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Chrit 01-01-04 02:13 PM

Voting.... Broken Down
 
I've been browsing the battle forums lately and it seems like kids are either completely d/r or really not realizing how to read and compare text battles. I decided to go ahead and break down the categories kids should really be focusing on and how to compare these categories in verses. I dont think RB can elevate if all the good heads that register here get herbed for not having post counts and get frustrated and leave.

So here it is....
The categories most people are voting on these days....

Punches
Flow
Multis
Creativity
Vocab

To understand things you need to make the distinction between text and audio.... they are two completely different styles. Hence flow and multis arent as important in text as creativity isnt as big of a factor in audio. You must think about this efore even moving on to read a verse.

Now onto categories and the importance of each.

Punches
This is the most important asepct of a text battle. This should carry the most weight in a decision of who to vote for. Essentially a kid that came with all multis with a good vocab should never beat the kid with straight punches with some wittiness involved.
Weight on a battle: 30-35%


Flow
People often associate flow with multis anymore which really is not the case. Flow is tha ability to keep a consistent rhyme scheme without detracting from the effectiveness of a verses punches. Also structure should be coupled in with flow as it essentially ties into the same things. Flow should have some bearing to a battle but not as much as punches.
Weight on a battle= 15-20%


Multis
This is the biggest problem in voting today. Multis are essentially worthless unless couple seamlessly into a good punch. Anyone can throw a stream of rhyming words together. Honestly, I dont know why kid even have this as a part of a voting rubric. In cases of a complete tie, this should be a factor but at no other point should it be given any significance.
Weight in a battle= 5%


Creativity
This is another overlooked category that is a cornerstone to text battles. Essentailly every punch a person uses had been done before ,therefore, the ability to flip a concept in a new, witty way is paramount in a text battle. Basically it comes down to the played factor and the "oh shit" factor. This means that if you see a line and you react with an "oh shit" or a "I never thought of flipping it like that" you know you've just read a creative punch. If you read something and have seen it before you know you are in the played category. In conclusion this is an important, overlooked category.
Weight in a battle= 15-20%

Vocab
Like multis, this category has had too much emphasis put on it lately. Vocab really shouldnt be a factor unless used seamlessly in using good punches. I've read many battle over the months where kids have gotten herbed by verses loaded with big words and multis.... this should never be the case. When looking at vocab remember that it should never be looked at alone, instead it should be grouped with how creative and effectively they used words to create the best punches.
Weight in a battle= 5-10%

That does it for most of these voting breakdowns people use. However I am going to add one more category....

Effectiveness
This is where I look at a persons wordplay, personals, etc. to determine how effective they were at working these things into good punches. Its importnant here that these things dont stand out but rather they blend into a well scripted punch. This should be looked at as a relatively important category as it definately plays into the overall enjoyment of a verse.
Weight in a battle= 10-20%

While I'm going through this I will take a battle from frontlines and use this break down.

Verses courtesy of a frontlines battle

Quote:
Remember kids... Record mean shit... Peep the Chiefs...
I got a mean streak and soon you will to... in ya briefs...
You aint shit... never was... let me make shit clear...
This kids fucking garbage.. like his dad did to bring him here...
Punk you aint dope... we all know.... so quit frontin.....
Ya verses always resemble ya custom text... they're there but sayin nothin
Underestimate the new kid... But shit this aint close....
I hope you have metafore's since you'll never see five votes....
Kids lonely... and no naming ya hand to say ya score with a girl...
And if Illness has arrived... Lets hope its terminal...


Quote:
I laught at the rhymes you be spittin, cuz i kno they be pre-writtin
Who you be shittin, Ya shit couldn't be seen twice if it was copy-writtin
I spit bricks like boulders, Ya couldn't be dope if canibus crew on ya shoulders
I rip tha script & undocument ya folders, ya couldn't be hot if ya bathed in Folgers
Ya punches are defenseless, Steppin ta me ya loss is preventless
I'll make ya senseless, Ya done blazed before i finished this sentence
I spit in conviction, My punches hit 1 after another in contradiction

This was ya first cross and ya recieved ya first loss, ya loss shines in gloss
My punches hit in full contact like playin Lacrosse, how do you feel after ya brutal loss



Punches: These go to the first verse... Simply more punches there. Second verse focused on multis while missing true punches.

This kids fucking garbage.. like his dad did to bring him here...
^^^Lines like this stand out over the multi driven second verse....


Flow: Again this goes to the first. Essentially multis can be used to make a verse flow... but when overly used as in the second verse, it really makes thing seems choppy and forced.

Retaliatory eviction, obivous prediction, losses come to you like a cocaine addiction
^^^Far too focused on the multis


Multies: Obviously goes to the second verse. No need to quote anything for it.


Creativity: Goes to the first verse. Too many witty lines as opposed to a more straightforward second verse.

This kids fucking garbage.. like his dad did to bring him here...
I again point to this punch.... creative....


Vocab We'll give it to the second verse for using some more sophisticated words.

Retaliatory eviction, obivous prediction, losses come to you like a cocaine addiction
^^Decent vocab...

Effectiveness: Verse one takes this with a more enjoyable verse. Took many instances of solid wordplay and blended into a decently hard hitting verse.

I hope you have metafore's since you'll never see five votes....
^^^You get the point

Overall the first verse takes this by standing better in the categories that bear the most importance in text battles.

*Note... these verse were only chosen as they were a good example of how frontlines voting is terrible these days. Votes ended at 4 or 5-1 in favor of the second verse.

Baron Mynd 01-01-04 02:15 PM

Woah .. im glad i didn't read that.

J-durable 01-01-04 02:17 PM

thanks chrit,im still a lil confused but im catchin on to dat info

PostMan 01-01-04 02:19 PM

thats why i dont vote.. cuz i dont d/r /hate vote.. and ikeep it real whether i like you or not.. and there is no way in hell im going to write an essay if you won or not. if your is better imma go

you won
and vote.
the end
ban me

Chrit 01-01-04 02:20 PM

^^^
I'm just saying kid that are doing breakdown arent focusing at all on things they should and just d/r a majority of the time


Also it would be nice if a mod/admin could copy this to WEC/Tutorials and also FL and EFL

PostMan 01-01-04 02:21 PM

^its already there.. well sumtin like this.

im startin up a voting ring just so this dont happemnd

Chrit 01-01-04 02:24 PM

^^^
They posting a voting criteria type thing...
Kid just need to understand categories dont carry the same weight

Detrimental 01-01-04 02:34 PM

Get off the high horse Chrit... you and me both know that i fucked you up in Front Lines...

Chrit 01-01-04 02:37 PM

^LMAO

You really arent that good kid

You will be 0-2 soon.

After that other kid finishes his merking of you

Taktik 01-01-04 02:37 PM

nice breakdown chrit....

hopefully kids will see that a text verse is based on punches

PostMan 01-01-04 02:39 PM

i just vote for who ever votes for me.

KoNcEpT 01-01-04 02:42 PM

Punches = 50% Of The Battle.

Chrit 01-01-04 02:44 PM

^
Woulda had punches slightly more

But then it threw off all other percentages

Accelerate 01-01-04 02:48 PM

What confuses me is when kids say"
Emcee A had funnier punches, but Emcee B had harder hitting punches.
WTF is the difference, if its hard hitting or funny its going to give you that "oh shit" factor, right?

Baron Mynd 01-01-04 02:50 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by PostMan
i just vote for who ever votes for me.


Same.

Chrit 01-01-04 02:54 PM

I'm just thinking of using Cyph's method and vote for the better name and who doesnt have a pic in their sig

DNF 01-01-04 02:57 PM

NO NO NO...

punches aint always the main factor...

if its a played punch, it dont even getcounted as part of your verse... thats why PERSONALS... are more effective in battles...

live freestyle battles you can have as many punhes as you want, some creative shit might get the crowd going, but if your punches are in direct and dont even target ya opponent, it aint effective... if you use a personal, and diss somthing out of the ordinary that you didnt see coming, the crowd gonna go wild....

personals are just as important as punches in a battle...

i see to many dumb kids in front lines, real fucking dumb voters who cant see simple personals about the person ya battling...


shit like... ima skin you alive with a razor eat ya skin like hannibal lectar, shoo you in ya spine then dine on ya blood like wine...

thats fucking gay shit, it aint a punch, it aint direct, and thats shit i just did in 10 seconds, kids write worse shit than that in 10 minutes...

ya whole scheme is wrong chrit... sorry...

who the fuck judges a battle on vocab?


a simple worded direct punch is more effective, than someone who uses 5 syllable words you gotta look up in the dictionary for the meaning...


its gay people like chrit, who influnce dumb textcees cos he got a high post count, he dont even know the main parts to a battle and he got the most wins???


thats how you know RB is fucked up...

lmao... id love to see chrit in live freestyle battles, spitting the shit you do here... youd get boo'd off stage, cos what you think is hot is not...


haha judges gonna say he had good vocab, LMAO! and multi's are more than 5% it helps the whole flow, peeps like to here long strings of rhyming words with a solid punch, not dumb end of line rhyming, thats play school shit...


damn... i hope youve learned somthing...

Baron Mynd 01-01-04 02:59 PM

^ He actually has a point there.

Chrit 01-01-04 03:00 PM

^
I took the criteria they already had established and put weight to em moron

Hence multis and vocab having little to no bearing on things

And punches also include personals.... thats the whole thing....

Chrit 01-01-04 03:01 PM

I just didnt focus much on personals as punches are usually directed at the head anyhow

Baron Mynd 01-01-04 03:01 PM

The only problem with that bullshit, is that you can't really use many personals other than a few name plays, post count, registry date, record. You can't really use many personal lines unless they have a picture posted up.

Vote: A picture thread where everyone must post a pic, so we can use it against them.

Chrit 01-01-04 03:05 PM

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Pic battle are funny....


*posts pic to get clowned*

Baron Mynd 01-01-04 03:09 PM

Bwahahahahahhaaha .. let's picture battle. >=)

Chrit 01-01-04 03:10 PM

Maybe after a bit... got some errands and etc. to do...

Just wanted to post that to give you something to do

lol

DNF 01-01-04 03:10 PM

haha word thatd be tight, I wanna picture battle someone, get a league going cos then its like real live battles, more personals and direct punches, instead of played punches and played wack as fuck wordplay, which seems to dominate front lines…

C-Section 01-01-04 03:20 PM

SHIT! were did all that hair come from? i thought chrit was bald

Baron Mynd 01-01-04 03:22 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by C-section
SHIT! were did all that hair come from? i thought chrit was bald


Roflmao at Chrit looking like he lives in some Trailer and he just got up. >=)

Chrit 01-01-04 03:23 PM

lmao...
its my college stoner look

C-Section 01-01-04 03:29 PM

seriously though. whats a picture battle? do you put up pictures to see who has the better picture?

sorry if i dont know this net battle stuff, im not a netcee.

Chrit 01-01-04 03:31 PM

you both post pictures then you clown how the other person looks

Cave Canem 01-01-04 03:34 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Baron Mynd
The only problem with that bullshit, is that you can't really use many personals other than a few name plays, post count, registry date, record. You can't really use many personal lines unless they have a picture posted up.

Vote: A picture thread where everyone must post a pic, so we can use it against them.



[color=blood red]U Don't Need Their Picture......

All U Need Is To Find A Flaw......Profile, Sig, Some Dumb Ass Post, A Battle They Loss Or Some Shit They Did In A Battle, A Different Meaning Of Their Name That's Fucked Up, Who They Associate With, The Way They Rhyme Or Who They Rhyme Like, Exposures (Such As Instead Of Just Exposing A Biter.....Do It In A Battle).....Anything Along Those Lines.....

A Picture Does Come In Handy, Though....

But The Problem With The Picture Tournament Is "How Do U Really Know That's The Person's Pic?"

Unless U Plan To Have Everyone Take A Pic Holdin' A Rapbattles.com Sign.....
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[color=blood red]& Since Everyone Doesn't LIKE THE SAME THING In Rap, Your Breakdown Was Irrelevant, Chrit.......


Some People May Like Multis That Don't MEAN SHIT....

Some Might Like Punches Even If U Use One Syllable That Rhymes That BARELY RHYME.....

Some Might Like For U To Use Good Vocab.......


So Your Punches Might've Been Better Than Someone, But Your Rhyme-Scheme Was So Damn Basic That U STILL LOSS.....
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C-Section 01-01-04 03:34 PM

aaaahhhh

Chrit 01-01-04 03:36 PM

You know its me by the damned NC hats....

Baron Mynd 01-01-04 03:37 PM

Sidenote - whoever the fuck attached this gay real media thing in their sig - take it out NOW. It's fucking my screen up.

Accelerate 01-01-04 03:38 PM

Tar Heels Represent!

Chrit 01-01-04 03:40 PM

Post a pic of you Baron

So I can get some lines together to use sometime

Baron Mynd 01-01-04 03:43 PM

^ Picture's up somewhere in here, there was some "what do you look like" thread or some bullshit.

Get me on aim and i'll send it.

DNF 01-01-04 03:45 PM

if they didnt post their real pic it dont matter in the battle...

Your still battling the guy in the picture, that’s what the whole battle is based on, dissing the dude in the picture, so it don’t matter if its them or not, you still get props for using good personals or creative idea’s against the guy in the picture…


if someone posts their real pic there might only be so many things you can talk bout... and if they post someone elses they might get fucked over worse with shit they didnt notice in the fake pic... but you still got someone to diss... just gotta work with what you got...

Cave Canem 01-01-04 03:51 PM

[color=blood red]^^^But That Means That Extremely Ugly People Can Become Cute & Have A Chance Of Winning Because The Photo They're Usin' Isn't As Ugly.....


Get My Point? They Might Find A Pic That Doesn't Really Have ANY FLAWS.....

NO FLAWS.....NO PERSONALS.....
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DNF 01-01-04 04:00 PM

trust me you can diss anyone no matter what they look like...

if they look like pretty boys, diss em bout being clean cut or vein...

if they ugly as fuck, ugly jokes can get old fast, so it aint always the best option... there isnt 1 picture in the world you couldnt diss...

of course itd be better if you knew it was genuine, but you can still diss them regardless...


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