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$pitacular 01-01-04 04:25 PM

$pitacular Vs Bio*Chemist
 
10 linez
drop by midnight tonight
reg rulez no bullshit
check in

Bio*Chemist 01-01-04 05:21 PM

Well my time Line is different...it's 5:20 now my time...
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blah blah sorry had to talk bs because when I just say IN it says "The text you have entered is too short please have like 100 characters some bs like that....blah..


CHECK!!

$pitacular 01-01-04 08:31 PM

check.... due time is Midnight Eastern time


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Bio*Chemist 01-01-04 09:29 PM

Dropin...

Check the due date,..He will Loose his statues when Midnight Passes..
I knew Lethal Scriptures were a bunch of Princess Rappers...
I seen your member pic Im not racist, So I stay eating Crackers...
Cataclsymic setting the demise of this Infant....Name starts off
with an $....but U cant be large.....because U hold no weight broke emcee
can't drop golden Bars.....Which makes u and ya name just -Paper-..
and watch as I -Rip this Plain White Rapper-.....Drift a punch to this punk...
leaving him with one -Black- Eye....Got him viewing things while Colored blind...
and watch as I bleed this Emcee and -Smoke this Tree-..Now I got him feeling
-Jungle Fever-...Now Spitacular is another Eminem...A white emcee who got dissed by another
African American...


On a note no im not racist. I just don't hold back on ish when battling...
laters...

$pitacular 01-01-04 10:50 PM

fuckin Dick, Urine trouble.... and I ain't even Pissed
how you a-Dress me... it's like you're Young P's alias
fucked up ya Name.... you forgot to leave out the "o"
Crooklyn? shit I smoke you... like you rep Marl-Burrow
I shine bright sucka.... LOL..... cuz God didn't Tint Me
my punches hit to ya Heart... yours are only Skin Deep
plus just like a fag... Asshole wanted a Piece of Me
my idols spit Fat rhymes.... your idol died of Obesity
"Professional Drawing Artist"... redundant retardee
lucky you an Accountant... cuz you don't Count on RB

*didn't hold "anything" back LOL

$pitacular 01-01-04 10:51 PM

shit link fucked up , sposed to link to his profile


fuck


.................mods let me edit and fix that shit

Bio*Chemist 01-01-04 11:01 PM

Haaaaaaaaaaaaa @ you trying to show my pic....Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Yo Spit nice Spit ..lol...

Voters please...

TRIBAL 01-01-04 11:02 PM

bios verse

Check the due date,..He will Loose his statues when Midnight Passes..
I knew Lethal Scriptures were a bunch of Princess Rappers...
I seen your member pic Im not racist, So I stay eating Crackers...
Cataclsymic setting the demise of this Infant....Name starts off
with an $....but U cant be large.....because U hold no weight broke emcee
can't drop golden Bars.....Which makes u and ya name just -Paper-..
and watch as I -Rip this Plain White Rapper-.....Drift a punch to this punk...
leaving him with one -Black- Eye....Got him viewing things while Colored blind...
and watch as I bleed this Emcee and -Smoke this Tree-..Now I got him feeling
-Jungle Fever-...Now Spitacular is another Eminem...A white emcee who got dissed by another
African American...


tight battle:
pounches--were pretty hard used some personals like the eminem crack and member
good structre--pretty good flow but could use some work
metas were also used



$pitacular verse

fuckin Dick, Urine trouble.... and I ain't even Pissed
how you a-Dress me... it's like you're Young P's alias
fucked up ya Name.... you forgot to leave out the "o"
Crooklyn? shit I smoke you... like you rep Marl-Burrow
I shine bright sucka.... LOL..... cuz God didn't Tint Me
my punches hit to ya Heart... yours are only Skin Deep
plus just like a fag... Asshole wanted a Piece of Me
my idols spit Fat rhymes.... your idol died of Obesity
"Professional Drawing Artist"... redundant retardee
lucky you an Accountant... cuz you don't Count on RB


battle vote:
hard pounching opener dissin his name (pounch+personal)
more pounches and personals using his profile

overall since pounches and personals are wat count on any battle i gotta give my vote to $pitacular

vote on battles in my sig i took the time you should to

peace

alias 01-01-04 11:05 PM

bio chemist
Check the due date,..He will Loose his statues when Midnight Passes..
I knew Lethal Scriptures were a bunch of Princess Rappers...
6/10

I seen your member pic Im not racist, So I stay eating Crackers...
Cataclsymic setting the demise of this Infant....Name starts off
4/10

with an $....but U cant be large.....because U hold no weight broke emcee
can't drop golden Bars.....Which makes u and ya name just -Paper-..
5/10

and watch as I -Rip this Plain White Rapper-.....Drift a punch to this punk...
leaving him with one -Black- Eye....Got him viewing things while Colored blind...
5/10

and watch as I bleed this Emcee and -Smoke this Tree-..Now I got him feeling
-Jungle Fever-...Now Spitacular is another Eminem...A white emcee who got dissed by another
African American...
5/10

race jokes played to death
overall 25/50



spitacular
fuckin Dick, Urine trouble.... and I ain't even Pissed
how you a-Dress me... it's like you're Young P's alias
6/10

fucked up ya Name.... you forgot to leave out the "o"
Crooklyn? shit I smoke you... like you rep Marl-Burrow
5/10

I shine bright sucka.... LOL..... cuz God didn't Tint Me
my punches hit to ya Heart... yours are only Skin Deep
6/10

plus just like a fag... Asshole wanted a Piece of Me
my idols spit Fat rhymes.... your idol died of Obesity
5/10
"Professional Drawing Artist"... redundant retardee
lucky you an Accountant... cuz you don't Count on RB
5/10

overall 27/50


my vote $pitacular

plz drop an honest vote on this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100819

$pitacular 01-01-04 11:50 PM

uppin...............
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rerererererrererereretaRDED 100 characters

$pitacular 01-02-04 12:14 AM

uppin vote yall.............................................. .................................................. .............................

$pitacular 01-02-04 02:56 AM

uppin 3rd............................................... ...
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wondering if our complicated voting process is drivin away the few voters we had....

~LyRiCaL-JeZuS~ 01-02-04 03:03 AM

This was kinda equal except for in punches....spittacular had that
so since punches win battles I gotta give my vote to him.
VOTE : SPITACULAR


vote on this plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103093

Namwob_69 01-02-04 03:12 AM

this was hands down spit punches is what wins battles but the thing is... he had the flow and a fuck up wit the link and he still won this shit! no dr just given a good emcee his props!

Bio your shit was on lock but you couldn't handle spits post it distroyed you!

If my vote would count it would go to SPITACULAR!

Bio*Chemist 01-02-04 10:23 AM

Whatever with these votes already blah blah blah BS....
Uppin for these votes already....blah blah blah....

Nice battle Spits....you link messed up and you still won!!! amazin

Blah

$pitacular 01-02-04 11:04 AM

LOL your drop wasn't bad though... I was feelin it

and PEOPLE EXPLAIN YOUR VOTES BETTER

or don't vote at all....

B.I.Detained 01-02-04 11:07 AM

HMMMM NOT BAD AT ALL...still stayin short n snappy
spit!!!!!
BREAKDOWN---**oh oh oh..dont stop-HAMMER TIME!!
punches-Spit
flow-spit
complexity-Bio
sustainment-spit
enjoyment-both
metas-spit
structure-spit
overall-Spit

clear to see here that he jus put more effort
in and that tight structure gave a good flow
pz

MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT THIS UP PLZ..BEING MAD SLEPT ON PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102236

$pitacular 01-02-04 12:11 PM

uppin............................................. .for tha finisher



vote explain vote explain votes

$pitacular 01-02-04 12:56 PM

5th uppin..................................
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SmokaJoka. 01-02-04 01:19 PM

ur both in one of my crews...lol....so i'll vote....Bio ur first two lines were the best....the rest just flowed off and u went into that paragraph type structure....try using more up to date wordplay and punches.....personals are also nice to use....the pic line was a good personal.....but ur follow up wasn't that hard...and try ending each line with a rhyme....like u did in ur first two lines.....Spit had a harder hitting verse....and a few good personals....no hate to either of u though....here's a breakdown

BREAKDOWN
Multis - Spit
Metas - Tie
Wordplay - Tie
Punches - Spit
Flow - Spit
Structure - Spit
Personals - Tie
RhymeScheme - Spit
Overall - if Bio focuses on fixing his structure and throwing harder punches/personals with updated wordplay this would've been a much closer battle.....but Spit takes it mostly just for having harder punches....no hate to either of u though.....good read...just a vote

peace


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