kuntryboi vs paddyman round 3
 

ok since i made the rules the last time ima let you make em. put em below this then drop ya shit..............good luck

No feedin, No hate votes, No dickriding votes, no recycling, and may the better verse win...........Good Luck

12 lines MAX 12 min.----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

fucken aaaaa...................too many drinks last night........12 LINES MAX, 10 MINUMUM FUCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK NO TIME LIMIT

The only shots u get at me will be if I foul and u get free 'throws',
the problem is you're a lyrical Shaq....so there your chance goes ----HAHA
This bitch nigga asks me if I went to school, yeah nigga I study 'business'
im about to shut D.S.G.B. down, and if that aint monopoly, then boy what 'is this?'
kiss my ass cause u already puckerin up like u eatin sour 'candy',
3rd time we battled nigga, u need to learn "how to deal" more than 'Mandy'
I'll liquidize your rappin crew like we's marketing on fucken wall 'street',
I take the 'front' while this bitch hides on all fours behind his clicks 'feet'
in my biz all my niggaz is ready to die togethu, its 'Compounded'
boi u actin as confused as ur lyrical game, D.S.G.B. is 'dumb-founded'

For all those of you who don't know a thing about marketing-----Liquidize = buying up a companys stock right before that company is about to be worth something, and then selling it off at a higher price than u bought it for.
Dumb-Founded = Confused, and at the same time his crew was founded by someone dumb
Mandy = Mandy Moore who was in a movie called "how to deal"

GOOD LUCK

look, you wont survive this battle, im PISSED, time to give you the death SENTENCE//
you might as well be an ATHIEST, nigga, the Holy Spirit wont even give you REPENTANCE//
better get a WITNESS, to this lyrical homicide, this merkin is damn near ILLEGAL//
when we battle i feel like im a doctor givin birth, cause im leavin this motherfucker FETAL//
you can say goodbye to another SEQUEL, this round THREE, this time i throw the lethal BLOW//
grab my chrome desert EAGLE, put on a MINI ME(condom), then............ finish this HO//
left ya anus tow(tore), shovin these bars up ya ass, in a minute you'll be fartin out ya mouth//
u spend to much time in the house, u should get out, thats HINEST, ill bend ya contents like twisted COMETS//
you need to polish your EBONICS, you couldnt spit dope rhymes if you was kissin CHRONIC//
im in the mix like gin and TONIC, im the BOSS, you will never be ranked as high as MYSELF//
in the end the loudest nigga wins the BELT, you speak to SOFT, no one hears ya crys for HELP//
to save you the embarassment of execution.....im mailin you a gun right now....finish YASELF//

^weak battle from both....first dude came aight, your opener was played as hell, the rest of your verse was choppy with no real flow and your punches weren't hittin that hard, try rewordin it next time.......you did have punches tho and they hit (not hard) but they hit.....

second dude ya shit was underpar, you were capitalizin words that didn't even make a reference to each other....when you do shit like that your words are s'posed to intertwine....it's played out but that's your style so do it right.....your punches were practically none existent and the violence in verses is kinda played out....and you used it in almost every line.....keep workin at it....

vote Paddyman for a better verse....

please return the fav on my battle.......sorry i'm not eligible to poll vote yet, but i'd appreciate it...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102139

Uppin this shit-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

My vote
 

paddyman got thsi battle cuz he had better lyrics and nice punch so therefor my vote goes to him __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ___

uppin this shit VOTE ON MY BATTLE AND ILL VOTE ON YOURS, I RETURN THE FAVORS!!!!!!#2-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

I would give it to PaddyMan. I feel like I'm saying this over and over again, but a lot of the stuff kuntryboi said either didn't make sense or seem really contrived.

For example:


You feel like a doctor whose giving birth? Because you leave him ina fetal position? wtf?

At least PaddyMan had some word play

Uppin for votes, dont sleep on this please I WILL RETURN THE FAVOR JUST LEAVE A DAMN LINK----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

i gotta give this one to paddyman. his verse was just overall better, it entertained me and it was funny. kuntryboi you had too many "//" after a while the shit get's annoying. paddyman kept throwing the D.S.G.B shit at you (down south gergia boy).

im gonna give this one to paddy...holla


check out my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103013

paddyman get my vote he had a stronger verse and his punches hit harder his flow was also good.kuntry ur verse was too streched u need to work on shortening ur lines thats why ur flow waas kinda off and u punches was ok.

VOTE:PADDYMAN

giving this one to paddy

he had a better flow, kuntry still got that newbie type of flow...and make ya verse caps in some places, it's straight noobie shit. The free throw line was nice..it stood out and it was a good opener...and Paddys punches were better aswell...so overall Paddy.

vote on this battle in return.

Banishment Battle

I have to agree with the majority, not to be ignorant but I got halfway through kuntry's and stopped......like it was a yellow light about to turn red. I was'nt feelin it or followin it.
I'm not sure if it was the structure or what....maybe if I go read it one more time and you give an explanation I can reconsider.

Paddyman you had a nice opener cool closer and punches through ou the verse. and I also like the business part of it, it was nice to see no gay jokes this time, otherwise my vote would go to you.

Ho do u post a link? In the mean time....

gazeebo vs. ocanti

wr!te mind vs. ocanti

aight...good battle.

paddyman had good wordplay. the mandy moore thing, etc. the punches were aight, and the personals were ok.

kuntryboi had much better punches, but the wordplay wasnt as good. not really any personals. but, the punches were good enough to get the vote.

vote: kuntryboi

i spend time on yours...spend time on mine


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...adid=102139--vs 730

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...readid=101943-- vs prophacyz

im sorry but if i could vote i would vote countryboi cuz he hit alot harder with punches paddy had the better opener but that aint all it takes to win a battle the flow went to paddy too but the structure went to kb and kb's wuz way more original and wuz alot funnier to listen too

no offense lyrical prophet, but if you think I had a better "FLOW" then u dont know WHAT THE FUCK UR TALKING ABOUT. I bet you didnt even understand my lines nigga so please avoid my battles nigga

Paddyman gets the W
Paddyman had better wordplay and structure. He sustained his flow throughout and delivered an easy merk.
Kuntry, cannabarz is right, you need to look at ohter people's drops (preferably a vet's) and take some pointer's. It's not biting, it's learning.
Good battle boys.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103514

makin parts of ya verse, like ^ said is kinda newb-ish, and don't do nothin fo ya...