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Threats! 12-31-03 12:21 PM

Trivia101 .vs. Threats!
 
10 Lines Max
No Crew/Newbie Votes
All votes must be well explained.

Good luck homie, post when your done.

Threats! 12-31-03 12:43 PM


[ A Body Rolls Into A Morgue ]

- Coroner: What happened to him?
- Paramedic: Mental Failure...
- Coroner: ........what?
- Paramedic: He tryed to battle Threats!
- Coroner: When will these kids learn.....


Trivia is a little slow, but I`ll still slap this hoe
He cant hand me no-el.. christmas was a week ago
Your weak bro, face the facts, your just a fool
Cause I`m passing 101.. like the basics of school
Get drowned in a pool, Trivs whole style is stank
& I`ll give him more chin-checks.. than asian banks
Leave ya rolled over by this tank, your the queer type
N ya career hit the ground running ..... for dear life
I`ll slice ya with my knife, watch me murder my foe
Cause Triv couldnt save himself.. switching to Geico.


- Coroner: Thats too bad.. he had his whole life in front of him.

[ Coroner begins the autopsy & the lights go out on stage ]


Threats! 12-31-03 12:50 PM

There I keyed my verse up, so dont be taking all day and shit to be posting up ten fucking lines, you wanted to battle and I even posted first. Dont feed off my verse either girly man.

Trivia101 12-31-03 04:43 PM

Yo check it
First of all what tha fuck kinda name is threats,
when u were small u took 2 long on ya mommas breasts,
This fuckin fag new, wit only 24 posts,
bitch Ill pull ya fuckin brain through ya muthafuckin nose,
got to go back on those gieco commercials,
and if u wuz a bitch u couldn't get a lap dance from steve urcle,
he says he's form Alaska da cold ass state,
This bitch has 2 go fishin in his backyard to get a dinner plate,
this nigga wasn't ready to battle esecially against me,
nigga stay in alaska cus youll get murderd in nc.

Trivia101 12-31-03 04:46 PM

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Trivia101 01-01-04 01:47 AM

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PaDDyMaN 01-01-04 03:06 AM

Opener----NO ONE FOR PADDY'S SAKE
Closer----Trivia
Punches----if there was a good one it was threats "more chin checks than asian banks" HA-good but set up....
Creativity----Threats
Overall Threats takes this, work on better punches, try to not set them up as everyone refers to as "PLAYED" and if you drop a good punch and you KNOW IT, maintain that standard or youll fall off
As for Trivia just work on better punches nigga, keep elevatin, try to use more complex vocab, keep uppin your game and have more original shit

RETURN THE FAVOR when you CAN vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101696

DNF 01-01-04 12:10 PM

i really have to agree with the dude above me on this one...

Threats had a couple of good punches, which really stood out in the battle and edged him the win, but he did have a couple played lines which kinda threw off the overall standard of it...

Trivia just needs a lot of elevation, his lines were too simple, nothing really direct or hard that stood out in his verse, which is why i edged out Threats more in this battle... just keep at it though...


really punches was threats, all thought a couple played ones let him down...
both of you lacked personals, which didnt make this the greatest of battles, lacked originality in ya verses...
flow and multi's were pretty even, maybe threats edging this area...
they were the main deciding factors in the battle, the rest was kinda weak from both...

props to both emcee's, but Threats gets my vote...


if either of you two could vote on my battle with buzzkill, drop an honest vote, we'd both appreciate it, thanks. 1.

730 01-01-04 03:48 PM

Overall battle was a lil bit onesided.....Threats came out good with some nice disses and some witty concepts, like the chin checked punch....and the runnin for dear life punch.....nice verse...

Trivia came with the structure but the punches were lackin, no real complexity in your verse and that caused you to lose....

vote Threat

Sorry i can't poll vote yet...but if y'all could return the fav.....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102139

ILLunatic 01-01-04 11:33 PM

Threats!

Trivia is a little slow, but I`ll still slap this hoe
He cant hand me no-el.. christmas was a week ago

Weak punch...

Your weak bro, face the facts, your just a fool
Cause I`m passing 101.. like the basics of school

Played...but straight


Get drowned in a pool, Trivs whole style is stank
& I`ll give him more chin-checks.. than asian banks

Weak....


Leave ya rolled over by this tank, your the queer type
N ya career hit the ground running ..... for dear life

Dope punch....


I`ll slice ya with my knife, watch me murder my foe
Cause Triv couldnt save himself.. switching to Geico.

Kinda weak..but somewhat dope
Ya need work on ya punches
Try usin personals too....
Ya verse was pretty weak till the end...
Overall......7/20




Trivia101

Yo check it
First of all what tha fuck kinda name is threats,
when u were small u took 2 long on ya mommas breasts,

Momma joke...PLAYED

This fuckin fag new, wit only 24 posts,
bitch Ill pull ya fuckin brain through ya muthafuckin nose,

Played...ya say Fuckin to much


got to go back on those gieco commercials,
and if u wuz a bitch u couldn't get a lap dance from steve urcle,

Played...weak


he says he's form Alaska da cold ass state,
This bitch has 2 go fishin in his backyard to get a dinner plate,

Personal...


this nigga wasn't ready to battle esecially against me,
nigga stay in alaska cus youll get murderd in nc.

Straight...Good punch
Ya need ta work on tha punches
Flow was straight..
Personal was dope.. ya need more
Structure was ok... needs a lil work
Overall.....8/20

Reflektionz 01-01-04 11:38 PM

MY break

Trivia is a little slow, but I`ll still slap this hoe
He cant hand me no-el.. christmas was a week ago

Weak punch...

Your weak bro, face the facts, your just a fool
Cause I`m passing 101.. like the basics of school

Played...but straight


Get drowned in a pool, Trivs whole style is stank
& I`ll give him more chin-checks.. than asian banks

Weak....


Leave ya rolled over by this tank, your the queer type
N ya career hit the ground running ..... for dear life

Dope punch....


I`ll slice ya with my knife, watch me murder my foe
Cause Triv couldnt save himself.. switching to Geico.

Kinda weak..but somewhat dope
Ya need work on ya punches
Try usin personals too....
Ya verse was pretty weak till the end...
Overall......7/20




Trivia101

Yo check it
First of all what tha fuck kinda name is threats,
when u were small u took 2 long on ya mommas breasts,

Momma joke...PLAYED

This fuckin fag new, wit only 24 posts,
bitch Ill pull ya fuckin brain through ya muthafuckin nose,

Played...ya say Fuckin to much


got to go back on those gieco commercials,
and if u wuz a bitch u couldn't get a lap dance from steve urcle,

Played...weak


he says he's form Alaska da cold ass state,
This bitch has 2 go fishin in his backyard to get a dinner plate,

Personal...


this nigga wasn't ready to battle esecially against me,
nigga stay in alaska cus youll get murderd in nc.

Straight...Good punch
Ya need ta work on tha punches
Flow was straight..
Personal was dope.. ya need more
Structure was ok... needs a lil work
Overall.....8/20

Trivia101 01-02-04 12:10 AM

1-1 homie uppin#3........................................... ..............
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Trivia101 01-02-04 12:19 AM

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LyricalJedi 01-02-04 01:40 AM

I have to go with trvia with this one. His sturucture was better his flow was not but his last punchlines is was did it for me.

Threats! 01-02-04 12:28 PM

This site is falling to massive shit.


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Trivia101 01-02-04 01:48 PM

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rapper_bigga 01-02-04 01:54 PM

TRIVA101 done this one for me. I liked his punches, maybe weren't too hard but were cool.

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rapper_bigga 01-02-04 01:57 PM

yo people check out my battle with ' lil phresh ' on the forum front lines. place a vote, my verse was a bit weak thou cause I was bored. I just want the battle over and done with thou.

TRIVA101 - keep it cool dawg, shaping up to be a good MC. yo most probably better than me LOL

yo anyway keep it cool dawg

Joker 01-02-04 02:18 PM

Triva-good punches,good flow,some personals,neva use momma jokes again

Threats-poor flow,soft punches,weak disses,no personals

Vote:triva

Bio*Chemist 01-02-04 03:01 PM

Ok break down...

Threats best Lines..

"Trivia is a little slow, but I`ll still slap this hoe
He cant hand me no-el.. christmas was a week ago"

Nice scheme and you stayed with the flow...Nice punch..

" I`ll give him more chin-checks.. than asian banks
Leave ya rolled over by this tank"

Another nice punch..and good word scheme...

Overall Nice flow and nice punches...

Triva's Break down..

Triva you didn't have any quotables fam...you have to work on good schemed punches..and wordplay...


Threats took this...because of better punches...

please poll vote on this laters..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98441

Trivia101 01-03-04 04:41 PM

Let's jus hurry up and close this shit pleaseeeeee we need more votes............................................. ..................................................
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Trivia101 01-05-04 06:21 PM

a yall rappa_Bigga voted on this shit before I joined tha crew
(for yall dumb ass nigga thinkin It wuz a crew vote)

Trivia101 01-06-04 07:11 PM

Let's close this we only need a few more votes......................
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TO-FACE 01-06-04 07:21 PM

ima give this one to threats:
better structure
good flow
easy to read

since i took my time on tellin you what i thought,
why dont you hit up carlos vs TO-FACE, either on 1st or 2nd page

Trivia101 01-06-04 07:28 PM

Ok then dawg Ill take tha time to do that ppppzzzzz.........
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Trivia101 01-07-04 07:41 PM

look can we pppplzzzzz finish this shit plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz//////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

Yu Bin SunD 01-07-04 07:46 PM

threats=straight verse some shit was played out nice personals and consistent with the punches and was creative

trivia=shit was wack and didn't like it u need to elevate homie seriously ur shit was trash no offense hollaz

vote=threats

and votte on this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104792

afta ya do i will come back and poll

Jab 01-07-04 07:53 PM

trivia takes it for me, he got my vote, good structure n flow, kicked dis boy to tha floor!
threats u wanna work on ya structure n make some decent personal punches!

any chance u can vote on mine please????
honestly n fairly!!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104452

Tyler Durden 01-08-04 04:42 AM

Easy battle....

punches...threats.....had strong ones.... hard hitting....trivias were weak

flow....definately threats.....good structure too

creativity......threats... very original....nice no..el

vote-Threats

.:K:. 01-08-04 06:56 AM

yo ite id say this was rly close cus threats had beta structure and flow also creativtiy but trivia had beta punches and personals..........shit battle........v-trivia............make sure u hit the battle up in my sig now...plz...............click battle...thx.....pz

.:K:. 01-08-04 07:03 AM

yo man make sure u hit this now http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104760 .......thx.............pz

Eki 01-08-04 07:12 AM

It was a pretty weak battle. Even thought threats tried to punch , i felt rivia had the stronger punches and better flow. Pretty weak battle alltogether .

vote - trivia

plz return a honest fevour
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104909


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