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Tactical 01-03-04 06:04 PM

Tactical v. Zarbon
 
10 lines
you spit first
I'll drop befo midnight so spit befo then
No hate/crew/DR/etc
G'luck man

Tactical 01-03-04 06:07 PM

Checkin in and awaitin your hopefully dope drop.............................................. .................................................. .....................

Zarbon 01-03-04 06:08 PM

check check
 
checking in..be up soon

i might do 15 lines if thats ok with you








:thefinger

:help:

Tactical 01-03-04 06:12 PM

10 lines man, I can't change the rules. DO 15 and you may get DQd so jus do 10. .................................................. ......................................

Zarbon 01-03-04 07:38 PM

dont know ya,dont care...



What's ironic is that I dont need a hand to defeat you...
I'm like a snake that can single-handedly beat you...
I hate you & love life, it's the fact that you came here...
that I'll sleigh you as if you had the back of a reindeer...
Vanity gets arrows sent ya direction when its pulled by...
Me seeing you as the center of attention on a bullseye...
Not friends! but if battle links us as folks, I'm hating...
cuz that'd make me wack being guilty by association...
& I wanted to spare your life, yet I impaired ya mind...
tact? Your girl said ya nuts were just as rare to find...





:thefinger :thefinger :gfy:

Tactical 01-03-04 10:25 PM

Zarbon? Lol What you get ya name from the Periodic table bitch?
I can make ya at home: Jus mix 2 parts whackness and 1 part shit
This kid wanna battle me, bitch is claimin that he's undefeated
Hehe thats cause you no-showed on 4 battles, they still aren't completed
Son you aint shit, like a deformed bird I'm leaving ya Win(g)less
Still tryin ta battle pussies but I know you've never seen this
I don't envy you riding small dicks to bum votes
Your have a losing disease and I aint ya antidote
next time watch who ya battle cause you fucked wit the wrong vet
Take this advice, Zar-whateva jus take this loss and forget

LyRiCaL_PrOpHeT 01-03-04 10:39 PM

if i could vote id go to tactial and even tho zarbon took it in flow and struc i think tactical hit harder with punches and i liked the way it sounded made me laugh

Tactical 01-03-04 10:50 PM

Uppin fo some votes please............................................ ................................................

Dialect OTYP 01-03-04 10:51 PM

zar flowed better but every other category goes to tact

so i gotta go w/ him

my vote tact.......................................

Eki 01-03-04 10:59 PM

I think Tactical took it

Better punches. Everything else was close. Good Flow and structure for both. Good vocab too. Nice work.

Vote Tactical. No hate

Please return a h/vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101620

Tactical 01-03-04 11:12 PM

Uppin #2 PLease drop an honest vote here.............................................. .................................................. ............

Tactical 01-03-04 11:37 PM

Uppin da third time. Drop an honest vote and leave a link .................................................. ................................................

Tactical 01-03-04 11:54 PM

Uppin da 4th time. Drop an honest vote and leave a link .................................................. ................................................

doc_knock 01-04-04 12:00 AM

What's ironic is that I dont need a hand to defeat you...
I'm like a snake that can single-handedly beat you...
^^^clever. good wordplay. good punch.
I hate you & love life, it's the fact that you came here...
that I'll sleigh you as if you had the back of a reindeer...
^^more good wordplay.
Vanity gets arrows sent ya direction when its pulled by...
Me seeing you as the center of attention on a bullseye...
^^^weak...some wordplay, but the punch sucked.
Not friends! but if battle links us as folks, I'm hating...
cuz that'd make me wack being guilty by association...
^^^another weak punch
& I wanted to spare your life, yet I impaired ya mind...
tact? Your girl said ya nuts were just as rare to find...
^^^good punch. clever wordplay. just good.


Zarbon? Lol What you get ya name from the Periodic table bitch?
I can make ya at home: Jus mix 2 parts whackness and 1 part shit
^^^LOL. that shit is fucking classic.
This kid wanna battle me, bitch is claimin that he's undefeated
Hehe thats cause you no-showed on 4 battles, they still aren't completed
^^^good personal. good punch.
Son you aint shit, like a deformed bird I'm leaving ya Win(g)less
Still tryin ta battle pussies but I know you've never seen this
^^^halfway decent...a little wordplay, but, eh.
I don't envy you riding small dicks to bum votes
Your have a losing disease and I aint ya antidote
^^^clever wordplay, but a weak punch nonetheless.
next time watch who ya battle cause you fucked wit the wrong vet
Take this advice, Zar-whateva jus take this loss and forget
^^^...weak.

close, but, overall...

vote: Tactical

i spend time on your battle...spend time on mine.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...did=103574--vs. handcuffs

PaDDyMaN 01-04-04 02:40 AM

LOL fucken AAAAAAAAAAAAA that was a MERKIN

Zarbon? Lol What you get ya name from the Periodic table bitch?
I can make ya at home: Jus mix 2 parts whackness and 1 part shit
8/10 not played and original
This kid wanna battle me, bitch is claimin that he's undefeated
Hehe thats cause you no-showed on 4 battles, they still aren't completed
8/10 HA this nigga done did his homework
Son you aint shit, like a deformed bird I'm leaving ya Win(g)less
Still tryin ta battle pussies but I know you've never seen this
5/10 average filler line but works
I don't envy you riding small dicks to bum votes
Your have a losing disease and I aint ya antidote
7/10 good stuff KINDA played......
next time watch who ya battle cause you fucked wit the wrong vet
Take this advice, Zar-whateva jus take this loss and forget
6/10
34.0000000000

What's ironic is that I dont need a hand to defeat you...
I'm like a snake that can single-handedly beat you...
7/10....Be thankful....it didnt work out that well
I hate you & love life, it's the fact that you came here...
that I'll sleigh you as if you had the back of a reindeer...
5/10
Vanity gets arrows sent ya direction when its pulled by...
Me seeing you as the center of attention on a bullseye...
4/10
Not friends! but if battle links us as folks, I'm hating...
cuz that'd make me wack being guilty by association...
6/10
& I wanted to spare your life, yet I impaired ya mind...
tact? Your girl said ya nuts were just as rare to find...
5/10
27.0000000
Good battle guys TACTICAL TAKES THIS T.T.T.

Tactical 01-04-04 04:48 PM

Uppin this for da last time. Please drop an honest vote here.............................................. .................................................. ...................

PostMan 01-04-04 05:26 PM

tactical had a nice opener............... periodic table nice one.. he had some coo metaphors.. it flowed alot better. the winless was a nice line. closing could have been a bit stronger.

zarbon you wre pretty much level the whole verse. nothing really stood out.. could have thrown some better punches in there.

vote= tactical good battle.


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