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Yu Bin SunD VS Tha Duce
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check in 30mins to drop if u don't drop rite afta i drop in it's 2:00 am here due time 2:35 if u don't drop by then i'll make sure ur battle is lost hollaz and good luck
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Shawn Rainy Sorry This Is A Battle..Not A Contest Of Who Can Pleasure Dicks..(his aim)
My Skillz Like Broken Rulers..Son You Can't Measure It.. I'll Rape This Ass..And He Responded But Dawg I'm Already Soar.. I'm 17..I Respect My Elders But Not This Broke Male Pussy Dats 24..(his age) You'll Never Get Air..Like This Bitch Is Lungless.. Only Thing That Should Come Out Your Mouth But God Forbid You..Should Be A Tounge Ring.. Like Spillin Cement Buckets..I Dump This Hard.. Everyone Is All Ova Ya Bars..Like Clumsy Kids On Monkey Bars.. When I'm Spittin These Bars You Besta Drop.. Cuz I'll Serve This Cat Faster Than Vietnamese Restaurants.. You Just Got A Mean Domestic Violence Of Rhymes N Ya Flows Been Abused... Cause Afta I Murk This Fuckin No Lifer I'll Chunk His Hoe A Big Duce...(his name) |
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what... Yu Bin SunD-ly Killed...skillz Unfullfilld//
Cat settin Deadlines.. dont he Know this is tha End-of-tha-line// Coveted battle title...only the victorious seek it/ While Bin shows up a pussy like Victoria's Secret // Notoriously dressin' in sequins, spittin' in a bitch's stance/ Don't know whether to battle you or unzip my pants// In court they asked for your depostition// claiming you and jackson were in tha action of Juxtaposition// but the secrets out... getting to heated an fussin.. No Confustion// Thermosetting Compositions.... and you wonder tha reaction// why do 6 year olds look at you wit physical attraction// wow Yu Bin SunD-ly rub'd into satifaction...you a Jackson?// If so fix your face bitch before I rape your moms with broken broomstick// fuck her in the ass with a spiked dick... an kodak the shit// an get off my dick.... an suck it till I break that fat lip// *NOTE* If you dont know all the words meaning look them up or Dont Vote... Plain and simple... good drop dawg good luck |
lmao, dis battle was hilarious. You both had me laughin...but my vote goes to duce...I will explain why.
see...Yu Bin SunD...to me atleast, you were inconsistent and keep loosing momentum a lot. Now when rapping...if you have a good punch here, a crap one here, then a good one, it wont have the same effect as crap one-good one-good one. Understand what i'm saying...that is why I felt Tha Duce's punches hit harder...he was mroe consisent with delivering good ones. Even tho Tha Duce's punches were kinda sex lines...they were funny as hell. "Coveted battle title...only the victorious seek it/ While Bin shows up a pussy like Victoria's Secret // Notoriously dressin' in sequins, spittin' in a bitch's stance/ Don't know whether to battle you or unzip my pants//" I think those four bars right there won the battle...notice how they all are in a sequence...2 hard hitting bars in a row. I believe the other categories aren't necessarily worth breaking down since when one opponent clearly beats another in terms of punches and wit...it is pretty much a decided battle. You both did have sum strectched lines tho... "You'll Never Get Air..Like This Bitch Is Lungless.. Only Thing That Should Come Out Your Mouth But God Forbid You..Should Be A Tounge Ring.." Vote- tha duce return the favour by dropping honest votes on the battles in my signature please. Thank You. |
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aight i know i cant poll vote, but heres my breakdown.........
flow-not availible in text structure-tie vocab-tha multis-tie metas-tha punches-yun personals-yun overall-yun fact is punches win battles and i was feelin yun bin sunds more........props to the both of ya, this was a tight battle........... I know your vote didn't count because you can't poll yet, but if you did vote, it would have been disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote. -Cprogress |
flow- Tha Duce edges this one out, his was beter when i rapped it
structure-tie, both emcees focused on punches it seems multis-tie, both pretty good metas- I think yun takes this with some good shit punches-yu's were good personals-yu's personal about him being 24 was really good, he takes this overall Vote-Yu |
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hmm interesting battle...
QUOTABLES: Yu Bin SunD Shawn Rainy Sorry This Is A Battle..Not A Contest Of Who Can Pleasure Dicks..(his aim) My Skillz Like Broken Rulers..Son You Can't Measure It.. that was the only line close to being original in ya whole verse, as it had a personal in it, as what ima say next might be a shock... im hoping that your just using loads of played lines in ya verse, but ive got a suspicion that youve been biting various lines from battles, cos all the rest of your lines have been played out since last year, and i know you didnt just happen to think of all them played lines at once... but based on the lyrics, too much played shit, lacked originality, this verse might have been tight 2 years ago when the line were original... Tha Duce nothing great from ya verse, like a quotable that stood out, but you had a consistant verse, some nice idea's but you didnt really flip them that well, they could of been a lot harder punches... i couldnt really dig ya rhyme scheme, as you had an on and off flow, and multi's just chucked in everywhere... but your content didnt suffer from it, so it didnt really matter for text battles... this is a hard battle to call... id give flow and maybe just edging out personals to Yu Bin SunD, but give originaliy and creativity of the whole verse to The Duce, as Yu Bin SunD had soooooo much played shit, i wouldnt even take it into account as his verse... a tough call, but i feel The Duce had this... Yu Bin SunD, you need to come with original idea's, not looking thru old battles and using lines you think are good, when the line has been donce once, or twice maximum, thats it, let it go... you really suffered, cos your whole verse was played lines, and just a couple lines that seemed directed at ya opponent... and dont reply in here bitching about acusing you of biting, cos i could easily find evidence to all them lines that are played, but you just wording it different, im well known for catching biters, so dont test me with that i dont know what im saying... |
I have to go with duce yu had until I saw a few punchlines that masta ace used on his battle against boogieman on lyricist lounge underground.
Duce- Wins for not biting |
wtf are ya talkin about lmao herbs always thinkin they vote rite jedi go get u some wins and posts and then come takl shit son till then sht the fuck up son
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flow- Tha Duce was beter
multis- tie metas- Yu punches-Yu s were tighter and harder personals-The one about 24 was good which really added to me voting for him Vote - yu vote on this plz jus one more vote needed http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101455 |
Yo Yu u forgot to poll vote on my battle wit Ill Fresh man do it so It can close allready lol...........~1~....................
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FLOW=DUCE STRUCTURE=DUCE PERSONALS=DUCE PUNCHES=BOTH CREATIVETY=DUCE MULTIS=YIN SUN ENTERTAINMENT=THE WHOLE BATTLE WAS FUNNY AGRESSION=DUCE VOTE=DUCE I WILL VOTE WHEN I AM AT 100 ************************************************** ** VOTE MINES..I VOTE YOURS...J GOODZ VS. FREEMAN |
Yu Bin SunD - Wasnt that good of a verse. The punches were thrown, but never made full contact. I liked the fact that you attempted to put personals in there. Also there is a punch in there I really like, the monkey barz line... Not a great verse, could have been worded better and more creative...
The Duce - You had a pretty weak verse also. The punches were thrown and didnt make full contact either. It would have been a better choice to throw some personals in there. Those are a huge part of battles. They can make a nice impact on your opponent. The verse was just to simple, keep elevating hommie. Vote - Yu Bin SunD Conclusion - His personals got this battle. He had a little more effect with a witty punch in there. A weak battle, but there is an obvious winner here. Keep it up hommies... |
Return the favor please and make an honest vote on the battle between me and Chrit in my sig. It would be much appriciated. Remember I took my time to make this vote, please do the same.
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Closer battle than fucken another battle that was fucken REAL CLOSE.
The Duce took it, hes good, good flow, good punches, ha "should i just unzip my fly" that line was good, rhymed and flowed good about the whole jackson thing though alot of others use that theme he pulled it off well Sund u had some good stuff too, "serve this kat faster than a vietnamese restaurant" honestly though its more so the koreans that fancy that shit, from what i hear......anyway Opener----TIe closer----Duce punches----Duce overall----Duce Close but good battle NOT A HATE VOTE.....Just dealing with the facts please hit up mine its getting slept on http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102450 |
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punches y: I'll Rape This Ass..And He Responded But Dawg I'm Already Soar.. I'm 17..I Respect My Elders But Not This Broke Male Pussy Dats 24..(his age metas y: Like Spillin Cement Buckets..I Dump This Hard.. multies duce: Thermosetting Compositions.... and you wonder tha reaction// why do 6 year olds look at you wit physical attraction// wow Yu Bin SunD-ly rub'd into satifaction...you a Jackson?// personals y: I'm 17..I Respect My Elders But Not This Broke Male Pussy Dats 24..(his age) flow both: both verses were good and wasnt stretched that much consistancy both: both continued to diss eachother throughout overall y: i gotta go with yu bin sund no hate both peep some links in my sig please .................................................. .............. .................................................. .............. |
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yu got this shit it was close battle its juss duce's verse wasnt strong enough and his unches wasnt hard hitting.yu also had better flow and better wordplay.
VOTE:YBS i need 1 more honest vote on this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102394 |
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