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High Class -vs- FuE-xIoN
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No DR Votes No Hate Votes No Crew Votes No Free Posting No Feeding off verse 10-16 Lines Due Tommorow If I dont spit first for some un-known reason, just go ahead. I wont no show or pull any shit, so dont worry bout that hommie. |
High Class Verse
Im the new age, the revolution, or call me skillz evolution
You might know battles, but to enter one is your ' Execution ' 5-0 leaves me I-Rate, your dick-rides from noobs Vibrates Your lacking in the game, while im elevating at a High-Rate A new Gift, so get- rapped and sent off to me too get capped You lost already, I had your life-line cut in Elevated-Bitch-Slapped Fuck by the feet, I take ya whole body, and continuo to re-peat This win... My Key Treat... I dont see heat Im the " Mountain " you cant climb, for potential im too " Steep "... Now Time To Get Serious My Mind is Diverse, while Se-Quales leave yours Feeble Im known as lethal, " Your a Bitch "... Dont get mad hommie, Im just speaking for the people... So go Suicidle, Cause this Win and I are about to go Bridle ' Flywieght '... Im Higher in the Class, your way under my ' Title '? Pussy of America... Your libel... No questions this clown won that election Professions stray far, But I never knew Bitches get so much effection... ~1~ ( FlyWieight is under his hole title... get it ) Thats my verse, hope everyone understood some of the word-play. I hope you guys like my rhyme scheme, its a new type im trying... G/L hommie, be sure not to feed off my verse... My edit was to take out the explination |
What the fuck, I think he is ganna no show... You better not pul this shit if you think you might loose. Your elite, now act like it and put down your verse. It doesnt take 24 hours to write 16....
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This clown is ganna no-show because my verse is ganna win?
What the fuck, were the hell is this clown at? I Pm'd him and everything... He needs to be DQ'd and I get the win if he no-shows. I got proof he knows about this shit... |
Oh Man Do You Read Your Own Fucking Rules Dude
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Swaying Votes, You Hopped On X Ecutions Dick From The Start
How The Fuck You High Class When You Failed Your Report Card Wheres This Fag Been? I'll Take A Break And Be Back In Ten Simply Because This Kids Losses Are Already Half His Wins Potential Skripz In His Sig, Judging Spelling You Mustve Made It Lyrically Mutated, Damn Your So Wack Your Not Even Underrated He's Broke Cuz He Sold Text, His Entire Verse Is A Whole Wreck Periods In His Custom Title To Indicate This Bitch Wears Kotex Jay Pana Already Beating You, My Verse Will Leave You Wonderin Spiderman Movements? I Can Picture X Ecutions Dick Under Him Your Terror, I'll Attend Your Funeral And Dropkick Your Paul Bearers I'll Teach You The New Era, A High Class With Spelling Errors?? 12 Is All You Deserve You Wack Bitch |
I dont care about that... I just wanted a verse written. Thanks for showing up, it took you long enough... UPPIN #1
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High Class=Hot Punches Nice Flow And I Liked the Title Personal It Was Straight Nice Verse Son
Fue=His Setup Was Tite The Punches Were Hot and his Opener Was Funny As Fuck Also The Kotex Lmao U Came Better And Your Verse Was Funnier As Fuck So Vote=Fue |
Breakdown..
Punches-Fue Personals-Fue Meta's-Fue Structure-Fue Flow-Tie Multi's-Fue Wordplay-High Overall-Fue Someone poll vote on my battle against diverse :) |
Opening - Fue wit the personal
Punches-Fue Personals-Fue Meta's-Fue Flow-Tie Multi's-Fue Wordplay-High Closing - Fue again wit the persoanl Overall-Fue can ya please hit up my battle below and drop an honest vote... thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...712#post1048712 |
well this was a landslide...
fue with better punches and nicer structure the punches had more wit and they made sense he also had decent wordplay which took it for him peace |
^ Im sick of your lame votes. Describe it, and you expect to be a Mod? Please, follow the damn rules first. I understand what you mean by the vote. And I myself know he won. But thats no excuse to not make a proper vote. So please make another post that has a better explination. It would be much appriciated...
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Honestly what is ure problem?? you just said you know he beat you but you are gonna bitch cuz i didnt break down each bar?
And dont say I lame vote because i break down battles real well when it is necessary...not all battles are decent enough to be broken down without hurting people's ego...fine here is ure breakdown Fusion Swaying Votes, You Hopped On X Ecutions Dick From The Start How The Fuck You High Class When You Failed Your Report Card /\decent personal punch Wheres This Fag Been? I'll Take A Break And Be Back In Ten Simply Because This Kids Losses Are Already Half His Wins /\blah Potential Skripz In His Sig, Judging Spelling You Mustve Made It Lyrically Mutated, Damn Your So Wack Your Not Even Underrated /\decent punch He's Broke Cuz He Sold Text, His Entire Verse Is A Whole Wreck Periods In His Custom Title To Indicate This Bitch Wears Kotex /\lmao dope Jay Pana Already Beating You, My Verse Will Leave You Wonderin Spiderman Movements? I Can Picture X Ecutions Dick Under Him /\witty punch Your Terror, I'll Attend Your Funeral And Dropkick Your Paul Bearers I'll Teach You The New Era, A High Class With Spelling Errors?? /\decent personal High Class Im the new age, the revolution, or call me skillz evolution You might know battles, but to enter one is your ' Execution ' /\nope personal but worded booty 5-0 leaves me I-Rate, your dick-rides from noobs Vibrates Your lacking in the game, while im elevating at a High-Rate /\no punch wack multies A new Gift, so get- rapped and sent off to me too get capped You lost already, I had your life-line cut in Elevated-Bitch-Slapped /\blah Fuck by the feet, I take ya whole body, and continuo to re-peat This win... My Key Treat... I dont see heat Im the " Mountain " you cant climb, for potential im too " Steep "... /\first line ok second played and wack Now Time To Get Serious /\why even post that? My Mind is Diverse, while Se-Quales leave yours Feeble Im known as lethal, " Your a Bitch "... Dont get mad hommie, Im just speaking for the people... /\decent punch but structure is stretched like a mug So go Suicidle, Cause this Win and I are about to go Bridle ' Flywieght '... Im Higher in the Class, your way under my ' Title '? /\playing of [i]your[/n] name...no Pussy of America... Your libel... No questions this clown won that election Professions stray far, But I never knew Bitches get so much effection... /\blah there you have it dont think it was hate...i dont hate you i can careless about you...you have something against me and i dont care because net beef is gay...i vote fair period vote - fusion for better punches and consistency highclass you had maybe two bars that were decent... |
I didnt expect that much emerge... I just wanted a little somthing like you did in my other battle, thats all... I will peep your battle as soon as I can. Thank you for the full break down though...
UPPIN FOR HIS WINNING VOTE... good battle hommie... |
Damn I Forgot About This Shit, Uppin For The Final Vote.............................................
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high class....lacked with tha punches...it flow'd aight.....aight structure..... personals sucked.... not that creative....
fue....punches were there(liked bars 2 and 5)... flow'd good... good structure..... kilt it with personals... very creative... so vote-FuE-xIoN |
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