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HipHop101 01-02-04 12:49 AM

HipHop101 vs. Echo
 
Rules:
You spit first
10-15 Lines
No hate
No D.R.
No Freeposting in thread
No pre-written.

Good Luck :thumbup:

Echo 01-02-04 01:11 AM

i's sitting here with a man who think he can teach a class
hip hop 101, my classmates and i hope the lesson doesn't last
it's like sitting behind the fuckn' wheel and falling asleep
i got my license, but the damn road ain't that interesting
don't rape her she just took some toilet paper
now ur getting pissed when it was a fuckn' favor
put you outta your misery before you do it to yourself
they think u got stigmata, but i saw the knife on the shelf.
holes in your hands and feet like you were in the middle of war
but i put nails in your ligaments to show u I'm a rap whore
you have circles under those eyes, do u got the flu?
your head is hot and your lips are bright blue
you put on some lip balm didn't you? your a lesbo or a faggot
don't kiss me, they'll get the wrong idea, tag your it


good luck yo

HipHop101 01-03-04 03:18 AM

Murder
 
:thumbup: Nice Verse Homie

Ayo, :spit:
:I'ma straight rhyme spit smithsman, and you a newbie
:ShEmY's back to attact you hoes as if you (Knew Me)
:Slugz knock yo brain around knocking all "intelligence" out
:In *EveryWhichWay* I'm Cummin, yo girl calls me a gunman
:Reatract dumb kids who think they can shout at a "Vet"
:Spray radio air-waves at you till there aint no "Mic" left
:B.M.W. (Bitches Money and Weed) that's all I need in this land
:Pay yo debts to society son you'll get sooned-owend-booed
:*Chewed* up and spit off stage like a man wit no 'multis'
:Spit straight bullets that leave you wit car trouble on the highway
:"SlideAway" to a distant 'area', c'mon hire me as yo 'manager'
:You like fast cars, walks in the park, and dicks up yo anus
:Midaswell be signed wit "The Agency" cuz I'm makein you famous

Finisher-
:*Braind Dead*You like N'Sync a boy band wit no strings attached
:Replaced, face it You couldn't be dope if Diddy remixed this 'track'

HipHop101 01-03-04 03:39 AM

Uppp'nnnnnnnnnnnnn
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HipHop101 01-03-04 02:24 PM

Jesus Ya'll.....Why don't you vote on battles. Uppp'nnnnn
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Brendan 01-03-04 02:30 PM

HipHop, don't say "finsher:" then spit something, it doesn't look good.

I would vote for hiphop101 because echos verse doesn't make any fucking sense!

the breakdown:

i's sitting here with a man who think he can teach a class
hip hop 101, my classmates and i hope the lesson doesn't last
i's thinking this is weak
it's like sitting behind the fuckn' wheel and falling asleep
i got my license, but the damn road ain't that interesting
um...
don't rape her she just took some toilet paper
now ur getting pissed when it was a fuckn' favor
wtf???
put you outta your misery before you do it to yourself
they think u got stigmata, but i saw the knife on the shelf.
no
holes in your hands and feet like you were in the middle of war
but i put nails in your ligaments to show u I'm a rap whore
because we know people fighting in wars always have holes in thier hands and feet....
you have circles under those eyes, do u got the flu?
your head is hot and your lips are bright blue
???
you put on some lip balm didn't you? your a lesbo or a faggot
don't kiss me, they'll get the wrong idea, tag your it
haha


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103093

doc_knock 01-03-04 02:33 PM

aight, both yall had weak punches. but echo had better wordplay. not really any personals on either side, and both had pretty good structure. but i gotta go with echo cuz of the wordplay being the only thing that stood out.


vote: echo

i spend time on your battles, spend time on mine

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HipHop101 01-03-04 04:26 PM

His verse made no fuckin sense you whack ass retard.

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Upp'nnn

Dialect OTYP 01-03-04 04:54 PM

echos shit makes sence its irrelavent to dissin 101
so because 101 had stronger
-punches,flow,wordplay everything i gotta go wit him


vote 101

HipHop101 01-05-04 11:28 PM

Uppp'nnnn this ya'll...Lets go..Vote
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Echo 01-06-04 10:49 AM

uppin for more votes-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Harlem's Finest 01-06-04 10:57 AM

Strangly closer than it seems for me...

As said Echo's verse made little sense.. most bars didn't connect with each other at all.. structure/flow seemed okay tho... helped the verse slightly I guess.. no decent punches really, little impact..
HipHop101 came slightly harder.. the rhyme scheme used wasn't the best ever, it messed the flow up in places.. again not much in the way of some real personal punches but there were consistant hits.. one main thing that made the verse stand above Echo's was the vocab used.. it made the verse alot better..
Overall HipHop101 takes it for the above..

Vote - HipHop101

Return the favour with an honest vote - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104125

butcher 01-06-04 01:53 PM

hiphop101 lost it a bit wid his rhymin' scheme, but he was more aggressive and it was more of a battle rap than echos one.

echos ryming was beta but he wasnt very agrresive and his cusses didnt hit as hard as 101s did.

I vote-HipHop101
vote on my battles at

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104120
and
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104419

Dick Tator 01-06-04 02:03 PM

hip hop got this because even tho his punches werent great they made sense and were stronger than echo....best punch from echo

you put on some lip balm didn't you? your a lesbo or a faggot
don't kiss me, they'll get the wrong idea, tag your it
^^which wasnt great and

hip hops
:You like fast cars, walks in the park, and dicks up yo anus
:Midaswell be signed wit "The Agency" cuz I'm makein you famous

u had weird wordin and some lines didnt seem to flow right tho

v/hip hop


hit this up plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103509

HipHop101 01-06-04 07:20 PM

Uppp'nnnnnnnnn
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mcsnypa03 01-07-04 05:14 PM

yo 101 is muh boy so i ant votein cuz that cheep but yall gotta up him dawg is tight ~1~
{qote} muh self
cotton was forgotten by his parents and the same in the rap game its a shame to me that fool typed my name to aim me up u wanna fuck wit me homes ill get u hit up since the day of birth nigga rots away the he ant like none i know muh friends all got blown away at age 8 i was left astray in a parkin lot its hard bein half white to gain respect u always gotta fight but tonight at gonna happen im gonna keep rappen and elevatin wile this fools brain cells continu escapein

blak woods 01-07-04 06:16 PM

101 took this man...

harder punches... better flow.. i think it flowed better in reading you know... echo had a tight verse too.. he took personals in my opinion... but overall 101 hit harder.. came at that cat...

ayo, hip hop when we gone' do this audio thing homie...

one
get at these battles and vote peeps


audio:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102425

text:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104688

HipHop101 01-08-04 11:03 PM

Uppp'nnnn Dis Shit
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2 More Votes C'mon ya'll...


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