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GaZeeBo vs LilPhresh
very quick battle
due by 12 eastern time 12 lines no d/r no crew no hate no feedin blind spit we both spit at same time check in be4 spittin |
aight ima chekcin in now and spiiting
u should do the same remember due by 12 eastern...thats 40 minutes |
aight. im keying right now. if mines a lil late, im sry. i was spitting my verse on me and rapper_bigga. but im keyin
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This is the french revolution, ur marie antionette i'm the guillotine/
Choppin heads off lacerations more grizzly than that memphis team/ Are u ready man? your face to face wit ammuntion/ As I'm slammin A minor.. like an angered musician/ Your elevating? Going through the sediments of the evident/ Your style's like camera film you need to take time to develop it/ Your not ill, so you act dope like the Rock's stunt double's trouble with immigration/ If I came 1st or 2nd, you'd still get fucked either way like double penetration/ Ill plan ur demise blueprint 4 terror,...if u wanna harm me try it/ But fuckin wit me u destined 2 die like japanese kamikaze pilots/ Bad choice battling me...whos gonna get the votes??...take a guess/ You think ur so smart but ur battling me...u cant even spell fresh/ |
Watch presh 'Stop Kill' like *Homicide Detectives*!! my hard punches threaten-his-hits /
why do you try? its known im quick to really "Kill Joy" like a |Family Death On Christmas|!! // just give up now chump, my shots will leave this bitch "Burned Bad" till yah *Fear-Heaters*!! yah over, its obvious yah already "Used Up Yah Chants"(chance) like |Washed Up Cheerleaders|!! // Yah 'Lieing', if you "Hold Weight" then simply, the *Truths-Weak*!! assault till this dudes-beat / Phresh'll have yah resorting to |Backflips Over Baby Trees| to try an |Turn Over A New Leaf|!! // ...My punches were "Made For Kill" like *Concentration Camps*!! yah thoughts-are-ending / when perfected hits leave Kill Joy "Coming To Tears" like fathers at their |Daughters Wedding|!! // . not seeing-me-scum, trust fate and believe-me-yah-done | fuck ill even waste this last line......(cause i easily won) || ehh... this was kind of a shitty verse. but lets see the voters vote, well when ur done. |
aight. uppin for some votes in here. uppin #1................................................ ..............
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pretty good battle. gazeebo's flow was definitely better, but he also had better punches and better wordplay. phresh had some wordplay, but it didnt work as well.
vote: gazeebo |
oh...right...i spend time on your battle, spend time on mine.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102139 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101943 |
thats a fucking dick riding vote and i know it. better wordplay my ass. half of the shit he said didnt even fucking rhyme.
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Vote-Gazeebo
punches-tie complexity-presh enjoyment-both flow-none metas-gaz sustainment-gaz overall-Gazeebo jus hit harder and good metas helped his cause.................... MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS PLZ PZ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102236 |
sustainment? what the fuck does that have to do with battling? i dont even know what the hell it means. the wierd thing is and i just noticed that. take a look at doc_knock and GaZeeBo's IP's. exactly the same. hmm... suspicious
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i have the same IP as him? um...thats strange. im not the same person tho, honestly.
and its not a hate vote or anything, just honest, dont get mad at honest votes. |
yo sry for freepost but bullshit
i wanna see where our ip is the same just take the votes as they come if the guy is 19-3...maybe he knows just a little bit about battling |
yea and how did we just post 1 minute apart from each other.
theres gotta be 30 seconds in between plus i still wanna see where it says that we have the same ip if we do than something is fucked up |
oh. i made a mistake. i was looking at doc_knock's post above his. my bad. just keep the votes coming. im sorry.
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aight thanks for clearin that up
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Sustainment means= if you kept punches comin throughout the battle... consistancy....so you = Dumbass make sure ya'll hit this link..being mad slept on pz.. i took time on this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102236 |
aight. well i didnt know what it meant. and ive never been counted against it in any other battle. but thats u i guess
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i got by what mostly he said i altered it a lil to my likings... but you gee the point... good battle from newbies (or cats from other sites).... nice show up by both textcess... but don't freepost as much... peeps will come vote... they need votes too ... good ish... Caesar On3 |
i gota say GaZeeBo u killed Lil Phresh, but Lil phresh keep goin bcus i like readin ur battles u have good potential!
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aight. if u dont have over 100 posts. dont post here. if u want to gain posts, go to emcee interaction or something. this is a battle, not a spam board. andways. uppin #2
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uppin 3 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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come on peeps. just a few more votes. this actually was a good battle after-all. just a few more. p'z
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I think Phresh takes this by just a tiny little bit.
His format sucked with the stretchy line shit. But he had some real nice wordplay in there, good tight punches. Same goes for Gaz... He used some witty wordplay, nice personals, tight format... But I think the punches weren't as witty or hard as Phresh's. Close, but no cigar. For simply better punches and a bit more wordplay... Phresh. Holla back... |
Vote-Gazeebo
punches-tie complexity-gazeebo enjoyment-both flow-presh metas-gaz consistancy-gaz overall-Gazeebo Gazeebo just came harder at it my vote goes to him. |
Ok breakdown..
GaZeeBo You had good flow and ok structure... you had some ok punches like..."This is the french revolution, ur marie antionette i'm the guillotine/ Choppin heads off lacerations more grizzly than that memphis team" First line was unique as well as second...However it wasn't a hard punch....work on Hard punches that's what wins battles...good effort though... Lil Phresh "yah over, its obvious yah already "Used Up Yah Chants"(chance) like |Washed Up Cheerleaders|!! //" That line there definitly caught my eyes as a reader...You had some other good word schemes as well....I would give the edge to you..however your structure..kinda messed up your flow scheme...which made some of your punches weak.... Good battle by both there is potential in both..better then some battle IV'e seen... Vote goes to GaZeeBo.. |
Oh yes please return the favor and poll vote on this link....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98441 it would be much appreciated.. |
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