse where im pointin!
Always showin guns after ya rhymes...such a lil nerd
But since u gonna come wit slugs...imma carry birds!
what a waste of my tyme....cant frame a herb defeat
So we'll just end our session now...
....Merking demo complete!

ayo get them votes coming....:thumbup:
J goodz gotta win...oh..whats popping payce...thanks for battling fucka..

Payce with the Rappen, in this battle what HAPPEN?//1
payce said my last rap was wack and now i have to CLAP HIM,//2
with your denzel raps, STOP with All the ACTING!//3
and I know you spit verbs but none of those have ACTION!//4
-Your rap style hallow----weenie, Just Hallow!//5
and your little kid rapz wouldnt make it to the APOLLO!//6
--And Tommorow--Everybody on the site say this fag a discrase,//7
and i see trough your computer---so next time you on, put a bag on your FACE!//8
-Your rapz is straight NAKED!-All caught in they briefs//9
-- at first your flowz came out nicely, but no its odvious that they caught in your TEETH!//10


Just helped ya out J...decoded your verse since sum people might have trouble readin it.
Good luck. Lets get some votes.

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last uppin...well lets get sum votes.

the fuck.
your struture messed kid
othe than that it was a ok drop..
i cant vote Payce is in my crew..

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Terrible battle yall
Had some good point but no good personals
Try to make it more real to each other next time fellas

nam_208...who r u voting for...anyways, uppin for sum more votes so this shit can finally get closed.

my last uppin...

Payce wins cause of personals, creativity, punches, structure, and flow. J watch ya structure cause it also fucks your flow. Also put in some witty personals and some metas. Payce didn't drop like I seen him drop befo, but he still one. Not bad for a newB J. 1

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Yo, this battle fuckin sucked. But anyway,

J Goodz: Yo, get your structure together for real. Wordplay was decent, but punches were mad weak. Personals were weak too.

Payce: Yo, you got good structure and some decent punches, but your wordplay is kinda weak. Personals were kinda weak too.

Vote: Payce

But on the real, this battle seem more like a fuckin' Jerry Springer show than a real battle. Don't get too close to your opponent or it makes your punches seem like crap. Oh and try not to always seem like you yellin' at each other. RB's about rhymin', not fightin'.

hey J goodz.your structure Absolutely sucks.payce....you didnt even come that nice but, since J Goodz Structure was so fucked up i would give you the Double u...you understand me....ok

vote=payce

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