Soulfire VS nam_208
 

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20 minutes from check-in WE BOTH SPIT.
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text votes count... 5 votes and it's a wrap

Opponent banned for cheating. Soulfire wins by default
-strobe

Yo nam, prepare to be burned by the undyin flame,
Cause Soulfire's the Captain bitch remember my name,
I'm too fast, too dangerous, too smart, too strong,
punk ass muthafuckas like nam will not last long,
Yo bitch I noticed you was too pussy to give your age,
Oh well, some mothaffucka will still go down on this page,
If you can't take the heat motha fucka oh well,
Cause now bitch you battlin' a messenger from hell,
So while you thinkin up your little bitch ass muthafuckin' rhymes,
Just remember soulfire will bring your punk ass down when it''s time

Bring Your rhyme DOG... time's running out

Yo nam. For real son. It's time to bring this shit. Soulfire is waitin. Hurry up.

hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr rrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

played yaself you did captain, locked yourself in the cages
guess u aint know i swing hot vss like light sabers
Im a true battle rhymer bitch my skillz will never fail
if you wanted to get fucked you shoulda just bent over in jail
See i dont play around, I hold it down straight to wire
Beleive me you dont wantcha soul burned with my fire
I throw napalm balms a rhyme straight up exploding your verse
Your shit felt like i was hit wit a gas burst
So hear ye hear ye soul fire just got slapped
her verse stunk worst than a book a dr suess on crack

Aight Son, good battle. May the best man win. Let's get some votes in this piece.

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yo....soul fire ate you alive nam....if i had enough post to vote i would go wit soulfrie....when some peeps gonna vote mine and soulfires battle...wats poppin b...

vote=soulfire aint dyckrydin either

Yo, Where the votes at? #1
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aight... soulfire just completely got u. tho u had a few punches, soulfire took it. he had some good ones as well, both of u need to elevate. but it wasnt a bad newb battle. easier-to-read too. lol. no offense

vote - soul

Aight, thanks for puttin up the votes, Phresh
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Yeah fresh i feel you but i still think mines was betta......:>.................................................. .....Look at that starter :)

Keep them votes comin. Uppin #3
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Uppin# 4.
Yo let's get some votes here!
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Uppin # 5 THIS IS IT YA'LL. Let's get some votes up in here.
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nam dawg i koudn't evan follow your ver5e.... iz like u wrote a line an den u juz put a word dat rhymed at da end... an pluz 5oulfirez 5truktur took ya out like nuttin... ma vote=5oulfire

Soulfire:

U had a smooth flow and some alright punches, it fit in smoothly and flowed the same way some of your punches you couldve fixed up to make them more complex but meh it was an alright verse
6/10
Nam:
ya flowfor the most part smooth a little bit choppy in some places the rhyme scheme wasnt matching up u had some okay punches but im some parts that u tryed to diss him you dissed yourself hence the gas line same to him you couldve fixed up your punches to have them better structured and complex.
4/10

Vote: Soulfire
Why: a smoother flow and better punches that were more hard hitting.

AIght check it: Both of y'all need to elevate... but that's OK because you're new So here's how I see it.

nam_208: I liked your verse against jgoodz way better yo.... I think you just slepped this shit together... and that last bar... Pure trash kid.... VERY WACK punch In my honest opinion. But keep elevating yo.

soulfire: You need to incorporate some more complex aspects in to your flow.... like multis, use of vocab and timed flow...

All in all Soulfire gets the vote on this one (Funny shit)

Honest Votes On My Joints Please - No Hate - Let's Elevate!

Thanks for the votes people. Thanks very much.
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