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Trivia101 .vs. Threats!
10 Lines Max
No Crew/Newbie Votes All votes must be well explained. Good luck homie, post when your done. |
[ A Body Rolls Into A Morgue ] - Coroner: What happened to him? - Paramedic: Mental Failure... - Coroner: ........what? - Paramedic: He tryed to battle Threats! - Coroner: When will these kids learn..... Trivia is a little slow, but I`ll still slap this hoe He cant hand me no-el.. christmas was a week ago Your weak bro, face the facts, your just a fool Cause I`m passing 101.. like the basics of school Get drowned in a pool, Trivs whole style is stank & I`ll give him more chin-checks.. than asian banks Leave ya rolled over by this tank, your the queer type N ya career hit the ground running ..... for dear life I`ll slice ya with my knife, watch me murder my foe Cause Triv couldnt save himself.. switching to Geico. - Coroner: Thats too bad.. he had his whole life in front of him. [ Coroner begins the autopsy & the lights go out on stage ] |
There I keyed my verse up, so dont be taking all day and shit to be posting up ten fucking lines, you wanted to battle and I even posted first. Dont feed off my verse either girly man.
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Yo check it
First of all what tha fuck kinda name is threats, when u were small u took 2 long on ya mommas breasts, This fuckin fag new, wit only 24 posts, bitch Ill pull ya fuckin brain through ya muthafuckin nose, got to go back on those gieco commercials, and if u wuz a bitch u couldn't get a lap dance from steve urcle, he says he's form Alaska da cold ass state, This bitch has 2 go fishin in his backyard to get a dinner plate, this nigga wasn't ready to battle esecially against me, nigga stay in alaska cus youll get murderd in nc. |
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Opener----NO ONE FOR PADDY'S SAKE
Closer----Trivia Punches----if there was a good one it was threats "more chin checks than asian banks" HA-good but set up.... Creativity----Threats Overall Threats takes this, work on better punches, try to not set them up as everyone refers to as "PLAYED" and if you drop a good punch and you KNOW IT, maintain that standard or youll fall off As for Trivia just work on better punches nigga, keep elevatin, try to use more complex vocab, keep uppin your game and have more original shit RETURN THE FAVOR when you CAN vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101696 |
i really have to agree with the dude above me on this one...
Threats had a couple of good punches, which really stood out in the battle and edged him the win, but he did have a couple played lines which kinda threw off the overall standard of it... Trivia just needs a lot of elevation, his lines were too simple, nothing really direct or hard that stood out in his verse, which is why i edged out Threats more in this battle... just keep at it though... really punches was threats, all thought a couple played ones let him down... both of you lacked personals, which didnt make this the greatest of battles, lacked originality in ya verses... flow and multi's were pretty even, maybe threats edging this area... they were the main deciding factors in the battle, the rest was kinda weak from both... props to both emcee's, but Threats gets my vote... if either of you two could vote on my battle with buzzkill, drop an honest vote, we'd both appreciate it, thanks. 1. |
Overall battle was a lil bit onesided.....Threats came out good with some nice disses and some witty concepts, like the chin checked punch....and the runnin for dear life punch.....nice verse...
Trivia came with the structure but the punches were lackin, no real complexity in your verse and that caused you to lose.... vote Threat Sorry i can't poll vote yet...but if y'all could return the fav..... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102139 |
Threats!
Trivia is a little slow, but I`ll still slap this hoe He cant hand me no-el.. christmas was a week ago Weak punch... Your weak bro, face the facts, your just a fool Cause I`m passing 101.. like the basics of school Played...but straight Get drowned in a pool, Trivs whole style is stank & I`ll give him more chin-checks.. than asian banks Weak.... Leave ya rolled over by this tank, your the queer type N ya career hit the ground running ..... for dear life Dope punch.... I`ll slice ya with my knife, watch me murder my foe Cause Triv couldnt save himself.. switching to Geico. Kinda weak..but somewhat dope Ya need work on ya punches Try usin personals too.... Ya verse was pretty weak till the end... Overall......7/20 Trivia101 Yo check it First of all what tha fuck kinda name is threats, when u were small u took 2 long on ya mommas breasts, Momma joke...PLAYED This fuckin fag new, wit only 24 posts, bitch Ill pull ya fuckin brain through ya muthafuckin nose, Played...ya say Fuckin to much got to go back on those gieco commercials, and if u wuz a bitch u couldn't get a lap dance from steve urcle, Played...weak he says he's form Alaska da cold ass state, This bitch has 2 go fishin in his backyard to get a dinner plate, Personal... this nigga wasn't ready to battle esecially against me, nigga stay in alaska cus youll get murderd in nc. Straight...Good punch Ya need ta work on tha punches Flow was straight.. Personal was dope.. ya need more Structure was ok... needs a lil work Overall.....8/20 |
MY break
Trivia is a little slow, but I`ll still slap this hoe He cant hand me no-el.. christmas was a week ago Weak punch... Your weak bro, face the facts, your just a fool Cause I`m passing 101.. like the basics of school Played...but straight Get drowned in a pool, Trivs whole style is stank & I`ll give him more chin-checks.. than asian banks Weak.... Leave ya rolled over by this tank, your the queer type N ya career hit the ground running ..... for dear life Dope punch.... I`ll slice ya with my knife, watch me murder my foe Cause Triv couldnt save himself.. switching to Geico. Kinda weak..but somewhat dope Ya need work on ya punches Try usin personals too.... Ya verse was pretty weak till the end... Overall......7/20 Trivia101 Yo check it First of all what tha fuck kinda name is threats, when u were small u took 2 long on ya mommas breasts, Momma joke...PLAYED This fuckin fag new, wit only 24 posts, bitch Ill pull ya fuckin brain through ya muthafuckin nose, Played...ya say Fuckin to much got to go back on those gieco commercials, and if u wuz a bitch u couldn't get a lap dance from steve urcle, Played...weak he says he's form Alaska da cold ass state, This bitch has 2 go fishin in his backyard to get a dinner plate, Personal... this nigga wasn't ready to battle esecially against me, nigga stay in alaska cus youll get murderd in nc. Straight...Good punch Ya need ta work on tha punches Flow was straight.. Personal was dope.. ya need more Structure was ok... needs a lil work Overall.....8/20 |
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I have to go with trvia with this one. His sturucture was better his flow was not but his last punchlines is was did it for me.
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TRIVA101 done this one for me. I liked his punches, maybe weren't too hard but were cool.
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yo people check out my battle with ' lil phresh ' on the forum front lines. place a vote, my verse was a bit weak thou cause I was bored. I just want the battle over and done with thou.
TRIVA101 - keep it cool dawg, shaping up to be a good MC. yo most probably better than me LOL yo anyway keep it cool dawg |
Triva-good punches,good flow,some personals,neva use momma jokes again
Threats-poor flow,soft punches,weak disses,no personals Vote:triva |
Ok break down...
Threats best Lines.. "Trivia is a little slow, but I`ll still slap this hoe He cant hand me no-el.. christmas was a week ago" Nice scheme and you stayed with the flow...Nice punch.. " I`ll give him more chin-checks.. than asian banks Leave ya rolled over by this tank" Another nice punch..and good word scheme... Overall Nice flow and nice punches... Triva's Break down.. Triva you didn't have any quotables fam...you have to work on good schemed punches..and wordplay... Threats took this...because of better punches... please poll vote on this laters.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98441 |
Let's jus hurry up and close this shit pleaseeeeee we need more votes............................................. ..................................................
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a yall rappa_Bigga voted on this shit before I joined tha crew
(for yall dumb ass nigga thinkin It wuz a crew vote) |
Let's close this we only need a few more votes......................
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ima give this one to threats:
better structure good flow easy to read since i took my time on tellin you what i thought, why dont you hit up carlos vs TO-FACE, either on 1st or 2nd page |
Ok then dawg Ill take tha time to do that ppppzzzzz.........
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look can we pppplzzzzz finish this shit plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz//////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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threats=straight verse some shit was played out nice personals and consistent with the punches and was creative
trivia=shit was wack and didn't like it u need to elevate homie seriously ur shit was trash no offense hollaz vote=threats and votte on this battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104792 afta ya do i will come back and poll |
trivia takes it for me, he got my vote, good structure n flow, kicked dis boy to tha floor!
threats u wanna work on ya structure n make some decent personal punches! any chance u can vote on mine please???? honestly n fairly!! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104452 |
Easy battle....
punches...threats.....had strong ones.... hard hitting....trivias were weak flow....definately threats.....good structure too creativity......threats... very original....nice no..el vote-Threats |
yo ite id say this was rly close cus threats had beta structure and flow also creativtiy but trivia had beta punches and personals..........shit battle........v-trivia............make sure u hit the battle up in my sig now...plz...............click battle...thx.....pz
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yo man make sure u hit this now http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104760 .......thx.............pz
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It was a pretty weak battle. Even thought threats tried to punch , i felt rivia had the stronger punches and better flow. Pretty weak battle alltogether .
vote - trivia plz return a honest fevour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104909 |
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