Tha illest alive vs Metaphysik
 

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check in ....i'll spit in a minute.....
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aight yo....


You havent battled in 4 monthz? that dont make a difference/cuz you still as whack as you came and i'll prove it wit MetaPhysiks//
cuz my rapz are scientifical wit sort of a political twist/and tha only "Xplizit" about you is that your rapz aint "SHIT"//
you been here for over five monthz and its gotta be embarassin/when i make people forget about you just like your parentz did//
i'm underrated like a porno wit a PG ratin on it/you lack a hook like a fishin pole when JUST string and bate is on it//
i'm just enterin my prime and you LIE like Pathological/my ass aint from "Houston" but my rhymez are ASTRO-nomical//

letz get a verse in homie?..............
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checking in i'll drop in a lil bit man

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Aight check it

This kids dope, the only way you make hott bars is burning soap//
Punches leave you hanging for your life like "high fives" playing wit rope//

Your life exceeded its limits like websites wit unpaid bills over their date//
Your not great, looking directly ahead is the only time kid sees straight//

Punches leave you lost for breath like you misplaced your lungs//
Your spit has dried up like putting cotton slabs on your tongue//

I could touch your post and I still couldnt feel your flow//
This kid blows, making pizzas is the only time you stack dough//

Your "not into" long term relations like open mouths wit no dicks on dudes//
Like you misplaced your Guess Who game the way you lost a match you lose//




Bar 1: High five...people say dont leave me hanging
Bar 5:Guess Who...you have to match players

uppin for votes (1)

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hot battle............................punches were fvckin sweet, but i gotta g with 'meta', he overall came harder with some ill punches, man they really were....the flow an structure ripped the other guy up.......vote*meta

return the favour...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102154

aight heres my breakdown.........

flow-not availible in text......

structure-meta
vocab-tie
multis-tie
metas-the illest
wordplay-meta
punches-meta
personals-tie

overall- metaphisik

props to the both of ya........but ima say metaphisik takes this.....

just my 2 cents though...........

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illest alive
You havent battled in 4 monthz? that dont make a difference/cuz you still as whack as you came and i'll prove it wit MetaPhysiks//
6/10

cuz my rapz are scientifical wit sort of a political twist/and tha only "Xplizit" about you is that your rapz aint "SHIT"//
[b]6/10

you been here for over five monthz and its gotta be embarassin/when i make people forget about you just like your parentz did//
6/10

i'm underrated like a porno wit a PG ratin on it/you lack a hook like a fishin pole when JUST string and bate is on it//
5/10

i'm just enterin my prime and you LIE like Pathological/my ass aint from "Houston" but my rhymez are ASTRO-nomical//
7/10


nearly all your lines started off ill, but then you second line of every bar let u down!!

overall 30/50



metaphysik
This kids dope, the only way you make hott bars is burning soap//
Punches leave you hanging for your life like "high fives" playing wit rope//
7/10

Your life exceeded its limits like websites wit unpaid bills over their date//
Your not great, looking directly ahead is the only time kid sees straight//
7/10

Punches leave you lost for breath like you misplaced your lungs//
Your spit has dried up like putting cotton slabs on your tongue//
6/10

I could touch your post and I still couldnt feel your flow//
This kid blows, making pizzas is the only time you stack dough//
6.5/10

Your "not into" long term relations like open mouths wit no dicks on dudes//
Like you misplaced your Guess Who game the way you lost a match you lose//
6/10

overall 32.5/50




my vote metaphysiks

cert didnt poll it should be 2-0

uppin for votes (3) drop links and we'll hit them honestly

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Vote - Metaphsik

C'mon..He Actually Came Out To Battle..His Punchlines Weren't n00bieish..Meta Yah Verse Should've Had Some Multies And It Would've Been Even Better Though..While "The Illest Alive" Came Wack As Fuck..Elementary Punchlines And Shit That Didn't Even Make Sense..My Vote Goes To Metaphsik For Better Punchlines And Complexity Inside Of His Verse...

thanks for voting yall uppin (4)

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1 vote on this battle please

yo illest=verse was wack structure was wack no hot punches it was just funny cause it was wack and u need to elevate

meta=his verse was aite played out lines sentences were to stretched out and but the flow was better and i liked his punches better

vote=meta

^^clean your pm box..... uppin for votes (5)

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flow i think i would give to ILLEST ALIVE...but punches n structure ill give to metaphysik..n punches wins battles so he took it...but no dout illest came dope for a newb...i liked some of ur lines..could have been worded better..but u got potential..i just felt meta took this one...good battle though...

^^hey hitpanik.......

meta wins this hands down....the other kid illest was str8 up confusing....i mean he had like no punches and his structure was all over the place.....meta had alot better flo and harder punches to go wit sum sik wordplay.....

vote- meta