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Wr!te Mind .v. oCANti
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I'll drop first you feel free to drop when ever you feel like..cuz I don't fucking care |
well go head consider this my check in
I'll drop in a few minutes when I see yours displayed aiight GOODLUCK* |
I love beating hoes...after I love 'em...and me and O have been through the mak
This bitch can Duck me all she wants...it proves she's qWack I aint sexist...so you can retract my earlier statment right after I cut this rose.....and crack the pavement Hoes usually get Me up....but watch this bitch put her hands high "Wr!te..you just can't rob a slut online.." ...........O...Can't I? Losing just an action and I'm gon' spray this bitch with verbs My text is fucked....and O is hanging on my words O i'll stop now just meet your demands and your wishes but I got a question? If your here battling me...who the fuk is washing dishes? |
This has been a Mr. and Mrs. Production!!!
Dear:Write Mind DISHES?...let me find out you're not the one that's in the kitchen I'm still washin the sheets from ya middle of the night pissin Listen...Oh! what you thought I could'nt flip it/rhymes stay exquisite flows from the entrance-intense u left fumes that went to war with insense u're a rap horror/8 mile ac-tor u would never beat me/cuz I'll leave you on your act floor wit yo back torn you can get on RB and front if you want to you'll be sleeping at your moms/ and yo hand will be fuckin u clip this rose /you'll be investin in the birth of a merker you crack any more pavement/ and you're going to be one less construction worker Sincerely, Your RB sweetheart oCANti A Write....I give it to you I did not expect that, and in my mind that was crucial...u're alright in my book u furball. ALright honest votez, anyone like my story? |
oCANti Tore up!!!!
Man that was tight, betta than tha otha pretenda!! I cud make u a class beat to that if you ever want one... L8rs DJ JAB |
YO WR!TE YOU DONE THIS ONE FOR ME. I LIKE THE PUNCHES YOU PUT IN ABOUT GIRLS DOIN THE DIDHES AND SHIT.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ''O i'll stop now just meet your demands and your wishes but I got a question? If your here battling me...who the fuk is washing dishes?'' Gay vote - Gone Keep it up and you're going to be banned. - Token |
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Hey follow the new voting rules people.....break it down....
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Man this battle was very close humm I honestly don't know who to give it to. I am a person that love metaphors and concrete punchlines. So I will have to go with oCANti because of those two reasons. Wr!te Mind you got skillz though I will give it up
Winner: oCANti |
Yo that was close and shit but Im givin it to Ocanti
she had a solid reply wit hard punches and funny shit too. flow was real good could work on the vocab tho but other then that it was tight Vote: Ocanti |
I said vote on battles
please break shit down ^^^ those votes are queer, how would lyou like if I came to your battle and voted like that........ 3-1 to my girl...... 1-0 me in the polls |
This battle was pretty close but...
Ocanti: Your verse was nice. This is the best one of yours I've seen. Nice replies and nice metas. Decent flow. Your punches and wordplay could still be stronger, however. Write Mind: Your verse was nice, but not that creative. Nice punches and okay flow, but you need better wordplay and find somethin' else to talk about. It was still good, though. |
Oh, my bad, the vote goes to Ocanti.
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Most Creative Lines
Write Mind: I aint sexist...so you can retract my earlier statment right after I cut this rose.....and crack the pavement Ocanti: clip this rose /you'll be investin in the birth of a merker you crack any more pavement/ and you're going to be one less construction worker |
ocant i got this he had better puches and disses.write mind work on ur flow and try to creat puunches that hit a lil harder and you'll be straight.
VOTE: OCANTI vote on this when u hit 100 posts http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103263 vote gone. -feeble. |
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yo aight battle
------write mind verse---- IP: 3273 E58A I love beating hoes...after I love 'em...and me and O have been through the mak This bitch can Duck me all she wants...it proves she's qWack I aint sexist...so you can retract my earlier statment right after I cut this rose.....and crack the pavement Hoes usually get Me up....but watch this bitch put her hands high "Wr!te..you just can't rob a slut online.." ...........O...Can't I? Losing just an action and I'm gon' spray this bitch with verbs My text is fucked....and O is hanging on my words O i'll stop now just meet your demands and your wishes but I got a question? If your here battling me...who the fuk is washing dishes? alote of pounches and personals but they weren't to hard you could work on your structure and flow good wordplay ----Ocanti verse--- DISHES?...let me find out you're not the one that's in the kitchen I'm still washin the sheets from ya middle of the night pissin Listen...Oh! what you thought I could'nt flip it/rhymes stay exquisite flows from the entrance-intense u left fumes that went to war with insense u're a rap horror/8 mile ac-tor u would never beat me/cuz I'll leave you on your act floor wit yo back torn you can get on RB and front if you want to you'll be sleeping at your moms/ and yo hand will be fuckin u clip this rose /you'll be investin in the birth of a merker you crack any more pavement/ and you're going to be one less construction worker better overall verse with harder pounches and personals metas and wordplay nice spiting ------------------vote goes to Ocanti----------------- vot on battles in my sig i took the time |
Well my vote would go to Ocanti. But she was feeding to much and we all know thats a No-No. So that being said Write had some oright punches and nice flow. so my vote is Write
no hate..... please vote honestly on: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101043 |
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I think Write had some sweet punches. I liked these two:
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On flow, I'd have to give it to Ocanti. On creativity I'd also have ot give it to Ocanti... I like the letter style. Overall if I could vote I'd vote for O, but it's a close call. |
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