Telekinetic-Vs-Dough-SickxX
 

10-20 Lines
Due As Soon As Possible
Umm,

No Penis Pal Votes
and No Herbish Acts....



And You Gon Try And Beat Me :laugh:

CheC'In Ima Edit This With My Verse.....

Ayo This Bitch Ass Lady Want Me Off The Computer Ima Hop Off This One And Go Sneak In The Kid Section And If I Dont Post I Got Caught And I'll Drop When I Reach Home!

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aight im gonna drop



This guy is wack as fuck gay nut like Elton John
He sets writtin trippin acid dick in his meltin palm
I'll mop the floor with this man im not tryin to be mean
But I seen you drop before an well your trash im Mr clean
Im just a better MC so they just label me super
Your shits a comedy act and a rhythmical blooper
This guy is bustin raps like hes bustin women
Hes not, so man whats your dealer been dealin
Dough Stixx a punk slut or punk bitch?
What ever you got im hot you aint shit
Go ahead an spit im about to put a one to the right (he is 0-0 add one on the right)
As soon as I drop my shit you should quit you a dike
I done beat your ass sike another verse the hurst I feal it commin
You sound dumb an you should ride off on the horse you come in
No more concealin you got a sign of wack ima bring
Heat back in the ring you cant see me jack ima king
I bring the heat every time, with god as my wittness
Man I don't give a fuck, but you suck as I end this

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Ok I Just Sneaked On The Kids Side Im Ready To Spit Some Shit Ima Drop In Like 5 Minutes

If I Dont Drop I Got Caught!

Ayyio


I Misplace Bombs Like Crossed-Eyed Soilders..
Its Like Mr.Reeves Bench Pressing Because You Cant Hold The Weight On Yah Shoulders..
Dawg, You Aint Never Bombin-This...
Cuz You Can Catch-Up Like Fat Waiters Holding Condiments...
Its Like Homosexuals Giletes Cause I Slit-Queers...
Which Always Bring Tears, But Even If Yah Was Battling Nelly Bitch Couldnt Get It Hot-In-Here...
I Spit Ill Shit I Dont Need To Explain...
But I Make You Line-Up Like Crack-Dealers On Airplanes...


I Know I Dissapointeed Yall Not Drop Nice Shit But This Fuckin Lady Is On My Dick And It Was A Keystyle....So Uppin Fo'' Votes

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I think the best line of the battle (and the only real wordplay) was "Cuz You Can Catch-Up Like Fat Waiters Holding Condiments..." (even though capitalizing every word looks incredibly stupid.)

The problem is, that was the only real punch Dough threw because he was rushed or whatever. His flow was off too.

Tele had some punches too:
"This guy is bustin raps like hes bustin women
Hes not"
and his flow was better. I'd vote for Tele if I could.


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103093

So Is That Vote For Me Or Not?

:huh:

Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah!


Blah Blah That Damn 100 Chracter Thigie Is Pissing Me Off

:wtf:

Ypu Can Vote But That Shit Wasnt Explanied.

I said:


But I can't poll vote yet so it doesn't really matter. Close battl.e

Originality - Tele
Punches - Tele
Personals - Dough
Flow - Dough
Structure - Neither/both

VoTe = Tele

*No quotables*

Tele edged the two most important catergories.. its that simple.

^Lmaoo I Cant Bieleive It Lmao


Uppin 0-1

You If I Lose Thier Is Some Major Cock Lovin...:spit:

Believe it.. an swayin is not coo.

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Do You Know What Swaying Is Lmaoo

I Aint Swaying Kidd''

Wacth What Ya Say.:gfy:

I do'nt want to keep freeposting in here so this is the last time.

I did explain my vote. I felt that you had the best line but it was really the only punch you had. I also didn't think your flow was as good as teles....

either way I can't poll vote.

Okie Whatever.....



Umm Tek If Ya Got Something Too Say Set it The Fuck Up Herb....


But Im Letting You Know That You Dun Fucked Up Now!:nono:

Ok guys if yall dont care check out my other battle
its gettin slept on bad. Its toward the bottom Vs $treetThug

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Anyone that votes on this leave a link to yours and I will
come vote on yours. So nobody gets slept on ok help us
out here with a fair vote

Uppin Come on people dont sleep on this shit
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Dont Up This Shit So Many Damn Times You Gon Get Banned

And Then I Wont Have No New-B Too Shit On :laugh:

Im Playing But Fareal Dont Up It So Damn Much!

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kinetic took dis one his flow was better, and he had better punches...................


vote kinetic

could anyone drop an honest vote on dis on................

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104412

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Telekinetic
Nothin special..
Very mediocre..
But yeah u atleast packed some punches..
Work on ur overall complexity..wordplay etc..
Not to bad..some common shit..slightly played.
..Not to bad though.. at least u showed effort..
..& aimed at ur opponent..some ok lines..
Overall just try to elevate battle alot..
Overall..Ok.

Dough
You obviously had the better vocab..
But ur verse looked like a diss piece in general..
Not one personalized punch or w/e..
Also alot of played concepts..for example the reeves line..
It was all pretty simple..not bad but its been done before..
The nelly line..*sigh* ur bout no.203 usin it.
Anyways not to bad..
But still Overall Ok

vote:Telekinetic[/B]
Cause of more creative & somewhat actual punches.

Click here to vote on this hilarious battle..its sad.

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yeh tele gets this for going at his opponent. Hes verse was nothing special but had some oright punches. Dough just came not strong enough, you have to attack you opponent. You just didnt do it enough. So i vote for tele

plz return a honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105253

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if i could vote i'd have to go with tele, his punches were aih=ght and stix it looks as though u rushed thru ur verse, i'm still a few votes away, but keep at it guys there is potential

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Sombodys got to end this shit its been up for like a week.......
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aiht tele wins this because he had better pucnhes and flow

better punches win battles and tele had them

it was a close battle but tele won the most important category as well as most of the other category's

my vote-telekinetic

hit up the battle in the sig and the battle between me and bugz bunny on the first page of front lines

RETURN THE FAVOR...its madd slept on