fyreboy vs kuntryboi
 

ok folk 10 lines max......
no hate votes no d/r
u know the rest drop ya verse pretty quick tho

look, it only takes 10 lines to beat a dude, ill let him choose//
(two choices) take it like a man, or eat ya food through a tube//
thats liquid food, straight to ya tummy, i will merk this dummy//
im laughin at ya name............... but aint a damn thang funny//
my style mo flexible than gumby.... but you aint got no style//
since ya pops aint around, ima have ta punish you like my child//
.....tarheel, i scar and kill, put that heat to ya teeth, and burn ya grill//
i pop these pussies like valum pills, but i aint no substance abuser//
beat ya verse, im a rhyme bruisa, thats how i do it man//
i done wet you up so bad, they gonna call me the fireman//

ayo its fyreboy u better call dat truck/
for i come down to atl fuck u up/
dis dude so ugly he couldnt ge a date if he flipped back his calender/
dude so young can even buy a beer/
aye omie i got dumbo on the phone he whats back his ears/
when i beat u homie try to fight back the tears/
dis bitch nigga put the factor in the fear/
ill rip his voice box den scream in ear/
man i dont give a damn bout nigga/
i stuck a pen in his lips so he wont look like jigga/

damn i fucked up the last line lol, i was thinkin you was fyreman, but if its any count ill redo it.......here it go
beat ya verse, im a rhyme bruisa, i come equipped wit heavy toys//
i done wet you up so bad, it put outcha fire......boy//

ok i dont really need that last line, i take that back lol.........yall get them votes in................................................ ......................

ayo its fyreboy u better call dat truck/
for i come down to atl fuck u up/
dis dude so ugly he couldnt ge a date if he flipped back his calender/
dude so young can even buy a beer/
aye homie i got dumbo on the phone he whats back his ears/
when i beat u homie try to fight back the tears/
dis bitch nigga put the factor in the fear/
ill rip his voice box den scream in ear/
man i dont give a damn bout nigga/
i rip em in his on basement like big tigger/

damn i did t twice shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!

calm down itll be ok lol.....we will call it even since i changed my last 2 lines.............you can keep your second verse.......ay if yall drop a vote on this give me a link and i will vote on your battle.......................................

ay yall dont sleep on this battle, vote on this, post a link, and i will vote on your battle.............how hard is it?

kuntryboi tooked this his verse was more complexed and he had better disses and flow.fyre work on ur flow and disses and u should also work on structure and make u lines a lil bit longer.


Vote:kuntryboi

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Kuntry boi cuz he didnt have stretched lines and his shit feel inplace good multi's punches and disses so


vote-kuntriboy

kuntryboi, punches were quite good but a lot of your spit wasnt directed at your opponent. Metas were quite nice. You verse flowed well.

fyreboy, you had some quite good punches, but mainly they were pretty weak. rhyme scheme was simple and off in some places (calender/beer). Flow was quite choppy. As with your opponent, you directed few punches at your opponent. ok metas & personals.

Although i dont think either of you came with that much heat, it was still pretty one sided.

Vote: kuntryboi (had less faults and harder punches).



C.Quip -vs- KaYNe
^ It would be much appreciated if you could vote fairly on this battle.

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if you vote on this i will vote on your battle just post a link..........dont sleep on this battle...........................................

look, it only takes 10 lines to beat a dude, ill let him choose//
(two choices) take it like a man, or eat ya food through a tube//
^^^good wordplay...decent punch
thats liquid food, straight to ya tummy, i will merk this dummy//
im laughin at ya name............... but aint a damn thang funny//
^^^lol...good punch.
my style mo flexible than gumby.... but you aint got no style//
since ya pops aint around, ima have ta punish you like my child//
^^^good wordplay, good punch.
.....tarheel, i scar and kill, put that heat to ya teeth, and burn ya grill//
i pop these pussies like valum pills, but i aint no substance abuser//
^^^ok punch...but no rhyme.
beat ya verse, im a rhyme bruisa, thats how i do it man//
i done wet you up so bad, they gonna call me the fireman//
^^^lol...nice punch...good personal.




ayo its fyreboy u better call dat truck/
for i come down to atl fuck u up/
^^^weak.
dis dude so ugly he couldnt ge a date if he flipped back his calender/
dude so young can even buy a beer/
^^^....um...fuckin weak
aye homie i got dumbo on the phone he whats back his ears/
when i beat u homie try to fight back the tears/
^^^eh...weak punch...at least it makes sense
dis bitch nigga put the factor in the fear/
ill rip his voice box den scream in ear/
^^^lol...ok wordplay
man i dont give a damn bout nigga/
i rip em in his on basement like big tigger/
^^^bad closer.

vote: kuntryboi

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kuntry boy took this without to much effort. He's shit was more complex, with harder punches. Other cat came on to soft and simple.

VOTE- kuntryboy

i took my time- so can you please return the fev and vote on
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103864

uppin aint nothin niggaz.....................i need to close this battle............................................ .................................................. ..........................................

Kuntryboi gets the victory here. Here's a breakdown:

look, it only takes 10 lines to beat a dude, ill let him choose//
(two choices) take it like a man, or eat ya food through a tube//
strong opener
thats liquid food, straight to ya tummy, i will merk this dummy//
im laughin at ya name............... but aint a damn thang funny//
filler, but good flow
my style mo flexible than gumby.... but you aint got no style//
since ya pops aint around, ima have ta punish you like my child//
a little played but not bad
.....tarheel, i scar and kill, put that heat to ya teeth, and burn ya grill//
i pop these pussies like valum pills, but i aint no substance abuser//
ok not bad
beat ya verse, im a rhyme bruisa, thats how i do it man//
i done wet you up so bad, they gonna call me the fireman//
I like this closer... like it better than the other one you posted actually


ayo its fyreboy u better call dat truck/
for i come down to atl fuck u up/
weak
dis dude so ugly he couldnt ge a date if he flipped back his calender/
dude so young can even buy a beer/
doesn't work, bad flow
aye omie i got dumbo on the phone he whats back his ears/
when i beat u homie try to fight back the tears/
What is this, David Spade rapping?
dis bitch nigga put the factor in the fear/
ill rip his voice box den scream in ear/
ok
man i dont give a damn bout nigga/
i stuck a pen in his lips so he wont look like jigga/
bad closer

I think kboi took it in every category.


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103093
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103069

punches k: .....tarheel, i scar and kill, put that heat to ya teeth, and burn ya grill//
metas k: pop these pussies like valum pills, but i aint no substance abuser//
personals k: beat ya verse, im a rhyme bruisa, thats how i do it man//
i done wet you up so bad, they gonna call me the fireman//
overall i gotta go wit kuntry