Criticize22 vrs Yu Bin Sund
 

10 line max

u know rules

u drop first

good luck

coo foo

Im quick to kill find a place and bury men/
Thats why this dude dont want beef like a fucking vegetarian//
After this battle when i win dont be talking shit/
Goahead Claim you hard i already know you softer than pamela lee's tits//
You know im tay and like god i hold the power/
The only bars you drop is in the jail shower//
While you riding huv caps im ridin on "22" like im emmit/
ill beat the shit out of u only take me 5 miniutes//

that wuz iight i guess

A Quick K.O

Why Did U Even Shoot At This Vet..
Ur 13 Can't Rap And If You Lookin For GirlS Here Sorry U Ain't Hit Puberty Yet..
Ya Punches Are Like Elton John's Fights...They Never Land Straight..
This Kid Is A LightWeight......Who Knows Wat This Man Ate..
Like Gays In Car Accidents......Ima Wreck This Fag...
Doggie If You Think Your A Lone Star Your Mistaken.....Cause Its Only Ya Texas Flag..

im sorry but i couldnt tell if some of that stuff rhymed or not

oo now i catch the concept of it juts a weird setup to me sorry !

hey i give the win to pooch....she ate you critsize...
punches=pooch
metaphors=none
structure=none
originality=pooch
flow=critsize
vote=pooch

I know your vote didn't count because you can't poll yet, but if you did vote, it would have been disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-strobe

good thing u cant vote !

lol jk ya i think his was more original than mine but its all good !

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this was a good battle. i guess you have improved your skills crit. but if my vote would count it be for critisize, but only cause his stuff was original. but dont worry. you'll elevate soon enough

thanks phresh

oops. i didnt mean to say critisize in my paragraph for my vote, i mean yu bin sund. sorry for the inconvienance and expecially critisize. my bad. lol

phresh when u get 100 come back and vote 4 me if ya will thanks homie !

Re: Criticize22 vrs Yu Bin Sund
 

well noone followed the rules

but here

yu bin
had more personals pounches was tight
no structure which made the flow not flow
but so was crit
you also had originality


crit
you could use more elevating
no structure
ok pouches


overall vote yu bin


hit my sig

peace

u gay man lol hahahaha

Yo....
Critisize... You been sonned!
Lopsided battle fella's... You been sonned won with better structure wordplay and the whole monte!
Sorry critisize but you just got wrecked kid. Find a newb huh?

Yu Bin:nice punches, had the opener and closer,and his flow was good,had more personals.

Criticize:ur flow was kinda off,that beef -vegaterian line is played,
the rest of ur spit was dope,had good diises.


Vote:Yu Bin...more original and stronger punches

since i took time to vote on yours take time to vote on dis its 4-2 me thanx http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101672

That was a cool battle a little short though
On the real... line for line i give it to criticize he was more cogent
Both of the flows was a bit off but i know personally its hard changing to fit the rap flow

thanks nam

well, this was a close battle in my opinion. crit has some disses tho no multis and the flow was off. i still say he had it. but this was very VERY close. yu bin had a good opener but not as good in what i saw. good job both. crit, u need to elevate, but that battle was close.

lol this was on of my wackest battles didn't try o welll keep votes comin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ............uppin 2

upppin 3................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...............

yu took this in every catagory..........flow punches metas.....structure was the onlt thing u took criticize cos yu's lines were abit stretched.....gud battle but yu takes this easy!

vote-yu

will ya vote on my battle wiv goofy in front lines (1st page) honest vote plz.....thanx.....hit the poll!

uppin this shit.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...............4

Uppin .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .........5

ok blah blah blah, decent battle, sund, you went easy on em and still murked him. you had punches that were better along with flow. yoou both had not to great of structure. criteicize u needa elevate b4 u try and get vet respect k? you had structure by a little and thats it.

vote- yu bin sund

everyone hit htis up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ighlight=killer

aight the win is as follows

Yu-flow was better than 22
yu-had more personals that hit harder than 22
yu-had better punches that rocked 22's jaw
yu"s-made me laugh more

favorite line in the battle goes 2?????????? Yu
Why Did U Even Shoot At This Vet..
Ur 13 Can't Rap And If You Lookin For GirlS Here Sorry U Ain't Hit Puberty Yet..
Ya Punches Are Like Elton John's Fights...They Never Land Straight..
This Kid Is A LightWeight......Who Knows Wat This Man Ate..


hot shit -----------22 u will eentually get the hang of it