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TheUnderRated vs. Metaphysik
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1 hour blindspit check in.............. normal rules.............elevated sleeps..............dicks................ |
my bad new rules 5 bars
i spit verse feed off me and you will catch cancer cuase the flow is disaterous........................................ .. |
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Mix dickriders and ring votes, now thats metaphysiks trail
Took that class in gradeschool, I was too intelligent so i failed C, The physix of your xpilzit phlows are unnatural to the scientific method... Cause no matter what you produce in ya rhymes, they'll never be respected Your like Bullshit Gen eds so i'm a get credit and then drop you... like oil mixed with water theres no way that i can't top you...... scientifically drop you, burn you up like asteriods hittin the o Zone A-typically this unknown stops you dead like I was born prone this battles like david and goliath except this time the giant wins which is you so congratulations merk me sometime again......... |
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Washed up like detergent, never hit anything like pimps that are virgins// In need of surgeons, Unders wrapped in towel and burned on top like turbans// Leave Under out dated like kids wit no dates at dances mad as fuck// This kid sucks, make you pray to "negative charms" like you believe in bad luck// Your not ready like premature birth, punchin your face, it hurts// Hells on earth, put pennies on this beef then squash it for what its worth// Ill is what your not, your popped, im dialing bullets like I call shots// Make your throat clot, like suspenseful books thats thickened wit no plot// Your minds not right like your head tilts to the left, hit your cleft// Stealing your life like baseball bases, theft, three shots and nothings left// 2nd bar: lucky charms...bad luck |
rated - This was an alright verse, kinda week from what you brought to battles befor. You had good flow, and good structure. I liked a couple of punches in there, could have used some personals. You had some alright word play as well...
Meta- You aso had an alright verse. There was a nice flow, and all of that. I dont like it when // is put at the end of lines though. I liked your word-play, and the creativity. But alot of punches could have hit harder from my perspective. Vote - Meta Conclusion I didnt like the opener and the closer of rateds verse. that really threw me off. You could have came with better punches, both of you could have accually. But I think Meta just hit harder with it... ( Please return the favor an honest vote on the battles in my sig ) |
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Damn.... Close shit...
Punches-Tie Wordplay-metaphysik Vocab-TheUnderRated Enjoyable-metaphysik Multies-Neither Structure-Tie Vote-Metaphysik He edged it out.. I thought TheUnderRated had it But Metaphysik surprised me with that comeback Props to both of you But Metaphysik gets my vote.... .....LINK...... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102163 |
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i think Meta took this one...because he came more raw. underrated....u came good...u just didnt focus enough on just hitting cleverly...seemed like u wanted to get "scientific" and forcing complex vocabulary..plus your close was kind of giving up i think when ur like "merk me sometime again"
even tho i like UR's structure better...i think Meta took this since his punches were more aggressive. some clever concepts and some pretty cool metas were included in his veres as well.. good battle. my vote: Meta i took the time to vote on this, so hit this up honestly both of you please... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103318 |
wont let me poll? do u have to register for elite?? i have over 5 wins....so what do i do to register? anyways anybody who sees this can see i have over 5 wins....so i can vote. but i guess im not registerd to pol. so wahtever. i'll figure it out...
hit up my battle tho http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103318 |
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Punches were decent Some were played Alot the concepts were played ya verse was ok Still needs some Elevation... Overall...13/20 Quote:
Punches were also decent Hit a bit harder than TheUnderRated's Flow was pretty good.. structure..OLD Wordplay... some were played... Overall.......15/20 Vote-Metaphysiks Meta came a bit harder... Kinda weak battle tho TheUnderRated..ya need to elevate a bit No hate... just bein real |
i'm not voting....just asking when u gone check in my battle agaist u Meta....i'm sure one of them are over now??
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UnderRated
Mix dickriders and ring votes, now thats metaphysiks trail Took that class in gradeschool, I was too intelligent so i failed C, The physix of your xpilzit phlows are unnatural to the scientific method... Cause no matter what you produce in ya rhymes, they'll never be respected Your like Bullshit Gen eds so i'm a get credit and then drop you... like oil mixed with water theres no way that i can't top you...... scientifically drop you, burn you up like asteriods hittin the o Zone A-typically this unknown stops you dead like I was born prone this battles like david and goliath except this time the giant wins which is you so congratulations merk me sometime again......... Punches were alright, A few played ones Alot the concepts were played also ya verse was just ok Elevation....<-- speaks for itself Overall...12/20 Metaphysiks Washed up like detergent, never hit anything like pimps that are virgins// In need of surgeons, Unders wrapped in towel and burned on top like turbans// Leave Under out dated like kids wit no dates at dances mad as fuck// This kid sucks, make you pray to "negative charms" like you believe in bad luck// Your not ready like premature birth, punchin your face, it hurts// Hells on earth, put pennies on this beef then squash it for what its worth// Ill is what your not, your popped, im dialing bullets like I call shots// Make your throat clot, like suspenseful books thats thickened wit no plot// Your minds not right like your head tilts to the left, hit your cleft// Stealing your life like baseball bases, theft, three shots and nothings left// Punches were good Not much, but alittle harder then Under's Flow was pretty good... Structure - change it up...dont space bars or use //, thats old Wordplay... that was ok Overall.......16/20 Vote-Metaphysiks Meta came a bit harder... |
wasnt amazing..but i found some good wordplay here
Vote=Meta why?? BREAKDOWN- punches-meta metas-meta personals-under..thats all meta lacked wordplay-meta flow-both structure-under..i jus prefer yours overall-META came w/ nice wprdplay n metas... concentrate on more personal shit pz MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT THIS UP PLZ...BEING MAD SLEPT ON I WILL POST AGAIN IF ITS NOT LOL http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102931 |
thanx for all the feedback y'all this was my first elevated battle....................uppin 2 close.................
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I think metaphysik won this battle i liked his style an struture.
punches an personals were nice..so heres the Break Punches-Tie Wordplay-metaphysik Vocab-TheUnderRated Enjoyable-metaphysik Multies-Neither Structure-Tie Vote-Metaphysik He edged it out.. I thought TheUnderRated had it But Metaphysik surprised me with that comeback Props to both of you But Metaphysik gets my vote.... |
Ill is what your not, your popped, im dialing bullets like I call shots//
^^Illest line in the battle..... Other than that- this was a pretty tight knit battle punches- Tie Vocabulary- Under(some how i feel he overdid it tho..) wordplay- Meta(he had some ill wordplay...like that line above) flo- Tie(different structures....but the both flowed well multi's- Tie(ok from both....sparingly) meti4's- Meta(they were just more clever) Overall Meta....I just think under came to like Webster'ish here.....I've never seen him do this before....he must be tryin summin different...... nice drop both... |
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