Virtuoso VS double 0 seven
 

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no crew, d/r, b/s, 1 line etc etc votes

now swayin, bitchin etc etc

i burn through ya retina, emblazen your eyes with pain,
don't ya see, when i key up, i disgrace you anemic brain,
an insane, mental, state, is were you's gettin left, (prof)
also behind, as the verbal battle, here gets stretched,
you like a mental midget, vrtually no I.Q whatsoever,
im seasonin the storm, like i cook up the bad weather,
ready to unlease metaphorical, acidcal rain like punches,
use reference to the bradys, i can use the word bunches,
unlocking verbal, locks, discovering the weakness of MC's,
leave virtusos, torso, in 3 sections, arms, chest an knees,

My bullets leave u Leakin-an-bleedin, ‘~‘ send u seez-n-reatreatin,
Wit this disease-im-releasin, have u runnin like u was ‘seein-‘a‘-demon‘!!
I’m feedin-then-fleein, c I’l battle wit rusted-flows an still bust-ya-nose,
Ur face disgusts-the-hoes, an you’re the one to go an-trust-ya-foes~
It’s a must-to-know, u can comply~an~deny, truth hurts but I’ll Devise-these-lies,
u’d have to rise-to-reply then fly-to-the-sky, Just to make us ~ see~ eye‘-to‘-eye
I’ll Surprise-these-guys, Ur bars... I blaze-up-some, elevated..na u ~came-up-none
Beatin name-less-slums, I’m bout to make ur loss~wrecord raise-up-1..(21-14 to 21-15)
Releasing this Metaphorical-phase, resulting in a historical-blaze,
Gave him-some-change, just to know that his memorials-paid!
Im scorin-these-k’s (knockouts) watch cuz im ill-an-bizarre
Ur skillz-are-a~far, Ill send ya a stalker like the killer-in-ya-avatar,





~Sonned

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aight aight battle.......some nice wordplay in use.....but 'virs' verse won it fo me..........structure were clean an the flow were advanced to a point where double 0 cvnt reach...........but it were an aight battle......

but ma vote goes to*virtuoso

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I have to go with Double O Seven on this one structure goes to vir but hey everything else goes to Double O Seven

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virtuso had better punches but had no structure

do7 had structure

but punches win battles!!

virtuso wins

Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
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breakdown

punches both: Ur skillz-are-a~far, Ill send ya a stalker like the killer-in-ya-avatar//also behind, as the verbal battle, here gets stretched,
you like a mental midget, vrtually no I.Q whatsoever,
metas 007: im seasonin the storm, like i cook up the bad weather,
multies virt: I’m feedin-then-fleein, c I’l battle wit rusted-flows an still bust-ya-nose,
Ur face disgusts-the-hoes, an you’re the one to go an-trust-ya-foes~
personals 007: an insane, mental, state, is were you's gettin left, (prof)
flow both: both verses were consistant wasnt stretched and stayed dissing throughout

overall close battle but 007 took it by a hair virt your pretty tight kid no hate though

peep mine
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102482

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ok well im not able 2 vote cuz i got less than 100 posts but


vote:virt

completly better puches and made alott more 2 me


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-Cprogress

hmmmmm...yea, this was a pretty close battle...the new guy put up a fight double 0 seven, almost gave ya the L here but he had one problem. First of all...I result the punches in a tie...I just couldnt decide here...u both came with sum pretty good stuff...espically vir...but ur personal punch was weak...you should of ripped his name or sumthin, that would of been better. 2nd...probably ur hardest punch...was stretched which really made it weaker when reading. I think thats what made Double 0 seven take the battle...If you worded that closer better....I believe you would of taken that battle. Structure and flow...I reward as a tie...Double 0 Sevens shit was straight...but Vir's did flow very nicely. No hate...just my opinions.

Vote- Double O Seven (Barely)

return the favour both of u by dropping honest votes on the battles in my signature please. Thank you.

yo im goin out soon, so i will if they are still open tomorrow!!!

it new years eve here in the U.K, an im off in bout 5 mins!!

do7 - hard punches. good multis. nice structure. not sure bout personals. vocab. nice flow.
7.8/10

virt - good punches. ok multis. nice structure. personals... ehh. not sure bout vocab. ok flow.

6.3/10

as you can see. teh vote was very close. but im gonna go with do7 on dis.

vote - do7

GEE close battle but i was fucken FEELIN virtuoso's
It was just flowin like crazy u can tell it wasnt pre-written
At time it was a lil childish about how u rhymed just about every word together but with a good punch at the end of the sentence its not even a problem.
Both ur punches were close but Virtuoso had more original ones and he kept on bombing them on u, 007 has a good structure. Closer both had good ones but avatars was more improvised
Opener----both were average
Metaphors----virtuoso

OVERALL ---- Virtuoso this is not a hate vote im just dealing with the facts
RETURN THE FAVOR PLZ IM GETTING SLEPT ON
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Opener: Both were kind of weak but 007 takes it just because it was more (mature )
Punches: 007
Personals: virt (Ur skillz-are-a~far, Ill send ya a stalker like the killer-in-ya-avatar,)
flow: tie
Structure: 007 I liked his because the lines werent stretched~
vocab: virt
closer: (Tie) both were nice...I liked the 3 set deal but I also liked the personal~

This battle is close but Im gonna give it to 007 by a small margin because of the stronger personals