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Dixie Normous vs. Bombz
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post as soon as possible..I dont have all day..well I do..but I want my win asap.. umm..no changin yo avy,sig,member profile or anything else..I'm tired of hoes doin' that.. g'luck:thumbup: |
aww..fuck it..this is the last time..
Bombz Manly?....naw...I can picture him gettin' his Ass Beat By His Husband/ His talent Still Hasn't Been Found..like them Weapons of Mass Dustruction/ Your nothin'.....Baby Boy.....I'll end up Fuckin' yo Moms like Ving Rhames/ And since you called me a Dixie Cup..I'll let her taste What remains;)/ You see the truth is..you're useless....*poof* kid..you're blowin' my buzz/ This nigga Bombz is all talk no action......no wonder he's a fuckin' Dud!!!/ Bombz beat Dixie?....ha!!!..I laugh at that...that'll be the day/ You think you're Pycho?..well watch me Fill Em' Up and take this Basket Case Away/ You soft like Bean Bags...he's easly able to to be roasted...he's from Boston/ Grab the Cannon and Nick this fool to prove him my Love's not Costin'/ My rap's complex..he couldn't drop Bombz if he was rollin' with Funk Flex/ Yo raps are so simple...I would have thought it was crayon text/ aw shit..I fell off at the end..I'm jus tryin to get the verse done..oh well..if I win..I win..if I lose..I lose..peace.. btw..funk flex is funk master the flex..the Dj..and he's always alkin' about he be droppin/ bombs on records or whatever.. I'll try to get a Mod to delete my mistakes..peace..and hurry up and post Bombz..dont got all day.. |
uppin this so Bombz can post his verse...
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uppin so this fag can post his verse..damn man..c'mon..I know you've seen this..or are you ducking?.
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This is an easy shipment, dispose and run this burden like erans,
With wishes the flow he dishes couldn't win it wit fairy god-parents, U Managed to buy a win but dawg my products aint on clearence, It's 'good' you showed, too bad ya skillz don't fit ya 'appear'ence, Pack a punch, fuq'a line I'll hit em so each one will feal misery, Ya image of victory is pretend, so I guess you'll come close based on creativity, Practice makes perfect, but to win he needs his battles rehearses, I know u aint ready but do you really need 3 verses? (up above), Dixie sucks so bad even feds like to watch me as I murder it, You stupid? It says 'U L.O.S.E!' don't act like u never heard of it!, This niggahs undefeated with 1 win and thinks he's godly, Defeated the worst em'cee on RB and felt like he won the lottery, Tested my skillz, I warned you, now u wanna bargan wit me? Nuked ya' text & took cease, I bet u wish u never bothered me! |
lmao..I told you..I kept messin up on my veres..becasue at first..the link didnt work..then..I tried to fix it..and instead of reposting it..I just quoted it..but then..it made my verse look all sloppy and uneven..so I just reposted it all together,,,lmao..good verse man....uppin this shit..
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nice battle
clean shit the dud line i didnt feel..but everything else was sik bombz...nice drop props ..... |
This was a clean battledxie u need to work on shortening ya barz
but i was feelin ya verse clean shit... Bombz This niggahs undefeated with 1 win and thinks he's godly, Defeated the worst em'cee on RB and felt like he won the lottery, Best bar an personals in the battle the whole time i wuz gunna vote for Dixie.. but that bar took it....all wuz even dixie had the best punch until i read that shit.. V-bomz no beed dix ..im voting honestly...If can do the same me an X |
aight^^..you cool..even tho we beefin that was an honest vote..uppin for more votes..uppin for more votes...
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Yo Dixie work on your structure and flow cos I found your verse terrible to read/recite, it would help you greatly cos I do see your punches in there. You can't fail that badly agianst a vet like bomz and he took advantage. Bomz won on struct, flow and punches.
Vote Bombz |
Bombz is wack , why u dont respond to my call out ..ten lines, man ..u took this battle, ..now lets battle..
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uppin this shit, stop talkin' shit newb, thats what happened to Dixie, and now look what he did.....
Uppin!!!!!!....................................... ........... |
bombz aint nutthin but a bitch,,, i got 10 dollers says this nigga aint eva touched a pussy,,, i willin ta bet its cause he likes it in the tooshi
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bigga nigga
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im glad i got to post my vote b4 bombz won...lol
but ne way i gotta give it to dixie here..... dixie's line that did it for me: You soft like Bean Bags...he's easly able to to be roasted...he's from Boston/ (FOR THOSE OF U WHO DONT KNOW WHAT WORD PLAY IS THIS IS IT!!! [BEAN BAGS....BAKED BEANS...... ROASTED.....BOSTON BAKED BEANS.] BOMBZ HAD SOME HOT LINES TO: This is an easy shipment, dispose and run this burden like erans, With wishes the flow he dishes couldn't win it wit fairy god-parents, (i fthe rest of bombz lines were this hot he would have easily took this) vote: dixie check my sig for my battles |
damn nice verse by both of yall i enjoyed reading this battle
Flow- tie punchlines- dixie (the weapons of mass destructions line and your other punches why you took this category) metas-neither really creativity of disses- Dixie Overall verse consistensy- dixie VOTE -DIXIE both of yall had nice ass verses.. however with dixies verse.. i just saw more punchlines that made me say ooh and ahh..bombz you had a pretty good verse.. but dixies verse just had better disses |
Bombz got wordplay, punches, and structure, so it's all Bombz on this battle so my vote goes 2 Bombz
Vote=Bombz |
Bombz wins this battle with pure effort.
I give you guys a tie in nearly every aspect, the both of you had a decent flow, the structure was okay and I liked the punches and personals. I goota give the battle to Bombz though because he sustained his flow throughout the drop and he had excellent multi's. Good battle boys.. I vote.....You vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103997 |
structure: dixie
opener: dixie closer: dixie punches: dixie flow: dixie humour: dixie vote: bombz.......... he waz rite on da spot....had good flow.....dixie no hate...but u gotta werk on it a lil'...i shuldnt b talkin but o wellz.....propz 2 both....good battle....but i waz feelin bombz shyt...no hate.....*~1~* |
alright goes out to bombz cuz it had a lot better flow and structure and the punches were a tie. plus dixie is full of himself but that dont make me vote against him just a word of advice u can brag when u beat a vet (not that i have) even tho i should have beat theprophet777 if yall wanna check that shit out
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