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TheUnderRated vs. postman
10-12
blindspits... 20-30 no crew/hate/dr/ checkin when ready.... |
um uppin this so he can find it i gues,............................................. .................................................. .......that better not count towards my 5
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10-12 lines right?? |
yea i guess..................................damn you took a long time.............................................. .................................................. ...............
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you comin softer than satin pillows while i'm just tryin to relax..
smoke you worse than your avy then puff puff pass... i'll kick you between the polls like i'm in the NFL... your record like old people can't get up after it fell... i'll burn you with acid cause its coarsin through my viens... teach you lessons of life like you a fag kid on growin pains... like glocks to knots i'll up and leave your mind blown.. so stupid you tryed to battle on O mega and not a microphone.. RE finishin this kid like he was a piece of fine furinture... like in a mexican standoff i had to bust first to murder ya.... |
if this is a "work" out , ill just have to rely on "test"
no need for name calling, ya avy describes you best, just 2 oozies, and a clip "instated", then burry you at the movies, Now your really "Under-Rated",, your a lyricist? you either insane, or jokin, You'd still lose this battle, if all 5 of ya aliases were votin, Now, the next bed ya gonna lie in is where the "coronors work", cuz after this battle, ya record BACKWORDS WONT be same place those "foreigners work", But that aint sayin much, it dont take a "pyschic," Cuz in ya crew ya like karate moves, ya just a "side kick", so, sign off the net, get a life, now that might work... cuz you know your a loser, when a VIRUS could end ya lifes work.... |
postman took this...
more personals that were better perfected as a diss, His punches were much better and the way he worded his verse was all better, just don't like the foriegners work line, other than that...he dominated Underated in those catergories acdept structure...which Underated clearly had flow and structure. other than that..Postman robs all the rest. vote - Postman vote on this battle in return. Cannabarz vs Freakyjay |
he forgot to poll but lets get some more votes...good battle very nice verse i assume you mostly do audio which is fine..............................uppin X111111..........................
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you comin softer than satin pillows while i'm just tryin to relax.. smoke you worse than your avy then puff puff pass... Good Personal - 5/10 i'll kick you between the polls like i'm in the NFL... your record like old people can't get up after it fell... Blah .. alright Punch 6/10 i'll burn you with acid cause its coarsin through my viens... teach you lessons of life like you a fag kid on growin pains... Da Da Da - 5/10 like glocks to knots i'll up and leave your mind blown.. so stupid you tryed to battle on O mega and not a microphone.. Sik ... 7/10 RE finishin this kid like he was a piece of fine furinture... like in a mexican standoff i had to bust first to murder ya.... good first line .. then second line was weak .. should have did it other way around ... Overal - 6/10 POSTMAN if this is a "work" out , ill just have to rely on "test" no need for name calling, ya avy describes you best, Personal - 5/10 just 2 oozies, and a clip "instated", then burry you at the movies, Now your really "Under-Rated",, Holy Bad Structure .... and punch didnt make sence 2/10 your a lyricist? you either insane, or jokin, You'd still lose this battle, if all 5 of ya aliases were votin, Creativity at its finest ... 8/10 Now, the next bed ya gonna lie in is where the "coronors work", cuz after this battle, ya record BACKWORDS WONT be same place those "foreigners work", yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa .... 4/10 But that aint sayin much, it dont take a "pyschic," Cuz in ya crew ya like karate moves, ya just a "side kick", Creative .. sik ... 6.5/10 so, sign off the net, get a life, now that might work... cuz you know your a loser, when a VIRUS could end ya lifes work.... True ... 6/10 Overal 5.5/10 Vote = Underated |
^mannnnnnnnnnnnn do i have to hold your hand idiot.
PLEASE DO NOT VOTE IF YOU CANNOT UNDERSTAND PUNCHES If you are burried under a movie theater, your underrated as in underground but you under the theater which has rates like "rated pg", yawns fuck it you dumb. |
Sorry, my bad...thanx for PM'ing me Post...
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^^^ the Fact That You had To use 3 Lines to Explain A Metaphor Speaks For Itself Peace |
postman had hotter punchlines...underated for a reason.....
elevate.......better metas and flow for post, creative - tie... vocab and complexity i guess underated personals post overall - post |
theunderated verse
you comin softer than satin pillows while i'm just tryin to relax.. smoke you worse than your avy then puff puff pass... good opener nuthing really strong though i'll kick you between the polls like i'm in the NFL... your record like old people can't get up after it fell... weak pounch and personal i'll burn you with acid cause its coarsin through my viens... teach you lessons of life like you a fag kid on growin pains... lol...ok verse good meta like glocks to knots i'll up and leave your mind blown.. so stupid you tryed to battle on O mega and not a microphone.. lol good pounch RE finishin this kid like he was a piece of fine furinture... like in a mexican standoff i had to bust first to murder ya.... good closer overall nuthing really strong in this verse good pounches and metas good flow and structre postmans verse if this is a "work" out , ill just have to rely on "test" no need for name calling, ya avy describes you best, better opener just 2 oozies, and a clip "instated", then burry you at the movies, Now your really "Under-Rated",, lol...pounche aand personal was stronge your a lyricist? you either insane, or jokin, You'd still lose this battle, if all 5 of ya aliases were votin, pounch was hard Now, the next bed ya gonna lie in is where the "coronors work", cuz after this battle, ya record BACKWORDS WONT be same place those "foreigners work", pounch wordplay personal But that aint sayin much, it dont take a "pyschic," Cuz in ya crew ya like karate moves, ya just a "side kick", lol...personal and pounch so, sign off the net, get a life, now that might work... cuz you know your a loser, when a VIRUS could end ya lifes work.... ok closer ---postman is my vote--- for better pounchs and personal came on really strong also better wordplay i took the time vote for my battle in sig peace |
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you comin softer than satin pillows while i'm just tryin to relax.. smoke you worse than your avy then puff puff pass... Good Personal - 5/10 i'll kick |
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hit up mah battle.....4 dis battle mah vote goez 2 free post... cuz.... opener: free post closer: UR multis: free post structure: UR flow: tie vote: free post.....no hate....*~1~*...plze hit up mah battle....im sleepin on it |
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u call that a vote.........??????.............whatever homie.......... |
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still pretty slept on icna i get at least one vote in this botch that isn't a fool that can poll vote.......................gee.................... ...thanx......................
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I think this was close. We all know punches is what wins these battles. I belive postman took it with better punches. Everything else was pretty even.
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aight battle....
punches- unders weren't that personal... he had one...... -posts... were strong and aimed directly at under flow-postmans was off...enuf said structure- again postmans was off vocab- tie... nothing really stuck out wordplay/creativity- postman got this.... way more complex.... so.... vote-postman |
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