LyricalJedi vs Daven Motion
 

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no d/r votes
no crew votes

I don't know where this person is at so I can't battle unless I have this opponet where are you at Daven Motion? Where are you?.............................................. ...................??????????????????????????????? ??????????

cHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEck In Nigguh.

Daven Motion cartoon hero name?!!! lol

I put niggas in check like a criminal in a airport
I shit on your whole style like Raja Davenport
Daven Motion better off changing your name to Daven Lotion
Like a guy who pays for phone sex you get none
I drop verses quicker then Warrick Dunn
This niggaz like a bum home got no home
I drop shit from here to rome your style is like chrome
While my shit is platinum
Like them niggaz that shot pac I comin stright for the dome
Like the Cleveland Browns season this shit is over

Explanation for the slow ass niggaz:
Browns record states for itself
Raja Davenport shitted in his homegirls closet
Dunn runs a 42/40

Disgusted by u..there's no chance wining cmon….bitch stink’s
^ scripts are fascinating ..rapes herbs, so I writ 6 hint’s
O.W.N-age…left your concepts amazed by words.
Specify aimed at him & activated. his an irritate nerve
Once I punch, he’s damaged…a forced chain reaction
Picked up knowledge...you should know..^that’s the way I Axe umm
Horizontally picked up..with bareknuckles, punch this fool!
Soft cat’s..adeble for breakfast dinner, N perhaps Lunch Is cool.
But the hunch is fool, known to me..your lame…N the fact is..
Battled Sergent, Da sviour ..<--came close., but ur the whackest!

aiight now you got both of the verses make your selection I fucked up on one line " The niggaz like a bum he has no home" vote vote vote do not comment and don't vote I can understand if you have under 100 votes. y'all can still put your input

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Originality - Daven.. no played concepts.. all fresh
Punches - Both.. Daven was witty and Jedi was raw
Personals - Both.. one or two each
Flow - Daven.. knitted ur punches together nicely.. caught it easily
Structure - Both.. easy to follow

VoTe = Daven

Less played concepts an some witty punches coupled wiv a perfect flow = the win.. not bad at all from Jedi.. jus a few too much old shit re-hashed.

peep this an vote plz:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103846

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I put niggas in check like a criminal in a airport
I shit on your whole style like Raja Davenport
^^^eh...weak wordplay, weak punch.
Daven Motion better off changing your name to Daven Lotion
^^^WEAK
Like a guy who pays for phone sex you get none
I drop verses quicker then Warrick Dunn
^^^ok wordplay, i suppose.
This niggaz like a bum home got no home
I drop shit from here to rome your style is like chrome
While my shit is platinum
^^^more weak punches.
Like them niggaz that shot pac I comin stright for the dome
^^^heh...ok punch
Like the Cleveland Browns season this shit is over
^^^lame.

Disgusted by u..there's no chance wining cmon….bitch stink’s
^ scripts are fascinating ..rapes herbs, so I writ 6 hint’s
^^^...what?
O.W.N-age…left your concepts amazed by words.
Specify aimed at him & activated. his an irritate nerve
^^^decent wordplay, bad punch.
Once I punch, he’s damaged…a forced chain reaction
Picked up knowledge...you should know..^that’s the way I Axe umm
^^^weak wordplay...weak punch.
Horizontally picked up..with bareknuckles, punch this fool!
Soft cat’s..adeble for breakfast dinner, N perhaps Lunch Is cool.
^^^weak
But the hunch is fool, known to me..your lame…N the fact is..
Battled Sergent, Da sviour ..<--came close., but ur the whackest!
^^^weak again.


vote: lyrical jedi


return the favor....

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...threadid=103574

^You Stupid Herb You Should Be Banned For That if you dont know what a punch is dont even bother entering my league the fuck? n00bs upimn..............

that vote should be removed coz if u dont understand the punch then ur missin it completely.. they were evidently too witty for some eh Daven.. shame.

Both Verses Were Pretty Good....Though in my View Damon Took tha Flow,Wordplay,and structure......Botha Had Pre

Both Verses Were Pretty Good....Though in my View Damon Took tha Flow,Wordplay,and structure......Botha Had Pretty Ill Closures

Like them niggaz that shot pac I comin stright for the dome
Like the Cleveland Browns season this shit is over
^^this Line Would have been ILL though it don't Rhyme

Once I punch, he’s damaged…a forced chain reaction
Picked up knowledge...you should know..^that’s the way I Axe umm

^^that Wuz ILL...Nice Punch and Wordplay

Overall Vote~Damon

Please Return tha Favor.....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103705

Upiiiiiiiiiiiiin Damn i made so much mistakeees damn the no edit thiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnng

both of them was ight verses......
if i know what the helll Daven was sayin half the time...seem like he just threw words together for the first punch....
but he came back....and lyrical is steppin up wit the flo.....but i stilll gotta go wit Daven...

vote-DAVEN MOTION

this was pretty one sided..
lyrical...your shit just didnt make much sense to me..
it was very elementary and not complex at all...
need to work on harder punhces and wordplay...

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Daven had much better wordplay and punches...
flow was there and he was much more consistent..

quotable=But the hunch is fool, known to me..your lame…N the fact is..
Battled Sergent, Da sviour ..<--came close., but ur the whackest!

had me laughing a bit here ^..

poll vote= Daven Motion..
peace

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Man this nigga go mothafuckas voting for him that knows his real name what the fuck kind of dick riding bullshit is this I mean damn I mean yo what the fuck and niggaz talking about a guy should be banned for his vote hell y'all niggaz hate me that bad.

ok heres the breakdown.....
i dont know why my crew member voted that way but its called an opion its a vote so just accept it davon...but heres the breakdown..

multis=davon.....The other guy was a little
flow=davon....ok none the less both were there but was feeling davons more
structuer=lol...davon.....all the way......not even off
Punches=Davon.....He had that shit all the way....Other guy was just played out and gay jokes....fucking lame shit
personals=davon.....Lol personals were tight for 6 verses....very nicely done....
overall=davon.................Well theres your breakdwon.......sorry for the misconveience about the vote from doc......lol....Davon got this shit.................

My vote goes to davon...
return the favor plz......

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103912
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103792

aight battle......

motion.... took most category's..... wordplay.. punches....multies.....flow by a lil...i like how you called him tha wackest out of tha ppl you've battled.......

so

vote-daven motion

hit this up with an honest vote...please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103807

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opener: dm
Closer:jedi
Flow: dm
Enjoyment: Tie
VOTE: Dm easy!
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