oCANti vs southernrapper
 

rules..
10 lines max
no bullshit votes n all that
spit soon or when u have time

O.k. do you care to go first or is this all eyez on me for the moment
Just let me know so I can either drop or relax.........................

no need to tape up the gloves u cant wia a punch, i saw u on the side of a milk carton and i ate u for lunch...

imma sew up ya mouth cuz no1 wants u 'hear',kats this is childsplay this is no1 to fear...

ya cant rhyme ya better off workin corners or bustin tables, i got ya voice horsed up and ya restlin stables...

no need to bust out the complex text this kat wont understand, im hard to get just call me general buz im in-demand...

just call me lebron cuz i skipped the next level, only time u could spit hot is when ya givin head to the devil...

spit soon.............................................i f u can............................................... .......................................

jus cuz u ate me for lunch/don't mean I aint tryn to escape

my plans are to head south/ and aim for the tailgate

squeeze through your loose whole/and make a shockin appearance

and play it off statin/ I always wanted to be a lost n found lyricist

headlines everywhere/ like a resurrected Tupac

If they ask what happened/ I'll tell'm I had to make a shit stop

then next it's to the hospital to make a sincere drop

of all the organs I took from u and give'em to a dyin cop




If yall can't figure out the style by now.......
I like to have a point/ A FOLLOWABLE STORY...........



DROP your votez

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yo~what~up vs. oCANti

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Opener ----southerner cuz he didnt feed it
Closer ---- southerner
Punches ----southerner just hit you more, yours was a story but not really directed fully at this guy
Metaphors----tie??????
Structure----I liked your story structure ----ocanti ----i liked southerners too, easy to read

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102450

return the favor and no hate votes, i hate those

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for the last time
no one is going to pull your hoe cards
if you just vote or even post for that matter.
I'm not lookin to win, but I am lookin for comments.
How am I ever suppose to elevate without feedback,
you geniuses.......................................... .....

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Well here is my thing oCANti and SR openers were very questionable but metaphoracally speaking ocanti got this one I mean with simple lines like found you on a milk box emcee say that millons of time. Closer ocanti gets it. Punchlines OcantI

My Vote ocanti

dickridin' mutha fucka....its all good up this shit dickheads......................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................

I have to say OCANTI, your style is different and HIP-HOP needs more of that and the way you were able to take and flip what he said blew my mind, but unfortunately in battle rap it's hard to do your thing with a poetic appearance, but keep elevatin and u might just change that.......

Opener: OCANTI-I liked how u came back at dude...that was fresh
Closer:SOUTHERN-I felt he hit harder battle wise
Punches:SOUTHERN-she really did'nt have any punches
Metaphors:OCANTI-her whole verse was a metaphor(tight one at that)
Structure:Tie-both had good structure I would like to see another battle

Overall:SOUTHERN-because punches are what really count in a battle
If I could vote...

Structure:southern
Opener: OCANTI
Closer: SOUTHERN - hit harder
Punches: SOUTHERN-she really did'nt have any punches
Metas: OCANTI -alot of the verse was a metaphor

Vote - Southern - harder punches win

VOTE ON THIS PLZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101455

LoL...Dope Battle

Punches-Southern
Personals-Neither
Creativity-Southern
Originality-oCANti
Wordplay-Southern
Multies-Neither
Vote-Southern

oCANti.. ya need ta work on punches
Southern.... welcome back homie...
Tight merking.....Good to see you back

This battle was allright...

Ocanti: Your verse was a good metaphor, but your punches were weak. Your wordplay was decent and so were your multies. Neither the opener or closer were really anything to talk about. The verse was creative, though.

Southern: Your verse was not really a metaphor at all. It was pretty much a lot of punches. Decent wordplay and all, and your multies were alright. Not that creative really. Your opener and closer was about as great as Ocanti's.

This is actually a real close vote for me to make, but I gotta go with Southern Rapper.

southern rapper-some ok punches, a lil werdplay, vocab was ok, overall, not very good

ocanti- punches were weak, werdplay was good, vocab was basic, overall, not very good either

Conclusion- souther rapper takes this because his punches and werdplay topped ocanti.

Since i took the time to drop my 2 cents on this battle, id appreciate if u did the same wit mine.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102686

much appreciated........

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I think oCanti, u would've been better off doin a blind spit cause once u saw his verse
that gave u the idea
u had a creative idea but this is a battle, and u lacked the necessary punches to win
southern rappers verse wasn't to great either but he had the punches and better overall verse for the battle
oCanti, I don't think u should be doin stories like dat
maybe u should do topicals or somethincause that was pretty good


vote=southern rapper

vote on my battle honestly http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103659