Verstyle vs oCANti
 

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*All Rules Apply
*Blind Spit
*Both Verses Due 2 hours after both check in
*All Votes Must be explained the "NEW WAY"

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LOADING oCANti........
You Now Have Been Connected.....


Flip it in the air/ and let the shit come down
heads up/nutz down/d-ridin votez in ya mouth
I'm feelin ya battle record/I tried to keep a winning streak
If I hold your boyfriend 4 ransom
u think I could pay a hacker to come smear my shit clean?
I'll snatch your worth/reverse it and give birth
to a new verse/that'll match every rhyme in your corn purse
I love thirst/u was in a hurry 2 battle me
I'ma make you hate me so bad/you'll want JASON to appear in my dreams
U FUCKIN QUEEN.......
Feelins hurt? Oh I'm sorry...suck-it-the-fuck-up
bust ya lip, pull up yo face
and tell u 2 shut-the-fuck-up
u get so nervous/you'll throw anything into your rhyme
dawg...I know u got AOL
but that doesn't mean all of AMERICA's online
This is not hide and seek
There are no producers 4 u 2 find
and if there is
I'm cuttin your hands off/ So you can't get signed(GET IT)

Constructive Criticism if any....

Also check:

oCANti vs. Southern Rapper

HA!.. Kid Your wack..Here Enjoy your merking...

Murder in Progress...


It’s a pity you need a whole committee to vote to confirm your shitty
I’m gonna make you as popular as low-flying aircraft in New York City
oCANti the only chance you have is to start praying and hoping
Your style’s more tired than an insomniac with eyelids sewn open
My soul’s yearning sin to do good like turning Bin in, but I won’t obey
You couldn’t defeat Verstyle if they were giving victories away on e-bay
As oCANti meets a figure of doom holding his fate in one hand
Faggot your time is now up as I stare at an hourglass with no sand
Watch this trick duck as his rep is soon forgotten and lined with thick dust
Humiliating a fag called oCANti who decided he wanted to test these skills
Leave you frustrated like a one-armed man hanging off a cliff with itchy testicles
You and your vile team are living an infantile dream thinking you can compete
You against me is like Maurice Green laughing as he overtakes paralympic athletes
This faggot couldn’t pack heat if he set the contents of his Samsonite on fire
After I break all your fingers no sound is coming out that imaginary trigga
You couldn’t takeover if you bought Rocafella Records from Jigga
When is someone gonna tell this absurd herb that Artistics isn’t even a word
You predicted going up in flames in your signature and now it really occurred

Murder Complete...

I am not a guy, u could tell if you read my signature (it's plain as day) so as far as I'm concerned half that verse was about someone else, and your closing has nothing to do with my sig.

DO YOU WISH TO EDIT?

Nope i do not wish to edit... and how the hell am i supposed to know your not a guy..your sig doesnt prove shit.. you can be a fag for all i care.. so cry be a river and stop bitching

Upping for some honest votes to take place...............
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Aight this was obvious.....

Structure-Verstyle
Flow-Tie
Punches-Verstyle
Wordplay-Verstyle
Multies-Neither
Creativity-Nither

oCANti........Ya need better structure
Ya need to work up punches too....
Flow was decent... but ya need higher vocab

Verstyle
Ya verse was pretty dope.....
Lines a lil stretched...But it was dope
Good work homie......Props...


VOTE-Verstyle

well a bit strange here. Vers had the better verse in every aspect. The girl here not bad, but not close to Vers.

VOte - Verse

OHHH.. hold up there please come back and put in a better explanationt than that... this wont count as soon as a mod see's it.. so please explain better...

Thank You
Peace

You're just mad cuz your verse just hung itself
u stuppid bitch.... I've destroyed all your battlin tactiks agnst me, it feels good to be me.

Honest votez in here please,

OK heres my explanation
VErse had the better punches, structure, flow.. pretty much everything
i wasnt feeling your verse at all Orcani. Please try work on your structure and make it more appealing. And those punches must have more impact

VOTE-VErs

YOU VOTED FOR A VERSE THAT AIMED THE EXACT OPPOSITE OF THE DAMN TARGET......AM I MAKING ANY SENSE

I REALLY DON'T UNDERSTAND PEOPLE ON HERE, i'M STARTING TO THINK YALL ARE ANTI-HIPHOP. YOU VOTE FOR FAKETICIOUS BULLSHIT...

YOU MISINTERPRET ART, THAT'S THE REASON HiP HOP IS DEAD NOW.....QUOTE ME
AND THE HELL WITH YALL


yALL SOME STEVIE WONDER ASS NIGGAZ

WHACK! What the fuck is this? You now have been connected...Okay Tech Nerd.

Meh. If This Was Supposed To Be a Punch. You Forgot to Swing.

Ummm..Yeah...That Made Sense...:wtf:

This Is Horrible. I Don't Know If I Should Continue To Break This Down..

This Almost was your first punch...U Fucking Queen just fucked it up...

Wow. Your First Punch. Lacked Creativity.

Don't Understand This At All.

Good Closer. Actually Made Sense...Overall This Was The Whackest Verse I Have Ever Read....EVER!!!! Go To WEC...FUCKA RITE NOW!!!



Wow...This Was As Whack As Canti's...

Decent.

Don't Get It. The Insomniac Part...Make No Sense.

Now This Was Good. Solid Punch.

Good.

Okay. This Is Where Your Verse Took A Bad Turn.

See This Was A Good Punch, But Your Line About Dust Wasn't Complimented.

Hilarious.

Good Punch

Decent Closer. You Screwed Up Your Scheme Again. Fire..didn't get complimented...Trigga and Jigga worked fine.

Yeah I Ain't Gunna Say Anything About That Again.

Vote: Verstyle. Good Verse...Way The Fuck Better Than Ocanti...This was a Whack Battle Overall. Competition Was Shit.

Yo, this was an allright battle,

Ocanti: Better than last time, but you still need to elevate. Your verse was just decent, but your punches sucked. Verse just completley took you on wordplay and vocab.

Verse: Your's was pretty good, but you could elevate too. The whole second half was dumping, and that's good, but it kinda seemed like you were sayin' the same thing over and over. And, it might help to try and find out the gender if you can.

Vote: Verse

Oh and by the way, Verse, maybe I'm missin' somethin', but where does this rhyme?

{This faggot couldn’t pack heat if he set the contents of his Samsonite on fire}

It seems like it was just smacked in the middle of the rhyme.

vers just murked that biotch

Opening-Verstyle
Punches-Verstyle
Structure-Verstyle
Wordplay-Verstyle
Multies-Blah
Closing-Verstyle