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FanTa ZeE 12-29-03 06:00 PM

FreeStylin'
 
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101884
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102162
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101860

This world is a prison and all its people are screws/
Trapped in a cell we can't taste, shit still hittin the news/
Bars out of reach, not only vicars who preach/
Gods footmen turning to hell, moved by the power of speech/
The Earth is a shithole, devils lair can't be much worse/
At least you can't feel pain, when you leave here in a death hurst/
Evil afore us, and yet more hurt left behind/
Money destroying the future, God had planned for mankind/
Truth seems harder to find, as we travel this road/
Absorbing the hatred, half dead nigga's explode/
Or maybe implode through lack of food and necessities/
I flip through T.V channels, and all i see is atrocities/
Monstrocities, caused by drugs lead to abnormalities/
Nobody seems to notice as their lives are ruled by currencies/
And felonies, just look at the Penitentiarys/
You'll find i speak no lies when your exposed to the extremities/
Mothers stole from their children, serving time for their men/
The laws geared towards bastards, time to pick up the pen/

Dev 12-29-03 06:07 PM

BASIC...BUT GOT THE RHYME ACROSS NICELY....COULD HAVE ADDED SOME MORE COMPLEXITY..BUT THE WAY IT WAS NOT BAD...PZ....

D-Chillz 12-29-03 06:22 PM

shit was cool

Quelude 12-30-03 12:20 AM

Why you never come back to our battle bitch?

YJ 12-30-03 12:23 AM

dis was an iight piece
nuffin special LOL
7/10

gk 12-30-03 03:03 PM

that shit was wack, that can't be some shit you wrote. Who you took that from krs? Get your raps together and battle me. one

FanTa ZeE 12-30-03 03:09 PM

66ok..i don't mind being wack..thats your opinion.. *cries in corner*

roflmmfao

gk 12-30-03 03:14 PM

nah thats a fact you come in here "spittin" somebody else's shit. it's not right.

gk 12-30-03 03:14 PM

read my shit on this forum it's called keystyle.

FanTa ZeE 12-30-03 03:14 PM

wtf? thats my drop? who you think wrote that for me? i can assure you..it came from my mind..i aint no biter dawg!

gk 12-30-03 03:17 PM

aight east shorty. T.I.M. niggas don't play when it comes to battlin

s.R. 12-30-03 03:22 PM

IIight...Honestly nothing Special ... Good Flow I Guess

6.8/10

gk 12-30-03 03:26 PM

shorty criticize me all you want.reply to my shit. I like the help.N to anyone else it's called keystyle

gk 12-30-03 03:36 PM

take my poll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Antonio Banderas 12-30-03 03:45 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Liba Dee
wtf? thats my drop? who you think wrote that for me? i can assure you..it came from my mind..i aint no biter dawg!


Ur drop was good...... I think ya did a great job on it..... Keep dropping them.......

gk 12-30-03 03:48 PM

antonio banderas won't battle gk!


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