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~RaPiDfIrE~ vrs J-durable
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woaaah buddy ur deadline is tonight..not mine..I made it specifically clear that I would have my verse up within 24 hours after yours...I will probably drop mine tonight anyway but I'm not getting a noshow for not doing it tonight if something comes up...
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I noticed you guys had enough to vote... and as you can see I don't... but I was hoping you would be able to drop an honest vote on my PINKSLIP BATTLE with Tox aka Game aka Noda Ropes.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...489#post1052489 Thanks. |
Oh and also. I will hit up this battle with an honest one once I get enough posts. But until then... I can't poll vote.
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checkin in,im fint to flow first .................................................. .................................................. .....
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O Damn im forgeting,feelin deja vu//
o yeah,its tyme for you to lose,yo 1-2 debut// Nigga got late fees cuz his rhymes is way overdue// after this battle no one will be speaking of you// Cuz know one talks about the defeated,yo ass is depleted// while im a hero in the mind,yo ass is gettin deleted// aint tryin to break yo heart but yo rhymes is wack,mines is better// yo rhymes mo' ugly than dem old bill cosby sweaters// I feel like this is a circus and ~rapidfire~ is a clown// my lyrics is like ragein' water and yo ass is bout to be drowned// you cant step to me,i blow dat ass up leave you in debris// probably got his rhymes from a site called "lyrics 4 free"// ive hardly begun,knocked out like a homerun// yo ass has been outdone,you beat me it cant be done// you got checked,im more complex,you da lizard im da tyrannosaurus rex // you sit down tryin to spit yo lame rhymes effects,while im done wit you wonderin who's ass is next// |
i knoe i gave you tyme but can you spit soon?............................................. .................................................. ......................
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lmao...ok ok ok
ayo You might be a 'dick', but you don't got balls// ya skills so rusty, when you 'bite' you give 'lockjaw'// J ur not Durable, cuz ya get broke like glass// this bitch is an 'herb', guess I'll just smoke that ass// you can't win kid, everyone knows that I'll murder ya// ur the worst thing in cali, since Arnold was governor// look at all the homo's that "got ya back"// like u don't got a condom u just forgot to (w)rap// I come full speed n neva let up throttle// ur throat can squirt red stuff like a ketchup bottle// look...you could be better, u STILL won't beat me// I doubt anybody would even STEAL ya cd's// I forgot your just an herb, so I slit ya neck// cuz ya like gum in a book, u'll always stick to text// even if you was a dj, you couldn't "turn the tables"// replace 'dur' with 'un'..u should be J UNable.... that's all you get.... vote... |
i give this vote to Rapidfire.. i just enojoyed reading his verse more and his punches landed harder and more on point...J you didnt have a bad verse.. just that i wasnt really feeling it..No Hate
Just a vote Overall: Rapidfire |
Can both of you please return the favor and vote on my battle honestly..I took the time you should too.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104281 Thank You. Much Appriciated Peace |
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rapidfire had more of a complex verse.....the punches were way better and had some wit and cleverness to them unlike durable....
i liked I forgot your just an herb, so I slit ya neck// cuz ya like gum in a book, u'll always stick to text// even if you was a dj, you couldn't "turn the tables"// replace 'dur' with 'un'..u should be J UNable.... 3rd line down of that is played a bit tho still v/Rapid can u vote on this plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104467 |
^ lol I like ur name...thanx for the vote...........................
2-0 me.................................... I'll hit ya battle up................................................ .... peace |
uppin this for Rapid...this counts against him......his first upping....................
peace |
rapid flowed better and had better punches....................................
vote Rapid can anybody vote 4 dis one honestly http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104412 |
^ man...you need to have 100 posts to poll vote...so come back when u get 100, if the battle is still goin...I'll vote on ur battle later tonight when I get back on....
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vote for rap his verse was more complex n had a better structure to it. for otha dude could have hit alot harder cos he set himself up wid sum good lines but didnt punch hard to finish dem off
any chance u can vote on mine please?? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104452 |
i'll hit it up....
3-0 me...come on ya'll 2 more votes....let's get this over w/...btw how many uppins is this? oh well... peace |
i got ta say that rapid won cuz he had better punchlines and his shit flowed better also he had better personals
voet: rapid |
o' and return the fav and vote on my battle thnx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103757 ------------------------------------------- |
rapid merked um, his flows were better he had better punches, better wordplay..... good battle though............
hit dis one up plz............ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104859 |
rapid fire striaght merked this cat....go shit though....u flo reall good and i like that Arnold ryhme....that was hot....good shit...
vote-RapidFire |
hmm...there's been 3 votes for me since I last got on...and all of the voters had more than 100 posts..someone needs to come back n poll vote cuz I don't know which one of ya'll forgot to do it..but someone did...
technically I've won this..but according the polls I still need a vote..so either someone come back n poll vote or let's get a new vote...this is the last time I'm upping this probably... peace |
Rapidfire had the more complete flow and took this with straight tenacity.
J durable had a good drop but his punches were real lightweight and misdirected...He had the best structure but that is all.... Rapidfire came with constant punches and didn't stop until the last bar..I like the govenor line..I'm from Cali. Vote-Rapid. Vote here... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105120 |
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