LockZ `Vs` J-durable
 

Rules:
10-16 LiNEz
DeadliNe tommarow MidNigHt..

SigN In..

Sorry for fraff manz...you got 30 mins to write something against me...dont take long!!...safe..

Peace

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Use My ~Mics Blast~ To destroy Jdurables Image ~light Fast~ You Good The answers No ~Why Ask~/
Tic-Tack I use phrases simple AZ-That to blow your ASS-BACK to a wack emcee site yea www.ItzLikeThat.com/


Not A single Individual wishes to read your Long-Lasting Mind-Numbing ~prose~/
~Worst~ is imma beat you and I chose to go 24 hours ~first~/
That dosent stop me from proceeding 2 ~Burst~ Open each line in your ~Verse~ with out the assistance of a single ~curse~/
Like an emergency room patient ill leave you in seek the help of a ~nurse~/
My Lines Explode Like Fire ~Works~ Uppercut you wit punches so hard u woulda went to heaven but skipped out on ~church~/
SO you Drop Back Down fatally hit the ~ground~ ur name demolishes from the earth without a single ~sound~/
No body misses you or even wished you were even ~around~ Except me with these bars I use your body and continue to ~pound~/
You Drop a verse-and-ppl-start-to-~FROWN~ When Ppl talk about the rap game being good with talented ppl you turn there opinions ~around~/

Yo you messin wit a C-R-A crooked letter to da Y //
Put yo head between yo legs and kiss yo ass goodbye //

Messin wit me dogg you cant be muthafuckin serious //
up inside yo dumb ass head things must be goin delirous //

You aint gonna win dogg you rhyme like a bitch //
Im like a roll of toilet paper i was made for diss shit //

Best recognize you fuckin wit J-durable da daygo kid //
last nigga dat took dat rode lost fuck his wig //

dats right my rhymes kill so lockz you best behave //
or yo homies will be pourin' 40's on yo fuckin grave //

Yo rhymes too anixous you bitch needs to relax //
be a man,grow a penis, and lose da tampax //

admit you suck,im da shit,my rhymes way mo' legit //
if my game was a wack as yours id drop da mic and quit //

Overall lockz took this one, although it was pretty close. J's rhymes were too simple, and he had no multis at all, plus the punches were weak for both of you ( not saying im any better) I can't poll vote but My vote is for Lockz.

yo while i think about it can ya'll vote on this please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...42&pagenumber=2

what mic you gotta be kidding me.J-durable killed him.that punch line bout the tampax finished him off.lockz was aight but J-durable just came out harder. If I could vote i'd pick J-durable.

Damn right big bully.I felt i did betta den him,but he did have some good shit.It will probably be a close one if anybody votes.

Structure-J
Flow-Tie
Wordplay-Neither
Punches-J
Multies-Neither
Creativity-Neither

Ya'll both need to work on ya punches
J ya structure is weak... but its better than LockZ
Ya need to bring your shit together
That structure you got now... we used like 3 months ago
LockZ ya need to unstretch ya barz
Hit harder with punches

Vote-J-Durable

Ah ... fuck... Its not lettin me poll vote
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Structure :J
Flow :Tie
Wordplay: none
Punches: J
Multies-none
Punches win battles so.....Vote: J Durable
both need to elevate and expand vocab

Vote on this shit
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103093

my vote goes to J Doub cuz punches do win battles and Lockz had no punches. J Doub got locks wit that tampax and was off to the races wit a win. that one punch put lockz in his mutha fuck'n grave.

Vote: J-Durable

P.S.
I want to battle this bitch... BIGBULLY!

J-durable killed him.i just know got the "put yo head between yo legs and kiss yo ass goodbye" dats a hard punch.and Namwom_69 is goin down

Structure-J
Flow-Tie
Wordplay-tie
Punches-J
Multies-tie
Creativity-J

J pulled away with diss one im still trippin off the tampax line.

how do i know when i won this battle.Do i have to get a certain amount of votes or sumthing?Cuz its takin a nigga a long tyme to get a "w".

Structure-J
Flow-Tie
Wordplay-Neither
Punches-J
Multies-Neither
Creativity-Neither

Vote:J.........................

what the fuck

unless you're the admin from planetrap (Lockz), then you're a fucking name biter.. u bit his name letter for letter LMAO... u probably bit in ur verse too...

yeah its a bit name.. letter for letter capitol for capitol and the thing going through the o.. name biter!!! lol

J-Durable

Yo you messin wit a C-R-A crooked letter to da Y //
Put yo head between yo legs and kiss yo ass goodbye //
7/10

Messin wit me dogg you cant be muthafuckin serious //
up inside yo dumb ass head things must be goin delirous //
5/10

You aint gonna win dogg you rhyme like a bitch //
Im like a roll of toilet paper i was made for diss shit //
8/10

Best recognize you fuckin wit J-durable da daygo kid //
last nigga dat took dat rode lost fuck his wig //
4/10

dats right my rhymes kill so lockz you best behave //
or yo homies will be pourin' 40's on yo fuckin grave //
6/10

Yo rhymes too anixous you bitch needs to relax //
be a man,grow a penis, and lose da tampax //
9/10

admit you suck,im da shit,my rhymes way mo' legit //
if my game was a wack as yours id drop da mic and quit //
6/10

Average = 6.4

LockZ

Use My ~Mics Blast~ To destroy Jdurables Image ~light Fast~ You Good The answers No ~Why Ask~/
Tic-Tack I use phrases simple AZ-That to blow your ASS-BACK to a wack emcee site yea www.ItzLikeThat.com/
5/10

Not A single Individual wishes to read your Long-Lasting Mind-Numbing ~prose~/
4/10
~Worst~ is imma beat you and I chose to go 24 hours ~first~/
That dosent stop me from proceeding 2 ~Burst~ Open each line in your ~Verse~ with out the assistance of a single ~curse~/
Like an emergency room patient ill leave you in seek the help of a ~nurse~/
My Lines Explode Like Fire ~Works~ Uppercut you wit punches so hard u woulda went to heaven but skipped out on ~church~/
6/10 (this all ended in rhyming words... im confused

SO you Drop Back Down fatally hit the ~ground~ ur name demolishes from the earth without a single ~sound~/
No body misses you or even wished you were even ~around~ Except me with these bars I use your body and continue to ~pound~/
You Drop a verse-and-ppl-start-to-~FROWN~ When Ppl talk about the rap game being good with talented ppl you turn there opinions ~around~/
6/10

Average = 5/10

definately change ur shit around lockz, and dont rhyme so many words in a row. but for now, j takes it.

vote - J-Durable

honest vote the battles in my sig

thanks for da love yah'll you all know who won diss battle.Lockz good effort but not good enough dogg.maybe next tyme.

j got this because of better punches and structure.but this battle sucked.
opening-j
closing-j
structure-j
multis-none
personals-none
punches-j
overall-j
elevate alot and ull ge tit but for now hit the WAC

i gave my honest vote on this so give ur vote on thisd please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...342#post1041342

return
the favor cuz i took the time