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ILLunatic 01-01-04 11:12 PM

ILLunatic v.s Billy
 
Lets get this shit goin...

Rules
10 Lines
Billy spit first
No feeding
No biteing
No recycling
No stretching
No crew votes
No hate votes
No d/r votes


Good Luck.......

ILLunatic 01-01-04 11:13 PM

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.....Checkin In.....
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I'll drop after you
When i get tha chance
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billy 01-01-04 11:13 PM

ill drop within the hour................................

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billy 01-02-04 12:10 AM

Come on, all these catz claimin they ill and their skills lame…
noone describes you as sick, that’s why you add ill to your name!
Writing basic shit in privacy and you’ll learn soon….
That ya rhymes are like people sick in bed, they shouldn’t leave the room!
Your killin your own rep wit your fake ass lethal scriptures…
I can bust rhymes while I sit and watch as you try ta fix yers!
Got you worryin about wut comes out of your lips
I throw a deodorant stick in your mouth so your sure when you spit!
You bring problems to this site and I can hear a couple booin’…
Im not a thug….but I’ll be glad ta grab a gun and start trouble shootin!


They ya go playa play…………..

Spit yours……….drop by today please……….



Pz…………

ILLunatic 01-02-04 12:24 AM

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Hmm...Dope....
I'll key up right now.....
If i dont drop tonight
I'll drop first thing tomorrow
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billy 01-02-04 12:25 AM

aight.......................


just try and do it by tonite....................


but if not its tight..................




pz..........................

ILLunatic 01-02-04 01:29 AM

You post audio in Songs,And didnt even get a single review
You wack...talent ya lack....when the hell you gone see this through?
Battlin 13th ya got DQ'd because you commited a no show
How embarrassing was that, 13th is wack.. and your even worst than that ya homo
How does it feel to kno you got sonned, by a Lightweight 5 ta 1
Done decide this won, ya textually murdered, as the votes come in 5 ta none
LMFAO.... ya made a call out and Axe replied
Viewed 16 times, to reply back you couldn't decide
Set up ta battle Envy Ny ya posted rules but never returned to battle
Fuck it i'm out, bout ta skidattle...Oh yea...ILL just made yo brains rattle

ILLunatic 01-02-04 01:31 AM

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That was new style for me
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..UPPIN FOR VOTES NOW..
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Drop Links if ya need a vote
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Ambitious 01-02-04 01:41 AM

this was a very dope battle..... both had witty punches and good personals.....for me billy had harder hitting punches but yet Ill had some better personal dissing....flow was good from both....Ill took the multies with a few nice ones structure tha same for both...creativitey i'd say Ill....metas i'd say tie.....i unno.......i enjoyed Ill's got more of a laugh....plus his personals hit real hard.....
vote-ill

ILLunatic 01-02-04 02:07 AM

.....Dope.....
Can we actually
Get someone to vote
That can vote poll...
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UPPIN#2

SmokaJoka. 01-02-04 03:03 AM

ouch.....Ill pulled out with alot of personals that pretty much killed billy in this battle.....matter of fact this was pretty one sided when i really look at both verses and read them over.....honestly....Illunatic gets this in every category...most specifically for having harder personals, punches, and a better developed strucuture...no hate to u billy dude....good read from u both though...

peace

Cryptic Thoughts 01-02-04 03:07 AM

This wasnt a great battle at all....

Illunatic came with better personals and multis....
He had alot of both, however he really lacked good punches... and had no worpdlay at all.

Billy came with some decent wordplay while maintaining some decent punches.

My vote goes to billy for coming with a more complex verse punch-wise

ILLunatic 01-02-04 04:29 PM

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Straight.......
This shit is 1-1
Lets UPP this shit
Ya'll sleep to much
Wake tha fuck up
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High Class 01-02-04 06:10 PM

Billy
Come on, all these catz claimin they ill and their skills lame…
noone describes you as sick, that’s why you add ill to your name!
Weak, need better word play
Writing basic shit in privacy and you’ll learn soon….
That ya rhymes are like people sick in bed, they shouldn’t leave the room!
Horrible, wack punch
Your killin your own rep wit your fake ass lethal scriptures…
I can bust rhymes while I sit and watch as you try ta fix yers!
Alright, had a nice like twitch to it
Got you worryin about wut comes out of your lips
I throw a deodorant stick in your mouth so your sure when you spit!
Could have been worded better
You bring problems to this site and I can hear a couple booin’…
Im not a thug….but I’ll be glad ta grab a gun and start trouble shootin!
Not hard, and not even a real punch

Over all a weak verse, work on the punches and try not to stretch your lines... Thats about it



Illunitic
You post audio in Songs,And didnt even get a single review
You wack...talent ya lack....when the hell you gone see this through?
Not very strong opener, but a little personal
Battlin 13th ya got DQ'd because you commited a no show
How embarrassing was that, 13th is wack.. and your even worst than that ya homo
Weak, stretched the line to far...
How does it feel to kno you got sonned, by a Lightweight 5 ta 1
Done decide this won, ya textually murdered, as the votes come in 5 ta none
Nice wordplay, fucked with his rep good
LMFAO.... ya made a call out and Axe replied
Viewed 16 times, to reply back you couldn't decide
If thats true, good head mixer... Needed better wordplay
Set up ta battle Envy Ny ya posted rules but never returned to battle
Fuck it i'm out, bout ta skidattle...Oh yea...ILL just made yo brains rattle
Bad closer, almost had somthing good going. But seemed to have dropped your gaurd on the second line...

I have seen alot better from you. It was pretty weak, but you did have 1 good punch in there that I liked... keep elevating

Vote - ILL


Conclusion - ILL came harder, with better wordplay. He accually attempted personals, which his apponent didnt. He had more effort and did better over all... keep elevating hommies...

ILLunatic 01-02-04 06:51 PM

^ LoL...
Thanks for the vote
I was tryin a different style
I woulda came alot harder
With my other style....
But oh well... 2-1

.Iknoevel. 01-02-04 07:17 PM

opening - close but ILL
flow - Billy..Ill had some streached lines and un even ones
personals - Ill
punches - Ill
multis - blah..none really
metas - blah again
closing - Ill
overall - ILLunatic

Cryptic Thoughts 01-02-04 07:49 PM

You people honestly need to get of Illunatic's dick.
I've read 3 battles in which he has lost noticibly...
However due to retarded vote that reek of D/R he seems to win

Tsar Casm 01-02-04 07:51 PM

Look, its pointless to explain but i will, ILL came with a better flow, punches, metas, and all around just a better verse, nor much more ot say.

vote-ILL

ILLunatic 01-02-04 08:06 PM

^ Didn't poll vote but ok....

And Trapt Wit...Get off my fuckin dick
Battle me.... 500+ post to vote....

Red Scare 01-02-04 08:43 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by billy
Come on, all these catz claimin they ill and their skills lame…
noone describes you as sick, that’s why you add ill to your name!
?!?! Wack as Phuck 3/10
Writing basic shit in privacy and you’ll learn soon….
That ya rhymes are like people sick in bed, they shouldn’t leave the room!
Weak Punch.... 4/10
Your killin your own rep wit your fake ass lethal scriptures…
I can bust rhymes while I sit and watch as you try ta fix yers!
Tried to be a personal...try harder next time... 5/10
Got you worryin about wut comes out of your lips
I throw a deodorant stick in your mouth so your sure when you spit!
Terrible played line 4/10
You bring problems to this site and I can hear a couple booin’…
Im not a thug….but I’ll be glad ta grab a gun and start trouble shootin!
Wack And Weak closer.... 3/10

Overall : 19/50
weak and wack all throughout the verse


Quote:
Originally posted by billy
You post audio in Songs,And didnt even get a single review
You wack...talent ya lack....when the hell you gone see this through?
[B]Aight personal decent punch...
5/10
Battlin 13th ya got DQ'd because you commited a no show
How embarrassing was that, 13th is wack.. and your even worst than that ya homo
Solid personal...funny 7/10
How does it feel to kno you got sonned, by a Lightweight 5 ta 1
Done decide this won, ya textually murdered, as the votes come in 5 ta none
another personal... 7/10
LMFAO.... ya made a call out and Axe replied
Viewed 16 times, to reply back you couldn't decide
lol..another personal... 6/10
Set up ta battle Envy Ny ya posted rules but never returned to battle
Fuck it i'm out, bout ta skidattle...Oh yea...ILL just made yo brains rattle
ehh...its aight closer nothing special 5/10

Overall: 30/50
Decent verse...
[B]


Vote: Ill

ILLunatic 01-02-04 08:54 PM

LoL..
Both things quoted by billy...
But yea... I just talked to raz over AIM
And he said he put explanations in the quote
So yea.....

ILLunatic 01-02-04 08:56 PM

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.....4-1.....
Lets get
This shit
CLOSED
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Efusive 01-02-04 11:39 PM

ehh... pretty good battle buy ILL takes it he just had a better overall verse.. his punches where more consitent and more on point...bill you didnt do so bad.. but you where just out done, you had a good flow going though.. No Hate Just a vote.. Props to both

Overall: ILL

Peace

Efusive 01-02-04 11:41 PM

It wont let me poll for some reason.. Mods Please Poll me
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Thank You
Peace

billy 01-03-04 12:57 AM

wow..............................

if i have to go through this mans history and post up adresses to win a battle i will no longer battle here ever again.........

no hate and the shit was personal but in all honesty i wrote mine in 45 minutes..........i cant imagine how long it took him.......
people will do anything to win.....*shakes head*

but anyways good battle..............

ILLunatic 01-03-04 12:58 AM

LoL..
Actually only took me 30 minutes...
Wasn't hard...
No beef tho...
I got mad writers block...
So i figured i'd get personals on you....


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