FreeYayo vs Blazin Caucasion
 

10 linez
u spit first
no crew votes
no hate votes
etc...
pz.

So I'm battlin this cat that calls himself Free Yayo/
I'm bout to hand this guy his fifth fuckin Ko yo/
Check it I'm fresha then that prince from the town of Belair/
Ya Skills are a myth like da witch named Blaire/
You aint neva gimmie a scare like freddy crouger/
This verse will murda ya cuz metaphorically its a german rouger/
Tha only time you see a deal is on tuesday at KFC/
Kid ya heads more inflated then Pam Andersons tits on VIP/
Now I know ya see me, up in the VIP booth/
Call me ya dental hygenist its painfull im rippin out cha tooth/
Tellin tha truth nobody cares how ya feel you aint neva gone make no deals/
Last time you was ridein big ya were 5 yrs old in ya power wheels/
Yayo cd gets packed away more then Vin Deisel packin fudge/
I jus sentenced ya to your 5th lose now smile n say thank you judge/

yo


blazin caucasion they should blaze you some caution
cuz u gonna run outta options and end up in that coffin/
I'm battlin' thiz wack fag even though I cant b bothered
I gotta be outta my mind, crazy, I think I lost it/
just like u gonna loze thiz fucking battle
u'r handled man who carez about the shit u mample/
u can count on losin' cuz my numbers do the shootin'
and the numbers are 187 dot45 6 as I'm used 2 it/
to close this thing, I'm gonna need a nice line to end this shit
I juzt like dissin' ya, u like snitchin' like 50 did on prince/

numbaz: 187 speakz for itself, .45, 6 as in six feet deep
about the 50 snitchin' line... plz don't vote against me for callin' 50 cent a snitch...

PZ.

Okay we both posted lets get sum votes up in here ppl !

and the rules were a mistake it was 10-15 lines !
so its all good
so vote it up
thx

uppin............................................. .................................................. ........x1

yo my vote dont count but im gonna vote for BC
i liked his verse brtter then free yayo's nothin against ya man im not a batteler myself you prolly better then me, but anyways ya both rookies like me so keep it up....

again my vote goes too..-Blazin Caucasion

if u ever should reach 100 posts don't forget to explain ya votez bruv, they only count when u say who had better punches personals etc...
PZ.

oh yeah man i know i wont forget thats cool
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Thx Tha real Young J
Man nobody ever votes in these battle's its nuts ? for the amount of people on this site I thought some people would be doin sum votein

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uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ............

fuckin vote already........................................... .................................................. ....

aight. let me break it downfor ya.

free - ok punches. ok flow. no multis. little vocab. 1 personal i think. ok drop.
5.7/10

blazin - bad punches. bad flow. multis were...ehh. no vocab. no personals. bad drop.
4.2/10

so this was a little obvious who won.

vote - free

wait wait wait. i made a terrible mistake. let me fix it.

blazin - ok punches. ok flow. no multis. little vocab. 1 personal i think. ok drop.
5.7/10

free - bad punches. bad flow. multis were...ehh. no vocab. no personals. bad drop.
4.2/10

so this was a little obvious who won.

vote - blazin
there we go. someone close my other post. the real vote is for BLAZIN

if i could vote on this site i would vote for blazin
But i was readin lil phresh vote and i was wonderin how you can judge flow on a text battle

everyone has different styles so you might not think it flows but the person that wrote it might be able to make it flow wicked
i was jus wonderin

Okay this site is fucked why the hell dont ppl vote on battle's ?

Ive had this open for over a week and its still not closed up yet
will sum more ppl vote already n close this so I can move onto more battles

i'll give this to blazin for the simple reason his verse was better with ok punchs, and he just dissed him harder.

free yayo opener was good, but then just didnt stay on that level and declined... so overall battle my vote goes to blazin

close this shit man I wanna start new battlez........................................... ....................

hey, this was a pretty weak battle, Blazin's verse was a lil' more creative, IF wack, but here's tha breakdown:

Open: Free
Close: Free
Flow: Free
Creativity: Blazin'
Multis: Free
Meta's: Blazin'
Enjoyment: neither

Vote: Free
It was just easier to get through than Blazin's verse.

Return tha favor and hit this shit up:

Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-strobe

^(B.F.K.)Not to freepost, but: Flow is judged on how easily the verse fits together as if it were spit to a beat. If a line is a LOT longer than tha one before it, and no matta how fast it's spit, it JUST DOESN'T FIT, that's where it's judged. We're all emcees, and we DO spit differently, but overall, if it doesn't work, it doesn't work.

thxz 4 the vote but plz hit it up cuz I still got 0 votez, I can't return the favor, need 100 postz. PZ.

My bad on tha weak explanation. This battle was tough to get through, and it didn't REALLY have a lot of punches, so I DID give it a weak breakdown. I usually give a lot better explanations for the battlez that I vote on. Check if you'd like (Strobe).

Blazin':

So I'm battlin this cat that calls himself Free Yayo/
I'm bout to hand this guy his fifth fuckin Ko yo/
^ehh, ok open, not a strong personal: 4/10

Check it I'm fresha then that prince from the town of Belair/
Ya Skills are a myth like da witch named Blaire/
^This was a wack line: 3/10

You aint neva gimmie a scare like freddy crouger/
This verse will murda ya cuz metaphorically its a german rouger/
^Spelled out meta, but decent line (NOT the first line tho): 6/10

Tha only time you see a deal is on tuesday at KFC/
Kid ya heads more inflated then Pam Andersons tits on VIP/
^ok punch, but didn't really hit hard: 5/10

Now I know ya see me, up in the VIP booth/
Call me ya dental hygenist its painfull im rippin out cha tooth/
^ehh, weak line: 3/10

Tellin tha truth nobody cares how ya feel you aint neva gone make no deals/
Last time you was ridein big ya were 5 yrs old in ya power wheels/
^Deals, huh? 4/10

Yayo cd gets packed away more then Vin Deisel packin fudge/
I jus sentenced ya to your 5th lose now smile n say thank you judge/
^aight close, nothin' great tho: 5/10

Free:

blazin caucasion they should blaze you some caution
cuz u gonna run outta options and end up in that coffin/
^like tha multi's, decent opener: 6/10

I'm battlin' thiz wack fag even though I cant b bothered
I gotta be outta my mind, crazy, I think I lost it/
^umm, ok, sure: 5/10

just like u gonna loze thiz fucking battle
u'r handled man who carez about the shit u mample/
^-What tha FUCK iz "mample"?!?!: 4/10

u can count on losin' cuz my numbers do the shootin'
and the numbers are 187 dot45 6 as I'm used 2 it/
^decent line wit' tha explanation: 6/10

to close this thing, I'm gonna need a nice line to end this shit
I juzt like dissin' ya, u like snitchin' like 50 did on prince/
^first line was filler, second was a decent close: 6/10

SO:

Blazin': 30/70 = 42.8% (not) ill

Free: 27/50 = 54% (not REALLY) ill (either, but came stronger in this battle -if I can say that)

And here's my battle link. Hit this up wit' some input and an honest vote.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103166

mample iz u know when someone talkin' quiet and shit, maybe itz spelled out otherwise but I'm from belgium and we dun talk english round here. And I mean votin' for me when I said hit it up, not explain it like that though I really appreciate that, I mean on top of the page put ya vote out. PZ.

Vote - Blazing

Way Better Lines..Even Though Their Were Pretty Weak He Came Out Better Then YaYo..YaYo Yah Verse Had Some Pretty Good Flow, I Seen A Lil Set Of Multies At Times..But I Didn't See Punchlines Harder Then Blazing Own..

Thx for the vote this battle wasnt great but will someone close it already its been open forever an i wanna battle more ppl

and Spekta u talk alota shit for havin sucha weak ass battle record,
How about me and u battle and u can be my 2nd victory

aight, this battle was pretty good.

blazin came out with some good shit, pretty good punches and good wordplay. overall a good verse.

freeyayo...pretty weak. had a few ok punches but they didnt really work too well. not enough wordplay to match blazin.

vote: blazin caucasion

i spent time on your battle, spend time on mine.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...adid=102139--vs 730

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...readid=101943-- vs prophacyz

close this shit blaze won
common yall gots ta close shit up in here.............................................. .................................................. .

You know how fucking retarded you are....
Young J is Blazin......You fucking queer
...go kill yourself..You're lucky your too wack
Or else I'd report it... but then again I might just report
Stupid Fucks now a days

your cool man it dont mattah i aint commin on this site any mo anyway so peace............................................. .........................................