:) vs taxback
 

aiight ten lines you spit first end of discussion

damn where the hell is this faggot............................................ .................................................. .................................................. ....

okay shit i was somewhere else , you made the thread fast i accept .......................
i spit first but you have 15 minutes after i spit my texte

I spit in about 1o minutes get ready men .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....................................

TaxBack vs :)

What the fuck is this a joke battle with a smiley your gonna choke//
You'll get whipped with my lyrical stroke, you've just been broked//
Your checkmate cuz a smiley ain't able to battle clearly//
I'll whip your ass under the table cuz now your left with no energy//
Now your a sad face, cuz there's no laughing with me, you have no knee,so there's no pity//
You understand , you have no chances your stuck between million of fences//
You've been offences now you know that you need the conprehenses//
Next time bring your mad and strong face//
Cuz you will need some muthafuckin grace// to win vs me
I'll be always there to chase you and make knots in your shoelaces//

so prepare yourself for something more serious ..... next time


go checkin you have 15 minute

aiight for all those that dont know a "G" is a thousand dollars



we can "blaim canada" for givin birth to this WACK CAT
TAXBACK, son your rhymes wouldnt be "shit" even if you wrote them on your "ASS CRACK"

text? we can take it PAST THAT... and bitch ill leave you SNAPPED IN TWO
and physically SMACKED AND BRUISED
ill have your damn face lookin like a "crip bandana"- "BLACK AND BLUE"
youd think that your either just stupid or CRACK INFUSED
cuz you keep postin battles just to RAP AND LOOSE

your a FAGGOT DUDE..and its just stunning how you love to get DRILLED WITH HITS
your damn asshole is like a gay pride parade cuz it stays FILLED WITH DICKS


and as far as money goes you have no CHECKS AND JEWELLS
the closest your gay ass have probably gotten to a "G" is a F IN SCHOOL

nice now we just need the votes and uhh you said ten lines not 11???????????????????????????? ?!?!?!?!???

damn man my fualt kid but i cant edit it.. its just one line extra no big deal man

first up................................................ .................................................. ........

okay doesnt matter and i thaught you would be a little newbie fuck loll let the votes begin .......................................

shit.. second up in this bitch............................................. .................................................. ...............

men we just need the muthafuckin votes .................................................. ................................................

decent battle...

taxback had a decent verse, some ok punches, but it was a little off.

:)...or however the fuck i should write it had better word play, and better punches. flow was better too.

vote: :)

i spend time on your battles, check mine out

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...adid=102139--vs 730

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...readid=101943-- vs prophacyz

3rd up thanks for the vote man ill check your battles out when i get over 100 post..peace....................................... .................................................. ............................

4TH UP................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................

ite this is how i saw it...


Taxback:

i dont really know what to say about ya verse, but it lacked... lacked hard punches, anydirect personals, no real wordplay... didnt have a consistant flow or rhyme scheme, wasnt bad, but you need to elevate a lot in these area's...


:):


wow, i really enjoyed reading ya verse, had some really creative ideas, funny punches, good personals and name wordplay, flow and multi's was good thru out... reall did more than you needed to, just to win this battle...


:) pretty much dominated this whole battle, with better punches, some good personals, and wordplay, some might have been played but it was a much better overall verse than taxback...


props to both emcee's... keep at it taxback you got potential...

VOTE = :)



and if either of you could drop an honest vote on my battle with buzzkill we'd both appreciate it. that battles been up for like a week now...

ite just went on internet explorer to drop my vote on the poll... good battle both yall... if you could peep my battle thanks...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101937

thx man , I rap in french but I'Ll keep at it in english ................................................pe ace dnf

Breakdown:

Punches: :)
Flow: Taxback
Creativity: :)
Vocab: :)
Opener: Niether
Closer: :)
Enjoyment: :)

Overall: :)

Decent battle, not great, but w/e a'igh' evrses from both...

common we need more votes in here .................................................. .................................................. ............

:) = Vote

It Was Madd Obvious That He Won This Battle, He Came Out Ready To Battle..While TaxBack Came Out Weak As Fuck..No Punchlines, Personals, Multies, Or Any Sense Of Complexity Inside Of His Verse..:) Punchlines Were Played..But He Still Had Punchlines And His Verse Flowed More..So My Vote Goes To :) For Better Punchlines


Return The Favor;
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103497

damn that smiley face is the best name yet
an he won this battle better personals an punches

But eh kid ya style..is weak..oytur ogod u got skillz

but spit shorter barz


PEEP MY BATTLE AN READ IT PEEP WWUT IM TALKIN ABOut
an dont cCAPS YA PUNCHES AN RHYMING WRODS

thats old shit....but hey its ya stly but if u battle me wit that uu wont win

V_smiley Guy

tax ya shit is newbishly gay..an u needa elevate alot