e.coli vs joker
 

5-6 bars (10-12 lines)

no crew hate d/r or fan club votes

check in and lets do the damn thing

checkin in
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26 post a day...like a dude holdin a clock u have time on ya hands
joker is a whack man....he now sweats whackness from his glands
u ill???its impossible like armless kids tryin to paint pictures
ya rhymes wouldnt be worshiped even if u spit bible scriptures
in this battle im the ace and i got this joker scared
his last hope is sellin his album to the hearing impaired
no clothes to wear...this bum is homeless he really is from the streets
ya rhymes pack no heat...ya best win came against a dude wit 80 defeats
even though no one likes u bin laden made u a 100 foot statue
why?? terrorist destroy what they dont like.............................
....................since there aint no more towers now they can hit u
with this battle jokers career is endin like jam master jay’s
first loss....like a mute kid joker now has nothing to say

His structure is lop-sided, he gots only 1 punch but first u gotta find it
My rhyme's are mentally effective to kill slowly i don't play wit da kind-shit
l frown down on the weak like you when I attack with arched eyes
e.coli VS joker this cats history he belongs somewhere in da archives
Nigga dis Ohio mother fucker its time for you to meet the best of the best
No wonder this cat ecoli is so fucking retarded hes a product of an incest
You're warm piss at best...I'll spray you with hottness penetratin ya flesh
My gat wil hit you with bullets like Big Bret Favre puttin 4 on your chest
Watch the disection..E.coli is ryhmin wit perfection prickin like a lethal injection
Nigga acts like hes hardcore but never seen war like air force reserve veterans

uppin 4 votes on this and that lil herb tha killa kid cant vote cause we got beef and he'll prolly try to hate on me

uppin (1)

lets get some votes in here please......vote honestly


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UPPIN 4 VOTES
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uppin (2)

dont sleep on this people vote and leave links do whatever just vote honestly

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joker - good punches. ok personals. awesome flow. nice closer and opener. awesome drop
8.6/10

e - good punches. good personals. ok flow. good closer. ok opener. pretty good drop
7.7/10

this was a good battle, but it looks like joker's streak is going on... ::knock on wood::

vote - joker

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-Cprogress

hmm...

this battle was close. both verses were pretty good, but i think joker had better punches and wordplay. the flow was a little better too, made it better to read.

vote: joker

i take time on your battles...take time on mine

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-Cprogress

yo thanks for votin but can we get some better breakdowns........................................ ..uppin(3)

I'd have to go with e.coli on this one. He had better, more creative punches:

"26 post a day...like a dude holdin a clock u have time on ya hands
joker is a whack man....he now sweats whackness from his glands
u ill???its impossible like armless kids tryin to paint pictures
ya rhymes wouldnt be worshiped even if u spit bible scriptures"

Those need a little rewording but they're still pretty good.

Both had a good flow. CLose battle.



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vote-E.coli
punches-e
flow-e
structure-e
metas-joker
sustainment-both
enjoyment-both
wit-joker

nice battle..i jus found it hard to catch a flow on Jokers
pz

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-Cprogress

e-coli-creativity... the clock line was tight.. that had me readin....
..also teh painting pics line
e-coli-flow
joker-dept,vocab

~~so tehn its jsut personla opinion.i prefered e-cloi verse more....

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Uppin 4 some votes please breakdown a lil better
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vote-joker
punches-joker
flow-e
structure-e
metas-joker
sustainment-both
enjoyment-both
wit-joker

Joker came harder in this battle please believe he swept the floor.

^^^that shit dont count u didnt vote properly.......damn lets get some good votes in here they all seem to get takin away

ive done all my votes like that. and this is the only one to get disqualified. i wish i could poll cause im still gonna keep my decision. but anyways, sorry for the free-post.

flow-joker
personals-ecoli
punches-ecoli
consistancy-joker
disses-tie
wordplay-tie

joker had a good flow and some kool disses but some filler too, not many hard hitting punches, history line was kool.. ecoli had some played lines but some good flips.. could work more on your rhyme scheme.. he hit a little harder with his lines the 80 loss line was kool.. this was close but i think ecoli edged it out.. joker had the better flow with an extra diss or punch he coulda took it
vote-ecoli

return the favor vote on this
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...threadid=102893

why did u post in here again.......its just clogging the thread......there isnt really any need for u to re state your opinion......but thanks for votin even though it didnt count

e. Coli:

26 post a day...like a dude holdin a clock u have time on ya hands
joker is a whack man....he now sweats whackness from his glands
^ok opener: 5/10

u ill???its impossible like armless kids tryin to paint pictures
ya rhymes wouldnt be worshiped even if u spit bible scriptures
^decent punch, could have been more refined tho: 6/10

in this battle im the ace and i got this joker scared
his last hope is sellin his album to the hearing impaired
^nice personal: 7/10

no clothes to wear...this bum is homeless he really is from the streets
ya rhymes pack no heat...ya best win came against a dude wit 80 defeats
^ok line: 4/10

even though no one likes u bin laden made u a 100 foot statue
why?? terrorist destroy what they dont like.............................
....................since there aint no more towers now they can hit u
^ehh, didn't quite work: 4/10

with this battle jokers career is endin like jam master jay’s
first loss....like a mute kid joker now has nothing to say
^ok punck, alright finish: 5/10

Joker:

His structure is lop-sided, he gots only 1 punch but first u gotta find it
My rhyme's are mentally effective to kill slowly i don't play wit da kind-shit
^good opener: 6/10

l frown down on the weak like you when I attack with arched eyes
e.coli VS joker this cats history he belongs somewhere in da archives
^ok line, not a hard punch tho: 5/10

Nigga dis Ohio mother fucker its time for you to meet the best of the best
No wonder this cat ecoli is so fucking retarded hes a product of an incest
^LMAO!!! 1st line, a 'lil filler, but that's a strong hit: 8/10

You're warm piss at best...I'll spray you with hottness penetratin ya flesh
My gat wil hit you with bullets like Big Bret Favre puttin 4 on your chest
^hard line, like the snap/meta: 7/10

Watch the disection..E.coli is ryhmin wit perfection prickin like a lethal injection
^(huh? talkin' e.coli up?)
Nigga acts like hes hardcore but never seen war like air force reserve veterans
^still a pretty tough finish: 7/10

Overall:
e.coli: 31/60 = 51% ill

Joker:33/50 = 66% ill

pretty decent verses, both of you, but I gotta vote: Joker

hey, return tha favor and hit this up wit' an honest vote.


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Thanx...........................................~1

joker uppin 4 ur verse
yo joker I've been waitin 4 ur verse since last night
when u said u were gonna do it
since ur on now just start doin it now
and hurry up plz so we can get the votes in

oh sorry for postin twice but I 4got to give my vote

both of ya had pretty tight verses
but honestly I was feelin e.coli verse a lil more
its like every bar was not only a punch but a hard punch
especially that opener, those 1st two bars killed 4 joker
and that hearing impaired line was tough
the only thing I didn't like about ur verse e.coli was that jam master jay reference
I mean come on u gotta pay respect 4 the dead

Joker ur verse was okay, but the hardest punch u had was that product of incest line
which had me laughin mad hard there, how could u think of that--lol
anyway besides that ur other lines were good but not good enuff to win this battle, but it was a nice drop on both of ya parts

vote =e.coli

His structure is lop-sided, he gots only 1 punch but first u gotta find it
My rhyme's are mentally effective to kill slowly i don't play wit da kind-shit
5/10
l frown down on the weak like you when I attack with arched eyes
e.coli VS joker this cats history he belongs somewhere in da archives
7/10
Nigga dis Ohio mother fucker its time for you to meet the best of the best
No wonder this cat ecoli is so fucking retarded hes a product of an incest
8/10 HAHA
You're warm piss at best...I'll spray you with hottness penetratin ya flesh
My gat wil hit you with bullets like Big Bret Favre puttin 4 on your chest
5/10
Watch the disection..E.coli is ryhmin wit perfection prickin like a lethal injection
Nigga acts like hes hardcore but never seen war like air force reserve veterans
7/10
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26 post a day...like a dude holdin a clock u have time on ya hands
joker is a whack man....he now sweats whackness from his glands
First line was good, second was FILLER 4/10
u ill???its impossible like armless kids tryin to paint pictures
ya rhymes wouldnt be worshiped even if u spit bible scriptures
7/10
in this battle im the ace and i got this joker scared
his last hope is sellin his album to the hearing impaired
7/10
no clothes to wear...this bum is homeless he really is from the streets
ya rhymes pack no heat...ya best win came against a dude wit 80 defeats
plaaaaaaaaaaayeddddd 5/10
even though no one likes u bin laden made u a 100 foot statue
why?? terrorist destroy what they dont like.............................
....................since there aint no more towers now they can hit u
0/10 nigga dont even mention twin towers in your shit BITCH have some fucken respect for the dead
with this battle jokers career is endin like jam master jay’s
first loss....like a mute kid joker now has nothing to say
6/10
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CLose stuff but you done fucked up by playing some lines and fucking around with the wrong topics kid
VOTE JOKER

Uppin 4 some votes
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punches:joker
personals:joker
flow:both
structure:e-coil
multies:both
overall: Ima say joker cus he did cum harder this wuz a tough 1

Opener: ecoli - he had a decent personals in there and a good meta
Closer: Joker - Mad multis and a harder hittin bar. ecoli seemed to slack off
flow: Joker - ecoli youe 10th and 11th lines werestretchedwhile Joker was a nice read
personals: Joker - he had more and they all hit OK
punches: ecoli - both had nice ones, but I think ecoli was more creative
Win: Joker
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