.:FreemaN:. -v- CarsonJet
 

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wow............... im done.................................

damn 6 minutes.......................fast keystyle................:)

here it goes...............................

you define your own name, 'a supreme emsee'
yet soon you will start again, with version three
what do you hope to gain, from makin a battle list
maybe when you lose them all, you mite just get the jist
your birthday is set to 'N/A', what, werent you ever born
u must av come from a test-tube, thats y ur all weak and forlorn
if this was a boxin match, 'Freeman' against 'Carson'
ud be hangin on the ropes, even more than 'Tarzan'
its time for the murder to be committed... goodbye CarsonJet
here's a fully loaded gun, now go and play 'Russian Roulette'

freeman...

Freeman? how can u even think to spit?-ur literally shit
check his pic^^look!^^he aint even black witta invert pitch
Livin off ya ryhmes? he can't even afford a closet.he came outta a drawer
For sure-Freeman? he came to battle me but gotta better a tour of the floor
Not even a chore ima give it to him just like that 1-4 newbie did
He think's he ^^ripped it^^when lipid's the only phat on this kid
Freeman's simply dreamin-it's clear as day just keep on readin
See jet an think that u can beat him?only if ya mouth can take 5 creamin
Honestly I mean whats he thinkin..he's from birmingham alabama
your six days late and still u couldn't get this vic from santa

ite nice verse man....

im not from Birmingham in Alabama tho man... Birmingham in the UK.... lol

neva mind.... nice verse neway.... good luck

lets get some votes in.......................

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Flow was Equal.....Both Spits were Tight.....CarsonJet Came wit More Creativity and Punches Hit Harder...Both were Good Finishers....Structure Was Pretty Equal.....I would Vote Carson...

^^just giving my Opinion...I kno i can't Vote

you define your own name, 'a supreme emsee'
yet soon you will start again, with version three
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4.0/10.0
what do you hope to gain, from makin a battle list
maybe when you lose them all, you mite just get the jist
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4.0/10.o
your birthday is set to 'N/A', what, werent you ever born
u must av come from a test-tube, thats y ur all weak and forlorn
8.0/10.o^
if this was a boxin match, 'Freeman' against 'Carson'
ud be hangin on the ropes, even more than 'Tarzan'
5.0/10.0^
its time for the murder to be committed... goodbye CarsonJet
here's a fully loaded gun, now go and play 'Russian Roulette'
9.0/10.0^

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CAR...
Freeman? how can u even think to spit?-ur literally shit
check his pic^^look!^^he aint even black witta invert pitch
7.0/10.0^
Livin off ya ryhmes? he can't even afford a closet.he came outta a drawer
For sure-Freeman? he came to battle me but gotta better a tour of the floor
5.0/10.0^
Not even a chore ima give it to him just like that 1-4 newbie did
He think's he ^^ripped it^^when lipid's the only phat on this kid
8.0/10.0^
Freeman's simply dreamin-it's clear as day just keep on readin
See jet an think that u can beat him?only if ya mouth can take 5 creamin
7.0/10.0^
Honestly I mean whats he thinkin..he's from birmingham alabama
your six days late and still u couldn't get this vic from santa
5.0/10.0^
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CARson...32.0/
freeman...30.o/
vote/freeman for better overall verse...
holla...

It...

you have said you voted for me....



but you polled for carson....

duno if it was a typo or summin? or u ticked the wrong box?

can u straighten it out man... im confused lol

thanks

yo i dont no why the fuck i wrote your name...
carson just won my 2.0 overall...
peace...
sorry for the confusion...

its funny.....he quoted that^^^
but he didnt quote this...
CARson...32.0/
freeman...30.o/

i think that explains shit........plus he polled me......
there u go^^^lol

ite, no probs...

thanks for the honest vote :)

good battle carson.....................................

nice n tight.........................

keep the votes comin in............

uppin #1

i vote for carson he just had a better overall verse punches carson takes it because his landed harder and where more complex flow structure and meta's was pretty much even carson all so takes the personal his where better than freeman.... Freeman you had a pretty good verse but not good enough to beat carson's.dont worry you will get better.. just takes time... No Hate Just a vote

overall-Carson

thank You
Peace

can both of you please return the favor and vote honestly on my battle.. i took the time so you should too

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102534

Thank You.Much Appriciated
peace

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Carson Had This Battle Won..I Mean He Came Out To Battle With Decent Punchlines..He Didn't Have Much Flow Throughout His Verse But He Atleast Had Some Aight Punches...Freeman I Wasn't Feeling His Verse..He Had More Flow Then Carson..But His Punchlines Weren't As HardHitting..

Vote - CarsonJet

Can you Both return the favor and vote honestly on mine.. i took the time so you should too

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102534

Thank You

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Carson had a much more complex and creative verse. Freemans punches and personals were very basic and didn't land much. Carson had some nice metas and punches. He spit nice, while Freeman spit half assed. No hate just a vote. Pleas hit this up guys. Thanks http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...192#post1035192

thanks 4-0.....uppin for Merk~
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happy new year

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uppin #1...........................................
lets close this off now.......................

you define your own name, 'a supreme emsee'
yet soon you will start again, with version three
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5/10 I liked the opener but the finish was kinda off you could have hit harder

what do you hope to gain, from makin a battle list
maybe when you lose them all, you mite just get the jist
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8/10 I seen that list so that was a good personal liked that

your birthday is set to 'N/A', what, werent you ever born
u must av come from a test-tube, thats y ur all weak and forlorn
8/10 also a very good personal and ended with a good punch

if this was a boxin match, 'Freeman' against 'Carson'
ud be hangin on the ropes, even more than 'Tarzan'
Decent but it didnt really rhyme at the end, so i'd give it a 4/10

its time for the murder to be committed... goodbye CarsonJet
here's a fully loaded gun, now go and play 'Russian Roulette'
9/10 very good finisher i liked the way you worded it and it was a really hard line

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CARSON
Freeman? how can u even think to spit?-ur literally shit
check his pic^^look!^^he aint even black witta invert pitch
6/10 Because I thought I've heard that similer line before.
Not sure if i have but it sounds familier

Livin off ya ryhmes? he can't even afford a closet.he came outta a drawer
For sure-Freeman? he came to battle me but gotta better a tour of the floor
7/10 you flipped that punch well and it hit pretty hard

Not even a chore ima give it to him just like that 1-4 newbie did
He think's he ^^ripped it^^when lipid's the only phat on this kid
8/10 that was a pretty hard line and flowed nicely

Freeman's simply dreamin-it's clear as day just keep on readin
See jet an think that u can beat him?only if ya mouth can take 5 creamin
6/10 the flow was off and it wasnt that hard of a punch

Honestly I mean whats he thinkin..he's from birmingham alabama
your six days late and still u couldn't get this vic from santa
3/10 i didnt like that at all i'd only give it points for flow because he isnt from there so really thats trying tobe a personal
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CARson...30
freeman...34

Good batle but i felt freeman took this but good luck to both ye pz

CarsonJet
Ok verse.. some nice punches..
Did well flippin' some..& nice personals..
Good use of creativity.. N wit..
Openin' bar was very nice.. props.
You could've packed more though..&
Your flow was shakey at points..
Overall Ok-Good..

Freeman
Basically everythin u did good..Carson did better..
You had some nice punches aswell..
Less use of wordplay etc though..
Stronger flow, yet less punches..
Overall Ok-Good

vote CarsonJet


Please click here to vote on this:roll:battle & Return the favour....

carsobn punches hit a lot harder than freemans, an punches win battles. it was a close battle, an both y'all had a good structure, wordplay an vocab.

nice battle peeps!!!


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102292