Mr. Mike Dew .\/s. Jab
 

6-10 lines
due 6hs after i spit
1st to 5 wins
3-0 KO
if ppl sleep on this battle then whoever has the most votes by sunday night wins

let me kno if u wanna spit 1st

Aiiite Blud,
Ive logged in, let you know im gonna win
Just need tha votes when my fist hits ya boat (cockney rhyming slang .... boat race- face)
Your spittin first...
Do ya worst cos ya'll be leavin in a hurst

:laugh2: :wtf:

i hope ur trynna sike me out to THINK ur really that garbage

im only go'n 3 bars

my verse:
give it up son i heard wackness inc. is look'n for for profound secretaries/
in this battle ima have u lay'n with ya face in the groundl like upside down cemetaries//

i dunk MCs like donuts at lunch in police precints/
how the fuck u got a name like jab and u cant even punch decent//

go do sumthin else wit ya life give up rap and get off of ya couch/
my rhymes are arm & hammer fresh while yo shit stinks like oscar the grouch//

ok im done

Mr Mike Dew,
The only man whose cock is to small to fit in a baby's shoe...
Its ok though Mike....
We all knew what type of man would grow from a dyke...
Your questioning me?
I heard you were Vanilla Ices Only Groupieeeee...
Mr "Im So Hood"
Even my babies momma could beat your ass good!
Heres a dictionary....go read it,
Afta readin your last verse LOOKS LIKE YA'LL NEED IT!

Waitin on you now

c'mon man be for real
i mean seriously
ok time for us to get some damn votes up inthis bitch now

:laugh2:

vote please

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vote whose the winner please guys!!!
Just leave a lil reason as why u voted also... just wantin to know!!
Thanks alot

JAB

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Cum on dudes we need votes.....up'n so i can get some hits......................................
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yea man this is real weak that yall aint vote'n
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aiight i got yall on the votes

yall might want to do more that 3 bars next time cuz the new line limit is 10 lines

Mike DREW- dude your pretty nice man.. lol.. you had some funny ass punchlines like

"give it up son i heard wackness inc. is look'n for for profound secretaries/
in this battle ima have u lay'n with ya face in the groundl like upside down cemetaries//"

your whole verse was pretty tight man ill give you a 7/10 shit was pretty good for a newbie man

JAB- i know this was supposed to only be a 3 bar battle but you could have come alot harder dude.. you had some pretty basic rhymes dog.. improve more

vote- i vote for mike drew he had better punchlines and better wordplay than jab plus he used nice personal disses

good look'n

but if this is my last time up'n this shit
so wether its done or not by tonite ima get so more battles up cz i ain gon never be able to spit agianst nobody else if ppl keep sleep'n

mike dew took this shit so easily.

jab...u had NO punches, flow, structure, or anything that makes upa good verse.
mike, your verse was aight...i think that the first two lines were only ur decent one, but they was betta than jab....
vote-mikedew

yo man dont worry ill up this shit for you a couple times............................................. .................................................. ................

uppin this for mike dew............................................... .................................................. ...........

how the fuck u got a name like jab and u cant even punch decent// <-------- HAHAHAHAH!!!! That was funny.

Punches: Mike
Wordplay: Neither
Metas: Mike
Multis: Mike
Flow: Jab
Creativity: Mike


Vote- Mike

That line was funny, killed the battle, Jab, you need some elevation.

i'm go with mike dew.........jab's was just......not up to par to put it nicely with dew's......the cemetary line was pretty good i liked it alot. Jab's just made basically no sense.....had no punch.......and you both shoulda agreed on more than 3 cause You can't really get your verses goin less you have like 6 or 8 that's just my opinion.

i dunk MCs like donuts at lunch in police precints/
how the fuck u got a name like jab and u cant even punch decent//

That was a hot fucken bar 9/10 for it I'd have to say. Mike Ripped Jab.

Flow: Mike, because it was easier to see what went with what else

Structure: Mike because he has a good strcuture plain and simple, I hate that shit like jab did when he puts in shit that has nothing to do with the battle after his line.

Punches: Mike had a tight amount of punches, and jab was aight, but mike still gets it

Metas: Nothing really spoke out but Mike had some so he gets this as well.

Point being,

VOTE: Mike