Doze Vs. Lockz
 

10 lines min and max..

Blind spit.30 mins after me..

No D/R votes
No hate votes
All votes explained..

3-0 Ko or 1st to 5

Peace

Its Like..

Manz you aint changing at all, having wack products cause your an amateur,
Your Making more Look alike wack bars than cheap wal-mart superstores/
Idolise these words boy as this type is heavy unlike your thin lined creations,
You think your heard? Nah, people just stay by you cause your identification/
This crowd wants more, not your lame wackness typing out at standards of poor,
Did you know, your just a bore, why? Cause your kiddie spits make us snore/
Lockz you just dock some low crap which don’t drop any devastating hits,
You think you can lock this show? Hah your rusty spits dont secure winning scripts/
Fuck this fool, bitch your just a tool being used when thinking that your cool,
Man, a kindergartens rhymes are more complex the shit you will bring in our duel/

Yeh yeh..come..

Peace...

Here
 

U aint got a chance of makin it like a dude wit Aids cuz you got a [S].uicidal [T.]ransgression [D].isease/(STD)
Takin you out dis battle wit EASE I feel like im battling myself and u just some broad on dey knees/

Im Elusively Exclusive LocKz flares tha beat & Makes all Oppostion scared ta speak/
Lyrically You Proved-ya-weak Yea I said this was for a good-battle but I USED-you 4 a simple Defeat/

ur Lyrics Have Me Intrigue With Laughter, The Weather Bureau Should Label Your Verse A Natural Disaster/
This battle has Lockz on Top It’s another Happily-Ever-AFTER get on your knees and pray to your Master/
Dozing off this BASTARD so many punches comin from both fist you don’t who which one is hittin u FASTER/

Beating me aint happening like Beating A Limp Dick~This dudes a FuckiN PrICk~I advance to 1-0 QuICk/
You Got punches in your verse but they don’t Stick~ Trying to decide if me wants to be masculint or femine but he wont PICK/


Giving this nigga the Salute will be my next feat* Goodbye dawg ill always remember this az my most effortless of beats/


i kinda got confused..i thought the deadline was midnight tonight..i jus peeped this...Verse is choppy

Uppin this peeps..if you look dont just go, drop a link ill return the favour!

Peace

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Vote-Doze

Reason-Better punches.....flow...structure....Lockz...your structure was fucked up...Your lines were to long which killed your flow...and your punches were so damn basic....Doze merked you on every category....

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#3

agree toataly dozey took it for me same reasons...

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#4

Locks, you have to change up your style a bit.... I don't konw if you're used to battling verbally but it just doesn't look right when its text.

Then again, " [S].uicidal [T.]ransgression [D].isease/(STD)" doesn't make sense regardless of how you present it.

If I could vote I'd go w/ Doze on ths one.



http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103069

Last one...

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#5

Doze got this in all categories , eeeeeeeeeeeenuff said.

aint got a chance of makin it like a dude wit Aids cuz you got a [S].uicidal [T.]ransgression [D].isease/(STD)
Takin you out dis battle wit EASE I feel like im battling myself and u just some broad on dey knees/

nice opener, structure was kinda off but the rest was hot yo

vote locks

i think that doze got this one, my nigga you kept plain and simple. but dis nigga locks shit was a little too long which fucked up his structure. doze got that one.

doze got this shit easy in every catgegory kids

try an see if yall can hold me down on hot as a gun v.s. techrhymes, look for dat shit please .

i think Doze took it with Complexity and punches but nice battle

Doze=7/10
Lock=6/10

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

yo hit my battle up wiv killa poizen i would drop a link but i dont no how, i will repay the favor

LOCKZ YOU KILLED THIS DUDE. NICE VERSE. NICE WORDPLAY, PUNCH LINES AND STRUCTURE. THE ENDIGN WAS CONFUSING BUT OVERALL YOUR VERSE WAS VERY GOOD. DOZE I HOPE YOU DIDN'T THINK YOU WERE GOING TO WIN WITH THAT VERSE. YOU STRUCTURE WAS GOOD BUT YOU LACKED PUNCHES AND PERSONAL. STEP IT UP DUN.RETURN THA FAVOR:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122706

VOTE=LOCKZ

i vote for doze, he had better punches flow and structure, he was overall better
vote goes to doze

return the favor at http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124072