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-Tech- vs Rock1n'Flames
rules.....as u wish
blind spit no c,h,dr, feeding 20 minute time limit, check in now no recycling good luck |
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Damn 20 lines max thats a fuckin line a minute...
I know I'm keyin but you got somthin pre-writtin I chose blind spit, and It's my prefrence for a time limit I Re-wind gimics, take it to you and Wrap this Gift Kid* My presence, rips apart every word in your sentence A W I pick it like fences, leave u stripped & defenseless Man ta battle with me you must be crippled and senseless You ain't walkin' away now you've tripled ya repentence Your structure is wack, ya verse dont even function at that I got punches ta match, 6 of ur verses crunched in this rap No matter how hard you force yourself ta lunge it's a scratch When Rb wants ta eat they look here I put lunch on tha map Adjust ta tha facts, move ya bitch ass inta tha brunt of my axe So blunt you attack, I could smoke you and give some of it back Think you could trick me into crackin' under time and pressure Foolish.....you verse is slackin' no wonder u rhyme like'a jester Your nothin but somthin for us emcees to point and poke fun at Treat us like royalty cuz when I ask for u I say "where my son at" My lines get longer toward the end cuz i'm stretchin your neck I've wasted good punches on you so you catchin' wats -L-eft |
17 minutes.....lol.....less than a line a minute..............i'll b back to check on this later................Good key i'd say..........Holla back
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You bout to get quick burnt than rolled like One Joint
Tha truth is you couldnt Move A Crowd at Gun Point Im like a fat fuckin virgin wit battles Hard To Lose So dont forget ya apron Bitch im servin beef like Barbecues While your at Value Village Technician up in Expensive Stores Ima beat tha black off ya like racist cops usin Excessive Force I Break Alot of tha Fake Who Thought they would Make It Hot And your one of em now how bout you jus let me Take Ya Spot Coughin up ur shot just ta spit ill but ya witts killed by childrens brain teasers Sluts reppin a crew but steppin ta Rock1n' just another over excited cheer leader Cause right now I know you gettin alot more Thinner And Frail Cause you get No Respect like Chrit Bein In Jail** My Type Of Skills is Hype And Ill your kinds More Than Wack My Punchlines are crushin you like tha Buckaneer QuarterBack So now you know ima pro I bet you like Hes A Vet Your styles old like tha fuckin Mold from a Chea Pet You's a bitch,geek, and ho in life, Despite Loner Now I know why you chose to be tha Site stoner keystyle blah blah vote up **= in the thread in EI What Happened To Him?, illunatic said, chrit is prolly in jail |
not a bad battle....Liked the flow both ya'll brought
BREAKDOWN-- punches-T Flow-both structure-both sustainment-both enjoyment-both metas-draw..both came good.. wordplay-Tech Overall-Tech good battle n equal apart from punches n wordplay i particularly liked the chrit n jail one..... he was actually in jail...well he said he was but i believe him nice job rock..but Tech takes it pz MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP LADS...BEING MAD SLEPT ON PZ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1 |
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punches: rock took this category his punches hit really hare tech yours was tight too but didnt hit that hard
personals tech: your personals was dope metas rock: tech you coulda flipped yours a lil better bro flow both: rock yours was a lil stretched though multies none: you both should include some in your verses some times overall i gotta go wit rock good battle but just a opinion peep mine in my sig please .................................................. ..... .................................................. ..... |
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-Technician-
Damn 20 lines max thats a fuckin line a minute... I know I'm keyin but you got somthin pre-writtin I chose blind spit, and It's my prefrence for a time limit I Re-wind gimics, take it to you and Wrap this Gift Kid* My presence, rips apart every word in your sentence A W I pick it like fences, leave u stripped & defenseless Man ta battle with me you must be crippled and senseless You ain't walkin' away now you've tripled ya repentence Your structure is wack, ya verse dont even function at that I got punches ta match, 6 of ur verses crunched in this rap No matter how hard you force yourself ta lunge it's a scratch When Rb wants ta eat they look here I put lunch on tha map Adjust ta tha facts, move ya bitch ass inta tha brunt of my axe So blunt you attack, I could smoke you and give some of it back Think you could trick me into crackin' under time and pressure Foolish.....you verse is slackin' no wonder u rhyme like'a jester Your nothin but somthin for us emcees to point and poke fun at Treat us like royalty cuz when I ask for u I say "where my son at" My lines get longer toward the end cuz i'm stretchin your neck I've wasted good punches on you so you catchin' wats -L-eft Lol... Nice hard punches Wordplay pretty good... Personals not much.. Structure was really good Vocab really good... Overall i'd give you 18/20 Rockin'1Flames You bout to get quick burnt than rolled like One Joint Tha truth is you couldnt Move A Crowd at Gun Point Im like a fat fuckin virgin wit battles Hard To Lose So dont forget ya apron Bitch im servin beef like Barbecues While your at Value Village Technician up in Expensive Stores Ima beat tha black off ya like racist cops usin Excessive Force I Break Alot of tha Fake Who Thought they would Make It Hot And your one of em now how bout you jus let me Take Ya Spot Coughin up ur shot just ta spit ill but ya witts killed by childrens brain teasers Sluts reppin a crew but steppin ta Rock1n' just another over excited cheer leader Cause right now I know you gettin alot more Thinner And Frail Cause you get No Respect like Chrit Bein In Jail** My Type Of Skills is Hype And Ill your kinds More Than Wack My Punchlines are crushin you like tha Buckaneer QuarterBack So now you know ima pro I bet you like Hes A Vet Your styles old like tha fuckin Mold from a Chea Pet You's a bitch,geek, and ho in life, Despite Loner Now I know why you chose to be tha Site stoner Flow was ok... Wordplay was dope Punches were sorta weak Personals...Not really Vocab....None to brag about Structure needs work Verse was pretty dope.... Overall...... 16/20 Vote--Technician- He came a lil harder with punches .................................................. ...... Props to both tho...... Dont do long battles next time.. To hard to read........ |
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d/r vote.....many ppl have brought to my attention you are best friends and live right down the street......plus you said i had no multies......and i had plenty.....READ a verse......than throw in your 2 cents.......but Rock if you wanna keep the vote you can......... |
i dont dr, i simply dont cheat, plus tech you my boy
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damn...hard battle to choose from here honestly.....Rockin had some nice wordplay...but Tech had better developed punches and strucuture....good battle....heres a breakdown for u two...
BREAKDOWN Metas - Rockin Wordplay - Rockin Punches - Tech Strucuture - Tech Flow - Tech Vocab - Tie RhymeScheme - Tie Overall - hard battle to choose like i said in the begining...but Tech gets this just for having harder punches.....if Rockin would've thrown more direct hitting punches instead of relying on wordplay so much he wouldve definitely had this battle.....good read from u both though...no hate...just a vote.. peace |
d/r vote.....many ppl have brought to my attention you are best friends and live right down the street......
many people.... more like one propably (illunatic) aint yall hoes in the same crew agents or shit...."make you famous"....rrriiiggghhhttt plus you said i had no multies......and i had plenty..... I would like to see where you had aleast one multie....thought so you didnt rhyme off a word atleast four times...until you show me....shut up READ a verse......than throw in your 2 cents....... I did read a verse...I read two of them...and its then not than but Rock if you wanna keep the vote you can......... it was a honest vote so blah (show me your multies tech) |
^ok.....agents isnt a crew.......we just keep people in line :thumbup:
upppn...........................this bitch.........................like a wonderbra,............................ |
Punches - Flames Hit Wayy Harder ... tech .. elevate dawg
Flow & Structure = Tie .. both very nice Personals = Blah ... None Really Sparked My Attention Entertainment - Flames Was Very Comical Vote = Flames |
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TECH- A W I pick it like fences, leave u stripped & defenseless ^^^ Nice wordplay.....not much of a punch Treat us like royalty cuz when I ask for u I say "where my son at" ^^^^ Getting played...but you put a good twist on it, nice punch My lines get longer toward the end cuz i'm stretchin your neck I've wasted good punches on you so you catchin' wats -L-eft ^^^ Alright closer, not too great though -ROCK- You bout to get quick burnt than rolled like One Joint Tha truth is you couldnt Move A Crowd at Gun Point ^^^^^^^^ Smooth opener, first line was cracked but the second was a hrad punch And then you fell off and went--- Down down down...... Tech gets my vote for more consistent punches, you guys did good for 20lines in 20 mins, but Tech had the punches. |
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TECH verse
Damn 20 lines max thats a fuckin line a minute... I know I'm keyin but you got somthin pre-writtin I chose blind spit, and It's my prefrence for a time limit I Re-wind gimics, take it to you and Wrap this Gift Kid* My presence, rips apart every word in your sentence A W I pick it like fences, leave u stripped & defenseless Man ta battle with me you must be crippled and senseless You ain't walkin' away now you've tripled ya repentence Your structure is wack, ya verse dont even function at that I got punches ta match, 6 of ur verses crunched in this rap No matter how hard you force yourself ta lunge it's a scratch When Rb wants ta eat they look here I put lunch on tha map Adjust ta tha facts, move ya bitch ass inta tha brunt of my axe So blunt you attack, I could smoke you and give some of it back Think you could trick me into crackin' under time and pressure Foolish.....you verse is slackin' no wonder u rhyme like'a jester Your nothin but somthin for us emcees to point and poke fun at Treat us like royalty cuz when I ask for u I say "where my son at" My lines get longer toward the end cuz i'm stretchin your neck I've wasted good punches on you so you catchin' wats -L-eft --vote down-- tech had multies,personals,metas,hard pounches, good structure it allowed your verse to flow right.... ROCKIN verse You bout to get quick burnt than rolled like One Joint Tha truth is you couldnt Move A Crowd at Gun Point Im like a fat fuckin virgin wit battles Hard To Lose So dont forget ya apron Bitch im servin beef like Barbecues While your at Value Village Technician up in Expensive Stores Ima beat tha black off ya like racist cops usin Excessive Force I Break Alot of tha Fake Who Thought they would Make It Hot And your one of em now how bout you jus let me Take Ya Spot Coughin up ur shot just ta spit ill but ya witts killed by childrens brain teasers Sluts reppin a crew but steppin ta Rock1n' just another over excited cheer leader Cause right now I know you gettin alot more Thinner And Frail Cause you get No Respect like Chrit Bein In Jail** My Type Of Skills is Hype And Ill your kinds More Than Wack My Punchlines are crushin you like tha Buckaneer QuarterBack So now you know ima pro I bet you like Hes A Vet Your styles old like tha fuckin Mold from a Chea Pet You's a bitch,geek, and ho in life, Despite Loner Now I know why you chose to be tha Site stoner ---vote down-- no hard pounches really didn't stand out compared to Tech's verse,no personals ok structure some wordplay ---------my vote------ my vote goes to tech for a much stronger verse with harder pounches and personals multies and metas vote for my battle in sig no hate jus a vote peace |
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I actually think Rockin' took this, his punches hit harder when i read through. Tech had good flow and rhyme scheme and structure but Rockin' takes this by far on punches in my opinion, just more to them. I didin't see this as even that close, maybe i missed something.
Anyhow, Rockin' gets my vote drop an honest vote here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102575 |
Tech
you came pretty hard for a newbie and you had some good lines and constivly tryed punches i did see a few played line such as that Snatch line Quote:
Rock Dude your line was a filler no punches the fuck you need to evulate kid check our some tutorials in W.E.C and im not being mean im being serious i see some talent in u but first u need to learn how to punch anyway no hate u can get better Pz. Vote= Tech |
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Wordplay:Rock
Punches :Tech Vocab:Both Strucuture:Tech Flow:Tech tech gets the battle with better punches ....n flow..werdplay was aight from his side even thought i dont think he won it..but u cant just win off werdplay..good battle though..tech takes it |
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