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Diverse vs. CarsonJetX2
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10-12 lines crew votes cool no d/r or hate votes no feeding/recycling 30 min. to drop or dq good luck |
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checkin in and droppin, try to drop by tonight homie
I'll leave this kid feelin sluggish like a severe case of jet lag have you thinkin he's homeless cuz he ain't got any room to brag Same crew, similar record but opposite directions of elevation As he drops way below C level while i rise up to the occasion Carsonjet considers himself to be a so-called supreme emcee But my words shoot down his hopes like anti-aircraft artillery Twice in a row you got KO'd, by members of our same crew Now i'm up, the third to go, so i guess it's another L for you Emerge laughed in ya face when you challenged him to slips This crew should have you replaced like old people with fake hips Found the situation whimsical cuz he knew you weren't kidding You would be to easy to murk so he sent me to do his bidding just waitin on ya verse homie, let's get this shit poppin....and if you don't understand the punches and shit then don't vote...plain and simple... |
explanations i guess...
line 5: check his avi it says supreme emcee line 7: he's already lost to two people in our crew line 9: he challenged emerge to slips that should be it |
diverse....
11-4? wit what? newbies?...only 4 vets have battled u it's true...add another merk in crew just like eyeque Noabuse? he's 2-12 I hope u coulda merk'd that kid... face the facts.wit out ya gramps emerge..u have no wins Forget clappin..I could end this thread wit blanks-n-flares.. I even star' his avi^^look...Im right on top this panda bear It's simply clear..I was better than u even before i was x2 Thought u knew.u couldn't carey a win on me i ya name was drew I could set the standard grass..Diverse still can't wip my ass Leave diverse half-massed...please...drop another personal about my past |
yo im sayin carson got this battle easy....he had better personals......dtruc was even.....meats a liked carsons better.....
punches was even both had nice concetps....overall i think caron won he hit harder wit personals |
Forget clappin..I could end this thread wit blanks-n-flares..
I even star' his avi^^look...Im right on top this panda bear ^^ best lines clean battle...11-4 kid not bad..feelin yastructure a bit choppy at sum points but nice punches an personals Carson..like ya structure short worded an strate to the punch feelin it liked that line i quoted... prett even battle u both are pretty damn good an are past the basic writing skillz...... V-carson..very close..sum mite differ... Pc http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102865 Vote honestly |
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flow-diverse
persosonals-carson wordplay-diverse punches-carson consistancy-carson vote-carson, he came a little harder.. carey line was kool.. both had some alright lines nothing spectacular.. diverse had a slightly better flow but carson had slightly better disses so he edged out the win, return the favor hit this battle up http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...threadid=102893 |
pretty good battle.
both had good punches, but i think diverse had better wordplay, a few more clever rhymes. vote: diverse vote doesnt count, you are warned for the crappy voting. -feeble |
oh ya, and i spend time on your battles, spend time on mine.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...threadid=102139 http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...threadid=101943 |
nice spit carson, this is a good battle homie.....but for the record, i got dq'ed against No Abuse, that's why i lost, but good researching for the battle and shit.......get at me online..............
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Vote on this honestly please!http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...eadid=101986...
neway my vote is for CarsonJetX2 he had beta personals and a beta flow! warned for the crappy vote. read the rules. -feeble |
Diverse:
I'll leave this kid feelin sluggish like a severe case of jet lag have you thinkin he's homeless cuz he ain't got any room to brag ^ok opener, personal & meta: 6/10 Same crew, similar record but opposite directions of elevation As he drops way below C level while i rise up to the occasion ^NICE wordplay: 9/10 Carsonjet considers himself to be a so-called supreme emcee But my words shoot down his hopes like anti-aircraft artillery ^lil' filler, but good punch: 7/10 Twice in a row you got KO'd, by members of our same crew Now i'm up, the third to go, so i guess it's another L for you ^ok line, good personal: 6/10 Emerge laughed in ya face when you challenged him to slips This crew should have you replaced like old people with fake hips ^LMAO, tough personal and punch: 9/10 Found the situation whimsical cuz he knew you weren't kidding You would be to easy to murk so he sent me to do his bidding ^ehh, not a strong close, but another personal: 6/10 Carson: 11-4? wit what? newbies?...only 4 vets have battled u it's true...add another merk in crew just like eyeque ^nice open. Personal: 8/10 Noabuse? he's 2-12 I hope u coulda merk'd that kid... face the facts.wit out ya gramps emerge..u have no wins ^More personals, good flow: 8/10 Forget clappin..I could end this thread wit blanks-n-flares.. I even star' his avi^^look...Im right on top this panda bear ^lMAO: 10/10 It's simply clear..I was better than u even before i was x2 Thought u knew.u couldn't carey a win on me i ya name was drew ^^ok line, could be a lot cleaner: 6/10 I could set the standard grass..Diverse still can't wip my ass Leave diverse half-massed...please...drop another personal about my past ^Nice tie in wit ya other lines in the verse: 9/10 BOTH +5 for illness..... This was a sick battle. Diverse: 48/60 = 80% ill Carson: 46/50 = 92% ill Carson took this. Hit my link in my sig. |
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Diverse:
I'll leave this kid feelin sluggish like a severe case of jet lag have you thinkin he's homeless cuz he ain't got any room to brag Nice. Same crew, similar record but opposite directions of elevation As he drops way below C level while i rise up to the occasion ok Carsonjet considers himself to be a so-called supreme emcee But my words shoot down his hopes like anti-aircraft artillery ok...bceause of the sig Twice in a row you got KO'd, by members of our same crew Now i'm up, the third to go, so i guess it's another L for you ok Emerge laughed in ya face when you challenged him to slips This crew should have you replaced like old people with fake hips no... Found the situation whimsical cuz he knew you weren't kidding You would be to easy to murk so he sent me to do his bidding ok Overall a good verse... some personals and some some good punches. Nothing that really made me say "oh shit!" though. Carson: 11-4? wit what? newbies?...only 4 vets have battled u it's true...add another merk in crew just like eyeque I tink I'm missing something.... Noabuse? he's 2-12 I hope u coulda merk'd that kid... face the facts.wit out ya gramps emerge..u have no wins ok personal Forget clappin..I could end this thread wit blanks-n-flares.. I even star' his avi^^look...Im right on top this panda bear ha, good It's simply clear..I was better than u even before i was x2 Thought u knew.u couldn't carey a win on me i ya name was drew ok, some good wordplay I could set the standard grass..Diverse still can't wip my ass Leave diverse half-massed...please...drop another personal about my past had potential but sort of messed up the phrasing. And it's half mast Another good verse, had a few personals and wordplay. I had to do this but I think I'd call this one a tie. Well, if I could actually poll vote I'd pick one or the other but it's very tough to make a decision. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103093 |
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breakdown
punches c: 11-4? wit what? newbies?...only 4 vets have battled u it's true...add another merk in crew just like eyeque metas d: Carsonjet considers himself to be a so-called supreme emcee But my words shoot down his hopes like anti-aircraft artillery personals c: Forget clappin..I could end this thread wit blanks-n-flares.. I even star' his avi^^look...Im right on top this panda bear multies c: I could set the standard grass..Diverse still can't wip my ass Leave diverse half-massed...please...drop another personal about my past overall i gotta go with carson good battle both can you both peep mine thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102266 |
yo diverse took this...
i was feelin his verse more. with da punchez and personals and da wordplay. carson had a good verse too. but in da end, diverse took it wit da personals... vote-diverse. Read new voting rules.. Learn how to vote -Token |
rite thought id explain more y CarsonJetX2 murked the other biatch. he was beta all round his flow was strong and punches were stronger!the other biatch had no flow at all he may aswell of not turned up!!!!!
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overall can took this easily, his punchlines were better, his wordplay was better, and he had a much better structure verse...
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I'll leave this kid feelin sluggish like a severe case of jet lag
have you thinkin he's homeless cuz he ain't got any room to brag 8/10 HA Same crew, similar record but opposite directions of elevation As he drops way below C level while i rise up to the occasion 7/10 Carsonjet considers himself to be a so-called supreme emcee But my words shoot down his hopes like anti-aircraft artillery 8/10 Twice in a row you got KO'd, by members of our same crew Now i'm up, the third to go, so i guess it's another L for you 6/10 Emerge laughed in ya face when you challenged him to slips This crew should have you replaced like old people with fake hips 7/10 Found the situation whimsical cuz he knew you weren't kidding You would be to easy to murk so he sent me to do his bidding 8/10 44 - 6 = 38.000000 HAD to subtract ur worst scored bar because u have 12 lines to his 10 11-4? wit what? newbies?...only 4 vets have battled u it's true...add another merk in crew just like eyeque 8/10 Noabuse? he's 2-12 I hope u coulda merk'd that kid... face the facts.wit out ya gramps emerge..u have no wins 7/10 Forget clappin..I could end this thread wit blanks-n-flares.. I even star' his avi^^look...Im right on top this panda bear 9/10 OHHHHHHHH NIGGA BAM! It's simply clear..I was better than u even before i was x2 Thought u knew.u couldn't carey a win on me i ya name was drew 8/10 I could set the standard grass..Diverse still can't wip my ass Leave diverse half-massed...please...drop another personal about my past 9/10 OHHHHHH 41.00000000000 CLOSE BATTLE GUYS BUT CARSON TAKES IT LIKE ITS HIS! |
I cant seem to POLL ATM so ill just lay back in the shack, yall niggaz fix that crap. ---DRE
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Tight battle...
Diverse hit hard.. some good p.ersonal disses throughout, clean structure/flow etc... Carson hit just as good, again nice persona ls etc... but it lacked something in my eyes tho.. maybe the overall structure did something but I was feelin' Diverse's alot more - The finisher was real nice... kinda a perfect closer... not a major hit as such but a great bar to end sh.it if you get me.. Carson's was similar in that way, kinda an anti-climax style finisher with real impact but it was outdone slightly... C's personals were nice, but presented differently hindering the impact.. Diverse had some good wordplay, and each bar complimented the next really.... Overall a killer battle, pretty close, but in the end... Vote - Diverse Return the favour with an honest vote - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101913 |
yo carson if i could i would vote for u, cause that shit was tight,
it flowed jus right.......................... |
Carson comes through with the W.
Diverse. Solid drop throughout. You had good personals, and all the basics were there. Wordplay, meta's, structure, and multi's. Carson. You brought the basics as well, but what seperated our drop from his was the tenacity. You seemed like you wanted it more. Carson Wins |
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