Yo What Up vs. Soulfire
 

aight son........

10 lines

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verses due 30 min after check in.......

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verses will be due in 30 min after that..........

Aight yo. May the best man win.
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aight here we go...........

yo its no question that i spit-mean, honestly kid u do ya best but u aint shit-to-me/
i rip-emcees, dam ur wack, ur record says 1-0, but really u aint fit-for-me/

u can sit-an-feed, my modes-on-flame, but like vince carter dunkin, im just "ova-ya-game"/
its the end of the road-to-ya-name, u could put a loaded nine to my head and still not know the "code-to-aim"/

im on top-of-my-game, it dont take a genius to realize its gonna be another 5-to-0, cause theres no way ur gonna survive-my-blows/
im alive-u-know, i cant be stopped, so i take it upon myself to drive-this-show/

im alive-u-know, my whole-verse-is-finer, this cat states hes sick of gettin served but yet he "owns-a-diner"/
im the fuckin sole-sourvivor, im relenteless, i dip u in gasoline just to light ur "soul-on-fire"/

i control-this-minor, this guy sees-dicks, and deep down its obvious u really wanna be-a-chick/
my punches hit like 30-bricks, shit, the only chance u have of comin close would be to re do my shit in a remix/

EXPLANATIONS-
pretty damn easy to follow but for u stupid bitches

1st bar- his records 1-0

2nd bar- when vince carter dunks hes over everybody else playin, his punches couldnt hit me from point blank range

3rd bar- self explanitory

4th bar-if u own a diner they SERVE food, his name is soul fire

5th bar- he could only beat me if he re did my own verse
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waitin on u.........its been about a half an hour and i gotta go soon, so hurry up and drop..........u checked in at 1240 est. its 1 est......u have 10 min.............

shit.........yall should let people edit there own posts so it can prevent me from havin to make a whole seperate post to correct myself.............

the last line in the third bar is supposed to say..........

i ride-this-ho, i cant be stopped, so i take it upon myself to drive-this-show/

i was thinkin to fast, cause then in the fourth bar i typed the same multis, so instead of im alive-u-know in the third bar its supposed to say i ride-this-ho..........

none of yall better say i used the same multi twice..........cause i just corrected it..........hurry ur ass up soulfire and drop.............u got 5 min now...........

Yo what up ain't nobody tell you Soulfire is serious,
When I spit my rhymes out bitch I'm fuckin' delirious,
I blow up the fuckin' spot son, wherever I go,
Everybody's head turns, cause Soulfire's the show,
Yo, bitch, play with fire and your gonna burned,
After this brutal ass kickin' bitch I hope you will learn,
Challenging me was the worst mistake you ever made,
After this battle I'm gonna fuckin' piss on your parade,
So next time your dumb ass gets on RB to play games,
Remember this, you fuckin bitch, don't mess with lone flame.

Yo, good battle. Let's get some votes in this piece.

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that were a tite battle, gotta go wit......... 'vir' some of his punches were hot as a mo'fvcker.......structure the lot were all good.......souls, u were pretty sweet an all.....but ure punches lacked to 'yo'. An as well need to do is work on the structure.......vote*yo

Ill poll vote when i can, ill keep the link handy fo ya's.....should be rdy fo tomoz....so keep the vote counting.....or PM if i fo'get.

return the favour....http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102698

^^^aight thanx homie...........much appreciated...........

UPPIN!!!!! #1.........

fuck 100 characters fuck 100 characters fuck 100 characters

Uppin #1
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UPPIN #2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

cmon now............this is a pretty tight battle, lets get some votes up in herre.............

aight soulfire took this

his structure was much better and his vocab and wordplay were better. this battle didnt really have that many punches or personals but i think that soulfire won this

good battle

hit this up with an honest vote

i need one more
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102465

return the favor cuz i took the time

LMFAO...........i had punches, and i had a personal line.........sorry holmes but structure doesnt win a battle..........and yea, he had structure on me, but i had multis, metas, wordplay, punches, and personals..........seriously dude.............ur opinion though, ill drop my 2 cents on ur battle, but whateva..........i think thats bullshit though...........

This was tight:
flow:Soul
vocab:tie
multies:Yo
punches:Yo

This was a tight battle man Soul had some good lines but Yo What up had tha punches.

Hit this up with a honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&postid=1022645

yo...I think that soulfire took this one....soulfire had more battle points than YO WHATS UP....

aggressivness=soulfire
flow=soulfire
punches=yo whats up
creativity=yo whats up
multis=soulfire

vote=soulfire

LMFAO @ ALL THIS BULLSHIT.........u can say he took it in "agressnivness", but not multis........did u read my verse.........THE WHOLE FUCKIN THING WAS MULTIS...........AND PUNCHES WIN BATTLES, NOT FUCKIN FLOW OR "AGGRESSIVNESS".........GOD DAMN......dickridin at its finest..........

1-1 still..........

UPPIN #3.........

LETS GETS SOME VOTES FROM PEOPLE WHO ACTUALLY KNOW SHIT ABOUT BATTLES!!!!!!

LETS GO PEEPS!!!!!!!

aite battle before feedback vote on this battle afta please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102633

yo=his structure was wack flow was smooth had some nice punches but dawg if u wanna battle vets on site ur gonna need to elevate son
soulfire=only thing that was nice was his setup he had no punches watsoever i didn't like his verse i thought he was gonna win but nope

vote=yo got this

i know im workin on it..........im tryin to elevate more.............but thanx for the vote homie.............

2-1 me............

OPener ---- Tie but none really
closer ---- Yo whut up
Punches----Yo whut up
Structure----soulfire ---- it was jus easier to read
metas//similes----Yo whut up
Soulfire your shit rhymed, but you didnt fuck him up enough, get personal even though u dont know this kid u gotta fucken talk mad shitttttt using metaphors, just remember that, create imagery for the audience and metaphors------vote-----whut up-----------go return the favor at PaddyMan vs Kuntryboi part TWO and Paddyman vs illestspitta ----- i just need them closed thanks

^^^i cant poll vote..........but ill leave my feedback...........thanx for the vote...........

3-1 me..........

UPPIN #4!!!!!!!!!!

LETS GET SOME MORE VOTES UP IN THIS SHIZNIT!!!!!!!!!!

AHHHHHHHHH 100 CHARACTERS SUCKS!!!!!!!!!

Yo What Up, there wasn't no dickridin' around this battle. I hear you talkin' but I don't think your shit was all that.

In fact, if I had to say, I'd say there was some dickridin' goin' on around YOUR votes. I 'll give you some props, but you wasn't bangin' your shit like all that.

in my opinion soulfire took this it was a good battle but he had more subjects ttooken like flow,punches,and his disses was dope. YWU u need to work on ur punches and flow and you'll be tight.

Vote:soulfire

vote here please i need 1 mo honest 1
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=2

^^^soulfire, how the fuck is that not dickriding, i took it in punches and creativity, u took it in flow and aggressivness.......sorry kid but punches win battles........im not gonna bitch about the dude who voted above me cause he thought u took it in punches.......so i dont really care, but this dude says u beat me cause ur more aggressive?......cmon now.......

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^^^lol......u gonna get warned for dat ho..........i didnt know u signed up here.........u gotta get in some battles though, u tight..........just dont use that nasty ass grammar.............and if u left some feedback that would be nice.......im glad u could jump on my dick and follow me to this site though.........

ok look GaZeeBo what you said about this battle is whack structure n vocab dont win a battle there wusnt even vocab in soulfires verse your d/r him we all no it delerious is th ebiggest wor din his verse n ive used that werd 2 rhyme more then once...
but anyway....
My Opinion-Yo What Up took this easily lots of multies n metas his punches came hard liked the line about he hates to be SERVED yet he oowns aDINER hot shit on that one a few other ones ill pour GASOLINE on ya to set YA SOUL ON FIRE
had me rollin he got structure over u easier to understand altho i understood yours pretty easily Yo got flow multies metaspunches
personals vocab goes to NONE GaZeeBo dont no what vocab is...
cauz his vocab only reaches fourth grade...
My VOte-Yo What Up
yall check any of mah shit in sig out n my song Skillz n my Open mic Burnin CD'z.... ThanX............
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Yo, I'm tellin' you again son, there was no dickridin' goin' on my verse. Everybody who voted (with the exception of Paddyman and possibly Bugz) said this shit was a tight battle. I don't know if some of your votes was dickridin' or not, but we don't need to do no bitchin'. May the best man win.

Uppin #2
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whateva.........

UPPIN #5!!!!!!

CMON NOW...............LETS GET SOME VOTES HERE................

Uppin # 3

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Uppin #4
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Uppin #5
THIS IS IT YA'LL. LET'S GET SOME VOTES IN THIS PIECE. COME ON NOW.

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Yo Whatup B is DQd for uppin way more than 5 times.. ANY POST YOU MAKE OTHER THAN YOUR VERSE AND CHECK IN counts as an UP... Freepost in a thread like this again and your banned B.