FreeYayo vs Da Saviour
 

10 linez min
20 linez max
no crew or hate votez
u spit first
pz.

ok, new rule, 15 minutes maximun, ok? got to go
i start, good luck.........................
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aight I'll post within' 15 minutez after your drop.............................................. ...........................................

Ok, here i go

Your shit wont ever touch me, your style is too weak
but its all we can hope for a flick, people like you make me sick
cant understand u when u speak, inside your mouth theres a dick
What kind of record is that??, please, take a sincere look
0-6, got no hook, so bad you will enter into guiness records book
man, better 4 you 2 scoop low, cuz u dont have a clue,
nor have good flow, and this battle will get u definetly out the blue
Stop rapping so motherfucking bad, its the easiest battle i ever had
But, its hard to accept, seeing to a so wack oponent make me sad
So freeyayo, leave this hiphop shit while you can,
many people enquired to have your ass banned
Fuck you, nig figure out who will you b able to rap with,
Cuz u wont take a "yes" even from Will Smith!

peace bro

ok must fo now, get time... 30 minutes

good luck yayo!!

0034 4 ever!!!!
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yo yo
lemme get a win here...
yo...
dun close this battle and make it my loss again bitch
u know who u r. faggot BASTARD
aight yo yo

u call yaself da saviour, but u aint savin' shit
I come in special flavours, can u feel me kid ?/
dunnow why u even comin' down to this site
u aint a hype with a mic even if u waz here all night/
the only 'mic/mike' u ever killed was that kid in junior high
I saw ya last rhymez, they were wack and outta style/
I'm hot as ever so why even bother goin' against me dawg?
becuz of the 0-6? That bitch fm made it my loss/
my name freeyayo but aint lookin' to get saved though
u can only dream bout a battle on stage in some lame show/
cuz letz face it kid, anyone can tell u fake
I know how u feel round here, u feel kinda misplaced/
that only becuz u on a rapsite lookin' kinda lost
what u doin' round here anyway? I thought u liked rock/
now plz close ya mouth bitch cuz u only talkin' shit kid
u startin' to draw flies so here's my mentos take it/

aight. Now someone plz vote and I will vote if u drop a link, BUT I can't drop a countin' vote cuz of the 100 posts shit, I can only judge it. PZ.

hey you dropped it really quick....
how could ya type this in about 2 minutes??
well, try not to get banned this time

vote please

4 minutez friend. I follow office (probably some other name in english but don't know it) and we have typin' as a fuckin' lesson round here. I'm the best lolz. Can type real fast, will prove it to u anytime :). PZ.

6 minutez, my bad............................................... .................................................. .. u can tell I dun follow maths lolz.

opener:Da Saviour
closer:Tie (both Wack)
entertainment:Da Saviour
Punches:Da Saviour
Flow:Da Saviour
Vote Da Saviour

drop a vote on this please be honest------ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101986

wat the fuck that didnt cum out rite y is the a smily face rite
opener-da Saviour
closer-Tie (both Wack)
entertainment-da Saviour
Punches-da Saviour
Flow-da Saviour
Vote-da Saviour

Return the favor and vote honestly on this please -- http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101986

yo both were wack, but yayo u wernt hittin, and da savoiur u could have really merked this hoe, come on free yayo, how many wordplay go wit that,
but savoiur hit hard enuff wit the 6 nil lines,

my votes for saviour

no vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103618

uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..........x1

Ok here is how I score it
Structure: Da Saviour easy to read understandable
Punches: Da Saviour even though both were boring
Metaphors: Tie non present
Intro: Da Saviour even both were not strong

My Vote: Da Saviour easy

uppin.................................all votez weren't explained legal wayz but I aint bitchin' bout that shit juzt watch ya backz cuz some bitchez around (yeah u) that DQ and ban u for dumb shit. PZ.

you are right, homie, the last battle was yours
bout the time, i wasnt calling you cheater, i just got surprised kid!
thanx 4 the support, man

come on guys, need more votes, cause some of you can vote, post and later they DONT vote...

Whats up??

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battle was kinda weak guys try come'n harder next time

but ne way the lines used here were kinda lame (not trynna play u guys but.......)

saviour had the overall best verse here so....

vote: da saviour



check my sig fop my open battles

We need votes, please!!
Why people dont vote??
come on guys, i would!
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VOTE BITCHES!!!!
wHAT THE FUCK HAPPENS HERE?? NOBODY VOTES?
48 HOURS OPEN.....
COME ON!! MFERS!!!!!

haha chill man, dont b uppin' this shit 2 much be4 some bitch closes it and makez it your loss ;). Fuck that bitch. PZ.

ok, 4th day, hope this battle will have at least 1 or 2 votes today!!

vote and ill give a sincere opinion and vote on your battles....
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last time i up this shit...
you lammers dont vote, something`s wrong with this site...
anyway, lets see if somebody votesssssss

im so tired....i dont even wanna break it down...................................

flow:savior
Punches:savior
Personols:savior
structure:savior
Oveerall=savior....

up....
damned 100 chars.............................
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voteeeeee

aight...

both were boring...

it really came down to who was goin afta their opponet harder.... i fell yayo came wit it in this catagory, but only because he was trying hard to merk that cat. both verses were really boring and seemed like they were off at some point during reading... sav's verse was easier to read but my vote goes to yayo...... both of you need to try harder next time......

vote: yayo


return tha favor...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102425

ima give this one to saviour:
better structure
nice flow
good punches

since i took my time and told you what
i thought, vote on carlos vs to face.

looking for some weekend votes...
fuck it, no more christmas hollydays :(
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vote pliz, lets close this one

up, up, up!! vote kids!!
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yo, this battle looks like my grandpas, always seem 2 be finished, but they will never be closed..........
some votes, many visits and messages but only 4 votes

Ayo muh nigga ILL wuz right this battle wuz sorry as hell but here's my vote

punches:savior
multie's:none
personal's:none
flow:freeyayo
entertainmen:none
vote:Ima have to go with savior cuz punches count more

1 vote more. pliz vote!!
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gogogo!!
so tired of this battle...........
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come on, just one more......
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punchlines- da saviour
multies- da saviour
impact of dissed- da saviour

the saviour came harder in this battle.. peace