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High Class-vs-Chrit
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No Crew Votes No Hate Votes No Dick Rideing No Feeding Off verses exc... 10-16 Lines Due soon |
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Hit the john and shook my dick... and suprise High was left pissed...
Man you'll never be able to handle my bars... like a unicyclist Against the vets you shouldnt stand up... or like against Pana you bound to fall... Left beaten and bruised with straight headshots... like them photo booths in malls Where'd you get the nerve... with that record you cant hang with the best... And I'd say your verses were hot... dog... but they're more of a sausage fest Today's gotta be your day... After I'm done ya eyes will truly shine... Then watch as you get laughed off stage... like successful sets at Carolines I know you should post first but I couldnt wait dude... Cause I'd fall asleep... ...I mean ya so boring a dail-tone would hang up on you |
High Class Verse
I kick Femes, skip Seeds and destroy Chrits Dreams
Your Rank Gleams??? This Bitch only notice Shine when he is kissen this Ring ( My Ring ) Depress-ion after this battle, is what you'll be Left-in Apart of my sonning Collection... With all of your Dick ryders, Porno must be your profession So stay Aside, dont Imprivise and try to win this by Bribes You and skill collide??? Yea right, and Pigs Fly Your signature Fiction, please loose your weak Visions His punches simply Friction... Your prayers no longer work, I suggest switchen Religions This is just the caption, So keep ya seat-belt Fascend Eyes left Blackend... But that pussy of yours always ready for Action I stay Vicious, Leaving people like you scared Shit-less The future is going Down under... No longer delicous, didnt know crew's started raoming in heards of Bitches ( Wits End ) Nice verse hommie, I liked some of those punches. But we will see who gets the win... No one better DR in here... START THE VOTES |
Chrit
Hit the john and shook my dick... and suprise High was left pissed... Man you'll never be able to handle my bars... like a unicyclist lmao great bar punch Against the vets you shouldnt stand up... or like against Pana you bound to fall... Left beaten and bruised with straight headshots... like them photo booths in malls /\decent punch kinda filler Where'd you get the nerve... with that record you cant hang with the best... And I'd say your verses were hot... dog... but they're more of a sausage fest eh first line is gay Records mean shit Chrit you know that but second line made for a dope punch Today's gotta be your day... After I'm done ya eyes will truly shine... Then watch as you get laughed off stage... like successful sets at Carolines /\dope punch I know you should post first but I couldnt wait dude... Cause I'd fall asleep... ...I mean ya so boring a dail-tone would hang up on you /\meh almost filler decent punch HighClass I kick Femes, skip Seeds and destroy Chrits Dreams Your Rank Gleams??? This Bitch only notice Shine when he is kissen this Ring ( My Ring ) /\where is the punch??? Depress-ion after this battle, is what you'll be Left-in Apart of my sonning Collection... With all of your Dick ryders, Porno must be your profession /\flipped horribly not decent So stay Aside, dont Imprivise and try to win this by Bribes You and skill collide??? Yea right, and Pigs Fly /\this had potential for a good punch but you worded it badly Your signature Fiction, please loose your weak Visions His punches simply Friction... Your prayers no longer work, I suggest switchen Religions /\wack This is just the caption, So keep ya seat-belt Fascend Eyes left Blackend... But that pussy of yours always ready for Action /\not decent I stay Vicious, Leaving people like you scared Shit-less The future is going Down under... No longer delicous, didnt know crew's started raoming in heards of Bitches ( Wits End ) /\not good:( well this is no hate i broke it down properly since it was a decent battle vote - chrit better punches and overall better verse...props to highclass for trying though...elevate a lot more before you battle vets homie:( peace |
^ No Hate Hommie, it was a good vote ^
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Ok a good battle and I just got here so i dont bother dickridin like that othr kid..lemme break this down...
Hit the john and shook my dick... and suprise High was left pissed... Man you'll never be able to handle my bars... like a unicyclist sick line..nice punch Against the vets you shouldnt stand up... or like against Pana you bound to fall... Left beaten and bruised with straight headshots... like them photo booths in malls nice punch not hard hitting tho Where'd you get the nerve... with that record you cant hang with the best... And I'd say your verses were hot... dog... but they're more of a sausage fest this was funny..feelin that Today's gotta be your day... After I'm done ya eyes will truly shine... Then watch as you get laughed off stage... like successful sets at Carolines shitty..not feelin that I know you should post first but I couldnt wait dude... Cause I'd fall asleep... ...I mean ya so boring a dail-tone would hang up on you funny but indirect again.. Overall not a bad verse..had a coupleabove average line and a couple average lines with a shitty one too tho..nice work.. I kick Femes, skip Seeds and destroy Chrits Dreams Your Rank Gleams??? This Bitch only notice Shine when he is kissen this Ring ( My Ring ) Nice multi's, decent punch coulda been flipped better tho Depress-ion after this battle, is what you'll be Left-in Apart of my sonning Collection... With all of your Dick ryders, Porno must be your profession This was hot, really feelin that..flipped nicely So stay Aside, dont Imprivise and try to win this by Bribes You and skill collide??? Yea right, and Pigs Fly WACK Your signature Fiction, please loose your weak Visions His punches simply Friction... Your prayers no longer work, I suggest switchen Religions Weak This is just the caption, So keep ya seat-belt Fascend Eyes left Blackend... But that pussy of yours always ready for Action indirect but a punch i guess I stay Vicious, Leaving people like you scared Shit-less The future is going Down under... No longer delicous, didnt know crew's started raoming in heards of Bitches ( Wits End ) Not bad..decent Your verse was average overall..nothin that overwhelmed any other part.. Vote : Chrit for harder punchs although this was close.. i think both emcees came weak.. holla |
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aight heres my breakdown........
flow-not availible in text structure-chrit vocab-high multis-tie metas-tie wordplay-chrit punches-chrit personals-high overall-chrit props to the both of ya, but ima say chrit takes this........... yo can u please return the favor and drop an honest vote here? I know your vote didn't count because you can't poll yet, but if you did vote, it would have been disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote. -Cprogress much appreciated....... |
i cant vote so i been postin but i gotta say chrt u own but high class i rly felt urs
anyway this dont cont at all but vote:high 4 better puches flow and jus the way i found it |
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Damn ya'll need to vote... |
Upping I suppose
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UPPIN #5 .................................................. ...................................... ( Hey Chrit, what did you think of my verse ) |
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Wasnt bad.... Need to elevate some yet.... |
CHRIT
Hit the john and shook my dick... and suprise High was left pissed... Man you'll never be able to handle my bars... like a unicyclist ok'ish opener.... 6/10 Against the vets you shouldnt stand up... or like against Pana you bound to fall... Left beaten and bruised with straight headshots... like them photo booths in malls lol, very nice lol... made me laugh... 8/10 Where'd you get the nerve... with that record you cant hang with the best... And I'd say your verses were hot... dog... but they're more of a sausage fest lmao... hotdogs... keepin me laughin here man... 8/10 Today's gotta be your day... After I'm done ya eyes will truly shine... Then watch as you get laughed off stage... like successful sets at Carolines ok'ish again, nothin special.... 5/10 I know you should post first but I couldnt wait dude... Cause I'd fall asleep... ...I mean ya so boring a dail-tone would hang up on you lol, nice again... abit stretched maybe? 6/10 overall... 33/50 HIGH CLASS I kick Femes, skip Seeds and destroy Chrits Dreams Your Rank Gleams??? This Bitch only notice Shine when he is kissen this Ring ( My Ring ) not bad, but not good... 5/10 Depress-ion after this battle, is what you'll be Left-in Apart of my sonning Collection... With all of your Dick ryders, Porno must be your profession lol, liked that bar.... made me laugh.... 8/10 So stay Aside, dont Imprivise and try to win this by Bribes You and skill collide??? Yea right, and Pigs Fly nice.... at his throat still..... 6/10 Your signature Fiction, please loose your weak Visions His punches simply Friction... Your prayers no longer work, I suggest switchen Religions lmao... that was good... 8/10 This is just the caption, So keep ya seat-belt Fascend Eyes left Blackend... But that pussy of yours always ready for Action nice again.... 6/10 I stay Vicious, Leaving people like you scared Shit-less The future is going Down under... No longer delicous, didnt know crew's started raoming in heards of Bitches ( Wits End ) not good at all tbh... far too stretched 0/10 overall... 33/60 vote - chrit his verse had me laughin most of the way through.... and he beat him on points neway :) |
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forgot my link..... sorry bout that...... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102771 thanks |
HighClass, nice attempt but like emerge said you need to elevate more before actually battling vet's like chrit..No hate not trying to say im better or anything..Chrit just had more consitent and harder hitting punches better structure and more meta's also was more complex.. HighClass you verse wasn't bad at all just that you got out done with punches and complexity..keep it up dawg.. you'll get there aventualy..
Overall-Chrit |
Can Both Of You please return the favor and post honest votes on my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102534 Thank You.. Much Appriciated Peace |
man it's like this the battle was good I have read verse's that was better then both but structure and ending is what got chrit the battle. High Class you are a decent mc but your structure needs major work your punches where better but the structure made the punch take to long to hit
Winner Chrit |
^ Its called a rhyme scheme, maybe you should learn that mine was switched up. So the structure changes with it... ^
Good votes from all of you... thx for the honesty... |
ALL OF YA ARE DYCK RYDERS...THAT BOY HIGH CLASS RIPPED CHRIT.......AND IM NOT DYCK RYDIN....REAL TALK LOOK AT THE CATEGORIES....STILL THO CHRIT CAME HARD AS FUCK...BUT i STILL THINK THIS BATTLE IS hIGH CLASSES....MUCH LOVE CHRIT..YOU NICE BOY...
FLOW=HIGH STRUCTURE=CHRIT PERSONALS=CHRIT PUNCHES=HIGH CREATIVITY=HIGH MULTIS=HIGH ENTERTAINMENT=BOTH AGRESSION=HIGH VOTE=HIGH CLASS I WILL POST WHEN I GET 100...IT'LL BE REAL SOON THO HEY YALL...SEE WHATS REALLY GOOD WITH MY BATTLES HEY YALL VOTE ON MY BATTLE..J GOODZ VS. FREEMAN |
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No wonder you are 0-2 |
ok here's tha basic breakdown
punches:chrit structure:chrit entertainment:chrit flow:both originality:both personals:chrit multies:high overall this wuz an ok battle but high should work on some better punches-overall vote:chrit |
Guess I'll break this one down:
[Hit the john and shook my dick... and suprise High was left pissed... Man you'll never be able to handle my bars... like a unicyclist] Eh, ok I guess [Against the vets you shouldnt stand up... or like against Pana you bound to fall... Left beaten and bruised with straight headshots... like them photo booths in malls] The headshots idea is funny. [Where'd you get the nerve... with that record you cant hang with the best... And I'd say your verses were hot... dog... but they're more of a sausage fest] This had potential but you could have done more with it than "sausage fest." Still good though [Today's gotta be your day... After I'm done ya eyes will truly shine... Then watch as you get laughed off stage... like successful sets at Carolines] ok. [I know you should post first but I couldnt wait dude... Cause I'd fall asleep... ...I mean ya so boring a dail-tone would hang up on you] ha, ok, I like it... and I know the feeling. Overall a very good verse but I think it could have been worded a little better in some places. [I kick Femes, skip Seeds and destroy Chrits Dreams Your Rank Gleams??? This Bitch only notice Shine when he is kissen this Ring ( My Ring )] I hate this pseudo-mafioso bullshit. [Depress-ion after this battle, is what you'll be Left-in Apart of my sonning Collection... With all of your Dick ryders, Porno must be your profession] Nope, sorry, doesn't work. [So stay Aside, dont Imprivise and try to win this by Bribes You and skill collide??? Yea right, and Pigs Fly] Eh, ok. [Your signature Fiction, please loose your weak Visions His punches simply Friction... Your prayers no longer work, I suggest switchen Religions] His punches are friction? what the fuck? [This is just the caption, So keep ya seat-belt Fascend Eyes left Blackend... But that pussy of yours always ready for Action I stay Vicious, Leaving people like you scared Shit-less The future is going Down under... No longer delicous, didnt know crew's started raoming in heards of Bitches ( Wits End )] Its just not as good as Chrits verse, plain and simple. Two things to notice - Chrit actually made sense... and he looks like he can spell at more than a fourth grade level. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103069 |
Yeah High-Class came pretty strong, but there was nothin' In his verse I peeped that stood out, cuz I think Chrit came stronger, especially the closer
"I know you should post first but I couldnt wait dude... Cause I'd fall asleep... ...I mean ya so boring a dail-tone would hang up on you" That was sik, no hate, good battle but Chrit spit stronger. Return da fava http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102895 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102895 |
opener - Chrit got this, witty opener.. High - there was nothin there man, elevATE
punches - this I have to give to High Class.... "Depress-ion after this battle, is what you'll be Left-in Apart of my sonning Collection... With all of your Dick ryders, Porno must be your profession" niiice, with personal, punch, multi's all rolled into one Chrit - saw a lot of filler there, nice wordplay but not hard hitters Personals - Tie in this, both had a couple of ok personals, but nothin to really talk about Multi's - High Class. Chrit not really any multi's, though I really don't think multi's are important to win a battle, but whatever Closer - Blah. Chrit for using a personal bout the spittin first, but neither was hot. Overall I have to say Chrit stayed consistant, and all though in a few catagories High Class took it more, Chrit's opener and consistant wordplay made the read enjoyable. didn't get the same from High's cept that one punch... not enough to take it though honest vote, yall hit my shit up with the same http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...threadid=102949 |
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