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Tactical v. Zarbon
10 lines
you spit first I'll drop befo midnight so spit befo then No hate/crew/DR/etc G'luck man |
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i might do 15 lines if thats ok with you :thefinger :help: |
10 lines man, I can't change the rules. DO 15 and you may get DQd so jus do 10. .................................................. ......................................
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dont know ya,dont care...
What's ironic is that I dont need a hand to defeat you... I'm like a snake that can single-handedly beat you... I hate you & love life, it's the fact that you came here... that I'll sleigh you as if you had the back of a reindeer... Vanity gets arrows sent ya direction when its pulled by... Me seeing you as the center of attention on a bullseye... Not friends! but if battle links us as folks, I'm hating... cuz that'd make me wack being guilty by association... & I wanted to spare your life, yet I impaired ya mind... tact? Your girl said ya nuts were just as rare to find... :thefinger :thefinger :gfy: |
Zarbon? Lol What you get ya name from the Periodic table bitch?
I can make ya at home: Jus mix 2 parts whackness and 1 part shit This kid wanna battle me, bitch is claimin that he's undefeated Hehe thats cause you no-showed on 4 battles, they still aren't completed Son you aint shit, like a deformed bird I'm leaving ya Win(g)less Still tryin ta battle pussies but I know you've never seen this I don't envy you riding small dicks to bum votes Your have a losing disease and I aint ya antidote next time watch who ya battle cause you fucked wit the wrong vet Take this advice, Zar-whateva jus take this loss and forget |
if i could vote id go to tactial and even tho zarbon took it in flow and struc i think tactical hit harder with punches and i liked the way it sounded made me laugh
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zar flowed better but every other category goes to tact
so i gotta go w/ him my vote tact....................................... |
I think Tactical took it
Better punches. Everything else was close. Good Flow and structure for both. Good vocab too. Nice work. Vote Tactical. No hate Please return a h/vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101620 |
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What's ironic is that I dont need a hand to defeat you...
I'm like a snake that can single-handedly beat you... ^^^clever. good wordplay. good punch. I hate you & love life, it's the fact that you came here... that I'll sleigh you as if you had the back of a reindeer... ^^more good wordplay. Vanity gets arrows sent ya direction when its pulled by... Me seeing you as the center of attention on a bullseye... ^^^weak...some wordplay, but the punch sucked. Not friends! but if battle links us as folks, I'm hating... cuz that'd make me wack being guilty by association... ^^^another weak punch & I wanted to spare your life, yet I impaired ya mind... tact? Your girl said ya nuts were just as rare to find... ^^^good punch. clever wordplay. just good. Zarbon? Lol What you get ya name from the Periodic table bitch? I can make ya at home: Jus mix 2 parts whackness and 1 part shit ^^^LOL. that shit is fucking classic. This kid wanna battle me, bitch is claimin that he's undefeated Hehe thats cause you no-showed on 4 battles, they still aren't completed ^^^good personal. good punch. Son you aint shit, like a deformed bird I'm leaving ya Win(g)less Still tryin ta battle pussies but I know you've never seen this ^^^halfway decent...a little wordplay, but, eh. I don't envy you riding small dicks to bum votes Your have a losing disease and I aint ya antidote ^^^clever wordplay, but a weak punch nonetheless. next time watch who ya battle cause you fucked wit the wrong vet Take this advice, Zar-whateva jus take this loss and forget ^^^...weak. close, but, overall... vote: Tactical i spend time on your battle...spend time on mine. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...did=103574--vs. handcuffs |
LOL fucken AAAAAAAAAAAAA that was a MERKIN
Zarbon? Lol What you get ya name from the Periodic table bitch? I can make ya at home: Jus mix 2 parts whackness and 1 part shit 8/10 not played and original This kid wanna battle me, bitch is claimin that he's undefeated Hehe thats cause you no-showed on 4 battles, they still aren't completed 8/10 HA this nigga done did his homework Son you aint shit, like a deformed bird I'm leaving ya Win(g)less Still tryin ta battle pussies but I know you've never seen this 5/10 average filler line but works I don't envy you riding small dicks to bum votes Your have a losing disease and I aint ya antidote 7/10 good stuff KINDA played...... next time watch who ya battle cause you fucked wit the wrong vet Take this advice, Zar-whateva jus take this loss and forget 6/10 34.0000000000 What's ironic is that I dont need a hand to defeat you... I'm like a snake that can single-handedly beat you... 7/10....Be thankful....it didnt work out that well I hate you & love life, it's the fact that you came here... that I'll sleigh you as if you had the back of a reindeer... 5/10 Vanity gets arrows sent ya direction when its pulled by... Me seeing you as the center of attention on a bullseye... 4/10 Not friends! but if battle links us as folks, I'm hating... cuz that'd make me wack being guilty by association... 6/10 & I wanted to spare your life, yet I impaired ya mind... tact? Your girl said ya nuts were just as rare to find... 5/10 27.0000000 Good battle guys TACTICAL TAKES THIS T.T.T. |
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tactical had a nice opener............... periodic table nice one.. he had some coo metaphors.. it flowed alot better. the winless was a nice line. closing could have been a bit stronger.
zarbon you wre pretty much level the whole verse. nothing really stood out.. could have thrown some better punches in there. vote= tactical good battle. |
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