doc_knock vs. doze
 

10-20 lines
blind spit
due 8 PM eastern time sunday night
no hate, d/r

good luck

In..will be ready for tomorrow...



Will you vote on my battle with wonder doc..


Peace

aight i know i got more than like 5 hours to post...but ima post now.

remember, no feeding, so dont read my verse before you post.

im bout to smack this bitch up like its spousal abuse/
ima bullDOZE ya ass til you a cryin recluse/
ya chance is about as good as osama for prez/
all the votes goin against you when you fuck with my threadz/
ima fuck u up so bad u gon be institutionalized/
just go ahead and gimme the trophy, my eyes are on the prize/
i could bring the weakest shit eva, im still gona win/
bithc you should know by now, battlin me is a SIN/
i dont fuck around with fools who think they can write/
i type out lyrical gold 400 times a night/
so go ahead doze, brace yoself fo the hit/
ill bitchslap you dead, befo' u even spit/
so whats it gon be? in the face or the chest/
ill give you a choice for my bullet, lay you down to rest/
cuz i dont fuck around with the game, im serious as a nuke/
you can mouth off all ya want, i know you'z a fuckin fluke/
you can sit back, relax, and enjoy the show/
but ill be right over here, givin that shit to ya hoe/
so when its all over and done, and ya life stopped dead/
remember from beyond the grave, doc put the crack in ya head


...good luck.

Its like...

This boy thinking he’s a drastic soldier…so I'm knocking him to kingdom come,
Putting him and his family into drastic measures…should rename to unwanted ones/
This kid reckons his personals infect…but boy think off some new lines which touch,
Playing the same games like annual rejects meetings…haha you’re like double dutch/
You don’t have the right intelligence against me...you resemble a fucked up fool,
Boy your typing similar to innocence…cause what you’ve laid I don’t feel at all/
Your lacking the spark to construct basic types…you aint a match made contest,
This motionless newb trying to strike with verses that will never catch any interest/
You’re a fake bore…at least I come out with scripts that let the truth be told,
This is facts…you lay the most fiction with the lack of brain power you hold/
You’re a sure mess…bringing rhymes with poor effects…you definitely hit off track,
Is that your best? LOL…my little sister’s poems are more complex than that wack/

Doc_knock…I would of thought you’d come harder…

Peace…

Uppin...

Uppin...




Peace #1

opener: doc_knock
Closer: dok_knock (awesome)
Flow: dok_knock
Enjoyment: dok_knock
Vote: dok_knock
Vote on this honestly please -_-_-

Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-Cprogress

Do you know what a punches, wordplay and multies are?..manz the votes on this site are terrible..


Uppin still...#2

dizzy...you have to actually pick the person you want to win in the poll at the top...you have more than 100 posts, you can do it....


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Peace #3

Uppin this...

Please vote fairly...

Peace #3

Please vote on this...manz it only takes a little time to vote...please...

Uppin this...

Please vote fairly...

Peace #5

This was a good battle, but...

Doc: Your wordplay, punches, and multis were hot. You just took this guy down. Okay opener, ridiculous closer, nice metas, the works. Keep elevatin'.

Doze: Your shit was wack, kid. Wordplay and punches were mediocre, opener and closer was nothin' to talk about. Metas were not really there. Keep tryin', though, and keep elevatin'.

Vote: Doc Knock

My wordplays wack...ok you fucking newb...hahahahahahahaha
Do you know what dynasty means? and knock you to kingdom come is an old saying in england...nahhh your all newbs...you dont understand shit do you??

Fuck this site..bann me cause im never gonna get any better here...

Peace...

uppin...cmon, vote...........
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this battle was mega weak.. yall can do alot better with the disses

doc knock- you had some pretty nice shit nothing mindblowing though

doze- your verse was weak man.. try and bring better dissed than that.. that shit is elementary

vote- doc knock

i voted on your shits now return the favor

i got 2 battles that need votes
this one http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103902

and the shit in my sig.. peace

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Basically Doze had more punches,multi's etc..
But the problem is..they where all wack..
You make them look all sophisticated..but they're not.
Doc on the other hand had less fancy stuff..But..
the stuff he had was good or atleast ok..far better
punches.. n a much better structure..
Work on that Doze, urs is way to stretched, sorry.
Pretty easy victory for Doc, is how i see it.

vote: Doc Knock